Examples of Descriptive Feedback by Marianne Whittaker https://padlet.com/19493/descriptivefeedback Please post an example of descriptive feedback. Include an image, and a link if you can. Click + in the bottom corner to add your post. en-us 2022-01-16 16:39:56 UTC 2023-03-19 22:20:32 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f99a.png Grade 9 Blow dry https://padlet.com/19493/descriptivefeedback/wish/2496440497 Specific expectation: demonstrate proper techniques to create volume and smoothness.  I give continuous verbal feedback, for example: positioning of blow dryer and round brush; proper pulling of hair ]]> 2023-02-27 14:27:12 UTC https://padlet.com/19493/descriptivefeedback/wish/2496440497 Mathematics-Factoring https://padlet.com/19493/descriptivefeedback/wish/2496503602 Your procedure has a few errors. what are some strategies we can use to check our work for accuracy?


Your solution is correct, are there other ways we can solve this problem?


Your solution is correct but not enough work is shown. What are some ways you can show me your problem solving process?
]]> 2023-02-27 15:03:15 UTC https://padlet.com/19493/descriptivefeedback/wish/2496503602 English as a Second Language https://padlet.com/19493/descriptivefeedback/wish/2496561035 Feedback should be ongoing and consistent. I like to utilize every teachable moment as best as I can. Luckily, during our ESL class I have many opportunities to do so. Feedback is often provided during class discussions (i.e. use of tense, proper pronouns, etc.), journal writing and review (with teacher edits, writing suggestions, and peer edits), and through tasks with small exit tickets/ feedback reflection forms. I have attached a sample feedback form for reference. A feedback form presented in such a way often acts as a form of self-evaluation for students, however, also allows room for teacher input and contribution. :)  ]]> 2023-02-27 15:34:38 UTC https://padlet.com/19493/descriptivefeedback/wish/2496561035 PE Focus course https://padlet.com/19493/descriptivefeedback/wish/2496951578 This is the starting point for students to scaffold their knowledge. This is followed by a group demonstration of what the students have learned that involves reinforcement of the strengths that they communicate both in words and in movement.]]> 2023-02-27 19:50:13 UTC https://padlet.com/19493/descriptivefeedback/wish/2496951578 Lab Reminders https://padlet.com/19493/descriptivefeedback/wish/2496956162 Lab Rating Scale

1) Communication
a) Use of English 0 1 2
- uses correct spelling and grammar
- uses proper punctuation
- uses the appropriate style for labs (no “I”, “we”, “our”, etc.), passive past tense

b) Format 0 1 2 3
- uses consistent format
- format appears in the correct order
- presents data appropriately, uses SI units
- uses full mathematical sentences and GRASP format

2) Inquiry
a) Hypothesis 0 1
- generates a valid and insightful hypothesis
b) Planning 0 1 2
- develops an appropriate and numbered procedure
- planning is complete and efficient
c) Performing/Recording 0 1 2 3
- all parts of the procedure are followed competently
- safety procedures are followed routinely
- records relevant data in an organized and skilful manner
- makes sufficient and accurate qualitative observations
d) Analysis of Data 0 1 2
- provides a sufficient and rich analysis of the data
- draws valid and insightful conclusion based on the data
- the valid conclusion answers the purpose
e) Technique 0 1 2 3
- uses apparatus and materials safely and competently
- demonstrates all technical skills

3) Applications/Making Connections 0 1 2 3
- make a real world connection with a given concept from the lab
- develop a real world connection with a concept from the lab
- this connection is to be specific not general


]]> 2023-02-27 19:53:06 UTC https://padlet.com/19493/descriptivefeedback/wish/2496956162 Feedback Opportunities https://padlet.com/19493/descriptivefeedback/wish/2497109770 Backwards Design - Multiple Steps

Fit to Category - Intentional Scafolding

Published Assignments - Peer Feedback]]> 2023-02-27 22:30:51 UTC https://padlet.com/19493/descriptivefeedback/wish/2497109770 English 11 https://padlet.com/19493/descriptivefeedback/wish/2497242578 The shared image reflects some descriptive feedback for an essay submission for ENG11U.

The comment addresses a few items: analysis quality and passage integration.

I highlighted a particular point in the essay that can be regarded as an example of a better analysis for the student’s reference.

In English, descriptive feedback is not only critical but it is also a standard evaluating practice that students need to see as much as possible. Though it takes time to do this for all students, it is very much necessary for their writing formation.]]> 2023-02-28 01:22:45 UTC https://padlet.com/19493/descriptivefeedback/wish/2497242578 https://padlet.com/19493/descriptivefeedback/wish/2501459311 Outlining Criteria & Expectations with students - At the beginning of class, establishing criteria with students and how they will demonstrate their learning.

Conferencing - Meeting with students as they progress through an assessment to provide descriptive feedback on their assessments.]]> 2023-03-02 17:23:19 UTC https://padlet.com/19493/descriptivefeedback/wish/2501459311 I don't have a fancy example, but... https://padlet.com/19493/descriptivefeedback/wish/2505702739 I do try to be as constructive as possible both with rough work and good copies so that students know what they did well (& why), and what they can improve upon]]> 2023-03-06 19:27:51 UTC https://padlet.com/19493/descriptivefeedback/wish/2505702739 Music https://padlet.com/19493/descriptivefeedback/wish/2505728605 Students are encouraged to concentrate on “continuing progress” rather than the idea of “playing to perfection”.  A fundamental part of my teaching is encouraging students to make mistakes and learn how to recover from them, rather than seeing mistakes as failures. This is best demonstrated when playing an instrument as mistakes are guaranteed. Coping strategies are developed throughout the semester with consistent daily  feedback routine based weekly performance evaluations, and CPTs and Exams following the same routine.

]]> 2023-03-06 19:49:05 UTC https://padlet.com/19493/descriptivefeedback/wish/2505728605 Timing https://padlet.com/19493/descriptivefeedback/wish/2505766685 Timing of my feedback provides students with opportunities to use the information while they are still learning and practicing the requisite knowledge and skills]]> 2023-03-06 20:20:23 UTC https://padlet.com/19493/descriptivefeedback/wish/2505766685 French 441446 https://padlet.com/19493/descriptivefeedback/wish/2505768617 After an oral presentation, giving students direct feedback immediately to allow them to improve their presentation skills and pronunciation ]]> 2023-03-06 20:22:22 UTC https://padlet.com/19493/descriptivefeedback/wish/2505768617 ENG4U https://padlet.com/19493/descriptivefeedback/wish/2505769426 A recent writing exercise focused almost exclusively on correct use of MLA format--a "manageable amount of feedback" was provided to students as a result...

This exercise followed a "diagnostic" writing assignment in which this skill had been identified as an area of potential weakness for many students... ]]> 2023-03-06 20:23:08 UTC https://padlet.com/19493/descriptivefeedback/wish/2505769426 English Department https://padlet.com/19493/descriptivefeedback/wish/2505770351 Feedback includes three components: what was done well, what needs improvement, and specific suggestions for how to improve. 

E.g. Essay: 
Positive - Overall, your structure is strong. Excellent use of paragraphs and transitions.

Improvement suggestions: remember to review MLA format and proofread your work to avoid losing marks on spelling and grammar. ]]> 2023-03-06 20:24:00 UTC https://padlet.com/19493/descriptivefeedback/wish/2505770351 Advantage Course https://padlet.com/19493/descriptivefeedback/wish/2506910093 Timely Descriptive feedback - Once a week students write a paragraph where they must edit themselves, then have a peer edit, then finally have the teacher edit. The sentences get edited multiple times before the paragraph is ready to be handed in. This feedback is immediate and has been VERY effective in improving grammar and sentence structure.]]> 2023-03-07 13:41:35 UTC https://padlet.com/19493/descriptivefeedback/wish/2506910093