Paraphrasing by KingstonVLE https://padlet.com/jcotis/578y2ldn3ama Find a short extract from something you have read for an academic subject and paraphrase it here, with the original below it. en-us 2016-08-03 15:11:48 UTC 2026-01-22 20:30:33 UTC hello@padlet.com Joe Kneale jcotis https://padlet.com/jcotis/578y2ldn3ama/wish/1891507202 Original extract
In England, only 37% of adults aged 16 or over travel actively (walk, cycle, scoot or wheel to get from place to place) at least twice a month. Exciting ways to encourage more people to travel actively for the sake of population and planetary health. need to be found.
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Just over a third of adults in England travel actively every two weeks. It is necessary for population and planetary health that people are given more engaging incentives to be active.

]]> 2021-11-15 14:58:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jcotis/578y2ldn3ama/wish/1891507202 Hasham https://padlet.com/jcotis/578y2ldn3ama/wish/1891525067 This article writes about big tech companies are every where and is part of our lives like Amazon, Facebook, Apple and Google

Good, but the structure is still very similar.]]> 2021-11-15 15:04:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jcotis/578y2ldn3ama/wish/1891525067 Mahir Ahmed https://padlet.com/jcotis/578y2ldn3ama/wish/1891540163 Original extract
This paper analyzes a corpus of segments from the Tucker Carlson Tonight program concerning “big tech” (focusing specifically on Google) and contextualizes this analysis within the political history of American media and technology regulation. Conservatives have long lamented the so-called liberal bias in media

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This paper analyzes a corpus of portions from the Tucker Carlson This evening program concerning “big tech” (centering particularly on Google) and contextualizes this investigation inside the political history of American media and innovation direction. Preservationists have long deplored the so-called generous inclination in media

The meaning here is exactly the same, but the words are too similar. Lamented is a very good synonym, but you should also change the structure. For example, 'the apparent left-wing bias in media has been much lamented by conservatives'.


]]> 2021-11-15 15:10:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jcotis/578y2ldn3ama/wish/1891540163 who was elected to secretary of the FA at the age of 28, devised the idea of an international competition, inaugurating an annual Scotland-England fixture. In 1870 and 1871 he placed advertisements in Edinburgh and Glasgow newspapers, requesting players for an international between the two countries. https://padlet.com/jcotis/578y2ldn3ama/wish/1891555826 2021-11-15 15:15:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jcotis/578y2ldn3ama/wish/1891555826 Carmelia golbancarmelia https://padlet.com/jcotis/578y2ldn3ama/wish/1891562985 Why will digital retailing continue to grow so fast? Why won’t it peak sometime soon, or even implode the way it did the last time around? Anyone who has shopped extensively online knows at least part of the answer. The selection is vast yet remarkably easy to search. 


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Why will digital retailing continue to expand at such a rapid pace? 
Why isn't it reaching its apex soon, or perhaps imploding like it did the last time? 
Anyone who has done a lot of internet shopping understands at least a portion of the answer. 
The collection is extensive, yet the search process is remarkably simple. 
Your use of synonyms is really good (except try and find one for implode, if possible), but try to reorganise the information a bit more. Can you change the structure of these sentences a bit?



]]> 2021-11-15 15:17:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jcotis/578y2ldn3ama/wish/1891562985 Hasham https://padlet.com/jcotis/578y2ldn3ama/wish/1891566829 Original extract
This article discuses big tech companies are every where and is running our lives like Facebook, Amazon, Google and Apple]]> 2021-11-15 15:19:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jcotis/578y2ldn3ama/wish/1891566829 Aarti https://padlet.com/jcotis/578y2ldn3ama/wish/1891581039 Multimedia is a form of communication that combines different content forms such as text, audio, images, animations, or video into a single interactive presentation, in contrast to traditional mass media which featured little to no interaction from users, such as printed material or audio recordings.


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Text, audio, images, animations, or video can be combined into a multimedia presentation, rather than traditional mass media which required little or no involvement from the users, such as printed material or recorded sounds.

This is pretty good, Aarti. The first bit is differently structured, which is good and you have used some synonyms. However, I would recommend changing more words to make it more different to the original. 'Traditional mass media', for example.

]]> 2021-11-15 15:24:04 UTC https://padlet.com/jcotis/578y2ldn3ama/wish/1891581039 Elias https://padlet.com/jcotis/578y2ldn3ama/wish/1891588434 original text
Opinions by experts on whether the breakup of Big Tech is a valuable and viable solution range from one end of the spectrum to another. Despite strong advocacy by some to break up Big Tech companies as the best solution to the competition issues present in the technology sector
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view by experts on should dismental (dismantle) the big tech is a better and viable solution ran scope from one end of the spectrum to one more . unfortunately powerful advocacy by some to broke up big tech society  as the  greatest solution  to the contesting topic present in the technology sector

I think dismantle here should be a noun (the dismantling of...). Otherwise, it's quite a good paraphrase. Change 'one end of the spectrum' and it would be improved, too.]]> 2021-11-15 15:26:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jcotis/578y2ldn3ama/wish/1891588434 redwan https://padlet.com/jcotis/578y2ldn3ama/wish/1891592983 One solution would be to stop companies getting too big in the first place. Timothy Simcoe, an associate
professor of strategy and innovation, believes we should pay more attention to
Big Tech mergers before they happen. Take Facebook and its acquisition of
Instagram in 2012  & whatsapp in 2014

A solution is to prevent corporations from becoming too popular in the first place. We should pay greater attention to Big Tech acquisitions before they happen, according to Timothy Simcoe, an associate professor of strategy and innovation. Consider Facebook's purchases of Instagram in 2012 and WhatsApp in 2014.

Some good use of synonyms, but there are also lots of identical words here. Try to change the structure more. For example, 'more attention should be paid to...' or 'more focus should be given to...', Consider the acquisition of Instagram and Whatsapp...'


]]> 2021-11-15 15:28:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jcotis/578y2ldn3ama/wish/1891592983 Nigel Boliti https://padlet.com/jcotis/578y2ldn3ama/wish/1891606966 Original quote by Napoleon Hill
"The man who does more than he is paid for will soon be paid for more than he does".

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Anyone with a set wage who is willing to do more than required  will soon be  paid with a greater return of the proportion of income  because of his or her diligence in their work.

Good!]]> 2021-11-15 15:32:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jcotis/578y2ldn3ama/wish/1891606966