Gabby C. Google Sites Peer Feedback 2020 - 2021 by Gabriella Capece https://padlet.com/27gcapece/5aspdqa6yaq2ynoo Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2021-01-05 15:05:09 UTC 2021-06-18 15:07:02 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Apple.png 2 stars and a wish 27klowe1 https://padlet.com/27gcapece/5aspdqa6yaq2ynoo/wish/1079185731 I liked all the inner thoughts you used I thought it made the story better. I also like how you described yourself and your outfit. I wish you had described how you two became friends more, it would have made it better.]]> 2021-01-12 16:04:27 UTC https://padlet.com/27gcapece/5aspdqa6yaq2ynoo/wish/1079185731 2 Stars and a Wish 27mhuber https://padlet.com/27gcapece/5aspdqa6yaq2ynoo/wish/1513638686 One thing that I really liked about your essay, is that you not only showed all the downsides to having an early school start time, but you also explained how this issue could be fixed by pushing the start time to a little later in the day. I thought it was great that you told the reader that there is a solution and that there is a way to fix this issue, instead of just telling the reader it needs to be fixed and giving them no solution to the problem. Another thing I really liked about your essay is that when you were making up scenarios of children waking up for school in the morning, you added lots of detail about what they are thinking and how they feel about getting ready which I think was really important to add. One which that I have for you is to just be careful with the words like “I, me you” and to make sure that those get taken out (unless they are in a quote) because I noticed in your zinger you used the word “you” like you were talking to the reader. Overall I loved your essay!


]]> 2021-05-11 14:45:36 UTC https://padlet.com/27gcapece/5aspdqa6yaq2ynoo/wish/1513638686 Two Stars and a Wish Haidyn_B https://padlet.com/27gcapece/5aspdqa6yaq2ynoo/wish/1614491885 Hai Gabby, One star that I have for you is that you have an amazing backstory and are very descriptive. I liked that you put the detail that you teeth will get smaller until they explode 🤯. Another star I have for you is that I liked how you have a little dialogue into that last slide. It really brought the story to life. One wish I have for you is to check your spelling and grammar. Overall it was a great story!
From for bestie,
Haidyn 🍋 
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