https://padlet.com/qrv6rfap5x/55x31afmc15t1y2m Pairs. Do the exercise on narration on page 96 - talk about 1 and 2, but write 3 (two versions) here and talk about 4 and 5. en-us 2020-06-24 14:19:33 UTC 2020-06-24 14:19:34 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Removelove.png https://padlet.com/qrv6rfap5x/55x31afmc15t1y2m/wish/638810882 3. person objective narrator

"Are you serious?" 
She lets go of Max's hand. 
"So, you..." She shakes her head and looks briefly, for a millisecond, at his crotch. "What do you have?"
His cheeks turn red. "Um..."
"Never mind," Sylvie says, holding up her hands. "Forget I asked. That was... stupid." 
He opens his mouth, but says nothing. She backs away on the bed, minutely and Max looks distraught. Sylvie gets off the bed and wonders around the room with her neck bowed. 
"Wait listen." Max stands up and walks towards her.
 "Please," he pleads. 


]]> 2020-06-24 14:19:33 UTC https://padlet.com/qrv6rfap5x/55x31afmc15t1y2m/wish/638810882 https://padlet.com/qrv6rfap5x/55x31afmc15t1y2m/wish/638810884 "Are you serious?" she says
Sylvia releases Max' hand
"So, you...what do you have?"
Max blushes. 
"Never mind...forget i asked. That was...stupid"
Sylvia distances herself from Max and they are both silent. After a while Sylvia stands up and wanders. Max joins her "Wait...please" he says.


]]> 2020-06-24 14:19:33 UTC https://padlet.com/qrv6rfap5x/55x31afmc15t1y2m/wish/638810884 https://padlet.com/qrv6rfap5x/55x31afmc15t1y2m/wish/638810886 "Are you serious" 
She lets go of his hands. 
"So, you" She shakes her head and looks briefly, for a millisecond, at my crotch. "What do you have?"
His cheeks turn red. "Um..."
"Never mind," Sylvie says. 
"Forget I asked. That was...stupid."
Max opens his mouth but he does not say anything. She's backing away on the bed trying to say something. Sylvia gets off the bed and wanders away a little in the room, her neck bowed. ]]> 2020-06-24 14:19:33 UTC https://padlet.com/qrv6rfap5x/55x31afmc15t1y2m/wish/638810886 https://padlet.com/qrv6rfap5x/55x31afmc15t1y2m/wish/638810887 'Are you serious?'
She lets go of hs hands. 'So...you?' She shakes her head and looks briefly, for a millisecond at his crotch. 'What do you have?'. His cheeks turn red. 'Um...'
'Never mind', sylvie says, holding her hands up like she doesn't want to know. 'Forget I asked'. That was...stupid'. He opens his mouth, but does not say anything. She's backing away on the bed, minutely. He has told her. She knows. There is a leak in the seal of his secret. Sylvie knows, and she is backing away, standing up, trying to say something. Sylvie gets off the bed and wanders away a little in the room, her neck bowed, thinking. 'Wait, listen'. He stands up too, and comes towards her. 'Please,' he pleads with her.]]> 2020-06-24 14:19:33 UTC https://padlet.com/qrv6rfap5x/55x31afmc15t1y2m/wish/638810887 mari19a4 https://padlet.com/qrv6rfap5x/55x31afmc15t1y2m/wish/638810888 3. person limited narrator

"Are you serious?"
She lets go of his hands and he literally feels his heart breaking.
"So, you..." She shakes her head and looks briefly, for a millisecond, at his crotch. "What do you have?"
He gelt his cheeks turn red. "Um..."
"Never mind," Sylvie says, holding her hands up like she doesn't want to know. "Forget I asked. That was...stupid."
He opens his moth but there's nothing he can say. She's backing away on the bed, minutely, trying to find the words to hell him to go, and he realises what he's done. He's told her. She knows. There is a leak in the seal of his secret. Sylvie know and she's backing away, standing up, struggling to say anything at all and she's going to talk to people. She's going to talk to people at school about me and everyone will know. Everyone will know. Every day he's there, everyone will know and look at him differently and talk about him. Sylvie gets off the bed and wanders away a little in the room, her neck bowed, thinking earnestly.
"Wait, listen." He stands up too, and comes towards her. "Please," he pleads with her. 

]]> 2020-06-24 14:19:33 UTC https://padlet.com/qrv6rfap5x/55x31afmc15t1y2m/wish/638810888 https://padlet.com/qrv6rfap5x/55x31afmc15t1y2m/wish/638810889 1. We will see the story from the perspective of a character. We can only see the world through them, their opinions and feelings will influence the way we perceive the story. 
2. When the narration switches so does our perception: When Max is narrating he is sympathetic we see his fears his worries his anxieties etc. but when Sylvie is narrating we suddenly see things from her perspective her own surprise and shock. As an example of this: When Max storms out towards the end of the story he is relativly usympathetic because we follow Sylvie he runs out from her, if we were to see things from Maxs point of view he would 

3rd person omniscient narrator
"Are you serious?"
"So, you ..." She shakes her head and looks briefly, for a millisecond, at his crotch. She says, "what do you have?". Max feels his cheeks turning red and replies "Um...". "Never mind" Sylvie says, holding her hands up like she doesn't want to know. "Forget I asked. That was stupid". Max opens his mouth but there is nothing he can say. She's backing away on the bed, minutely, trying to find the words to tell Max to go.

]]> 2020-06-24 14:19:33 UTC https://padlet.com/qrv6rfap5x/55x31afmc15t1y2m/wish/638810889 https://padlet.com/qrv6rfap5x/55x31afmc15t1y2m/wish/638810890 3rd person omniscient narrator:

"Are you serious?" She lets go of his hands and he literally feels his heart breaking. Sylvie feels shocked as she stutters, "so, you..." she shakes her head and looks briefly, for a millisecond, at his hicrtch. with a worried look on her face, she continues, "What do you have?" Max feels the blood rushing to his cheeks and replies "Um..." "Never mind," sylvie says, holding her hands up like she doesn't want to know. "forget i asked. That was...  stupid". Max opens his mouth but there's nothing he can say. She's backing away on the bed, minutely, as tries to cope with the news. Max feels vulnerabel and thinks to himself, "I've told her. She knows. There is a leak in seal of my secret". The tension in the room is so thick, you could cut it with a knife. Neither of them know what to say. immediately the worst case scenarios run through max's head like a cold Sylvie gets off the bed and wanders away a little in the room, her neck bowed, thinking earnestly. “wait, listen.” Max stands up too, and comes towards her. “please,” he pleads with her.


3rd person objective narrator 
"Are you serious". Sylvie lets go of Max's hands. "So you…" Sylvie says while she is holding up her hands. "forget i asked ]]> 2020-06-24 14:19:33 UTC https://padlet.com/qrv6rfap5x/55x31afmc15t1y2m/wish/638810890 magn4931 https://padlet.com/qrv6rfap5x/55x31afmc15t1y2m/wish/638810891 3rd person limited narrator:
“Are you serious?” Sylvie lets go of his hands and he literally feels his heart breaking. “So, you…” She shakes her head and looks briefly, for a millisecond, at Max’ crotch. “What do you have?” He can feel his cheeks turn red. “Um…” “Never mind,” Sylvie says, holding her hands up like she doesn’t want to know. “Forget I asked. That was … stupid.”
Max opens his mouth but there’s nothing he can say. She’s backing away on the bed, minutely, trying to find the words to tell Max to go, and he realises what he’s done. He’s told her. She knows. There is a leak in the seal of his secret, Max thinks. Sylvie knows and she’s backing away, standing up, struggling to say anything at all and she’s going to talk to people. Max fears that she’s going to talk to people at school about him and everyone will know. Everyone will know. Every day Max is there, everyone will know and look at him differently and talk about him. That’s what he fears.
 Sylvie gets off the bed and wanders away a little in the room, her neck bowed, thinking earnestly.

3rd person objective narrator
“Are you serious?” Sylvie lets go of his hands. “So, you…” She shakes her head and looks briefly, for a millisecond, at his crotch. “What do you have?” His cheeks turn red. “Um…” “Never mind,” Sylvie says, holding her hands up. “Forget I asked. That was … stupid.”
 Max opens his mouth but doesn’t say anything. She’s backing away on the bed, and says nothing. Sylvie gets off the bed and wanders away a little in the room, her neck bowed.  ]]> 2020-06-24 14:19:33 UTC https://padlet.com/qrv6rfap5x/55x31afmc15t1y2m/wish/638810891 https://padlet.com/qrv6rfap5x/55x31afmc15t1y2m/wish/638810892 3.person omniscient
 "Are you serious?"
Sylvie is confused and lets go of Max's hand, making his heart break.
"So you..." Sylvie shakes her head and Max feels her looking down at his crotch for a millisecond. "What do you have?"
Max's cheeks turn red. "Um..."
"Never mind" Sylvie says, feeling all the more confused and distraught. She throws her hands in the air, signalling that she doesn't want to know more. "Forget I asked. That was... Stupid."
Max opens up his mouth as though he wants to say something, but he has nothing to say. Making Sylvie slowly back away from him, wanting to create some space for her to breathe.]]> 2020-06-24 14:19:33 UTC https://padlet.com/qrv6rfap5x/55x31afmc15t1y2m/wish/638810892 https://padlet.com/qrv6rfap5x/55x31afmc15t1y2m/wish/638810893 3rd person limited narrator
1. 'Are you serious?'
She lets go of his hands i he litterally feels his heart is breaking. 'So, you...' She shakes her head and look briefly, for a millisecond, at his crotch. 'What do you have?'. He can feel his cheeks turn red. 'Um...'
'Never mind' Sylvie says, holding her hands up like she doesn't want to know. 'Forget I asked. That was... stupid'. He opens his mouth but there is nothing he can say. She's backing away on the bed, minutely, trying to find the words to tell Max to make him go and he realises what he has done. He has told her. She knows. There is a leak in the seal of his secret. Sylvie knows and she's backing away, standing up, struggling to say anything at all and she's going to talk to people. She's going to talk to people at school about him and everyone will know. Everyone will know. Every day he's there, everyone will know and look at him differently and talk about him. Sylvie gets off the bed and wanders away a little in the room, her neck bowed, thinking earnestly. 'Wait, listen.' He stands up too, and come towards her. 'Please,' He pleads with her.]]> 2020-06-24 14:19:33 UTC https://padlet.com/qrv6rfap5x/55x31afmc15t1y2m/wish/638810893