https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm Made with whimsy en-us 2021-06-08 18:57:13 UTC 2025-04-24 10:43:38 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1595573063 What make a good personal narrative is the author ]]> 2021-06-09 12:32:52 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1595573063 ijordan9 https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1595573230 what i think what made it good was how interesting was the title and how you can just picture whats happening through out the story]]> 2021-06-09 12:32:56 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1595573230 butterflyz_ari https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1595578726 What makes this a good story is that it’s interesting that the narrator added lots of detail like if it was a real life movie or real life events, I would like to read more and I would want to figure more about this boy and his past.]]> 2021-06-09 12:35:40 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1595578726 https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1595612388 What makes a good personal narrative is the author adding more examples to the story and making the characters in the story to talk. ]]> 2021-06-09 12:50:10 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1595612388 mingram30 https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1595622217 I believe what made it a good personal narrative was how realistic it was, and how specific the details were. There were a lot of metaphors and every character had their own unique personality which brought the story together. ]]> 2021-06-09 12:54:14 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1595622217 https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1595626903 He good brother because he stayed his sister and brother ]]> 2021-06-09 12:56:03 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1595626903 https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1595627530 I think what make the story worth reading is it has a lot of offer and its real life and I kind if want to find what happens and I am kind of interested in the characters the story is interesting in my opinion.]]> 2021-06-09 12:56:18 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1595627530 https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1595628689 what makes it a good story is that there older brother took the time out of his day to acutally didnt leave them at home alone with toys and food and tv he didnt complain he sat there and watched his sibblings ]]> 2021-06-09 12:56:47 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1595628689 https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1595629118 Some of the thing i noticed that made the story a good story was that in the story it made it clear on who the character were, what the setting was. Also in some parts it showed the character was thinking to themselves but letting the reader know]]> 2021-06-09 12:56:57 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1595629118 https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1595630213 What makes this a good story it showed a lot of detail.]]> 2021-06-09 12:57:25 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1595630213 ggarcia230 https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1595630608 What makes a good story is the plot and the characters. If the plot is fun to read many people will read it and enjoy it. Having some back story is also fun so we know things that happened and how it impacted the future. The characters help by showing some action and many other things]]> 2021-06-09 12:57:34 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1595630608 wvinanzaca https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1595636049 What makes "The Day I didn't go to the Pool" a good personal narrative because the story explains what is going on.]]> 2021-06-09 12:59:42 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1595636049 https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1595637863 i think he is brave to safe is sister and brother and he good brother and he did the step so he can be safe with his brother and sister and he happy that he still have his sister and brother]]> 2021-06-09 13:00:23 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1595637863 yvasquez19 https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1595639571  What makes this a good story is that narrative explain everything in a hole paragraph and he added a lots of character and he also it was really realistic bc they aren’t that dramatic like other stories ]]> 2021-06-09 13:01:04 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1595639571 ecolon28 https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1595642833 something that I liked and I'm going to use is how he details the story.]]> 2021-06-09 13:02:16 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1595642833 jadamesespinal https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1596212798 What makes a good story is  the charater ]]> 2021-06-09 16:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1596212798 skhan99 https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1596227095 What makes a good personal narrative is the structure of the story and the dialogue and details. After reading "The Day I didn't go to the Pool" I noticed that the author gave a little background information and plenty of detail. Also, character is the most important thing to a story because without people in the story it just makes it boring and plain. ]]> 2021-06-09 16:17:13 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1596227095 jholley13 https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1596386250 what makes this story a good personal trait is it explains what's actually happening to the people and it gives good information . ]]> 2021-06-09 17:15:07 UTC https://padlet.com/kgallina1/57yual67vbrc0hqm/wish/1596386250