Lilly by Jeff Edge

Jesse

Jesse_Koeppel — 2018-03-07 21:45:49 UTC

I like that nightshade is a flower and the name fits the dark theme of how the game and story works. I like that you have different classes so people can adapt to different gameplay styles. i like that there are comedic names like poof cards, and how you use the roll of the dice to implement luck. l like that their are weird items and names to add more characteristics to the game like you can shoot cheese out of your mouth. the only thing i have is that the name doesn't fit the weird and quirkiness of the gameplay of the game. because the name nightshade is a deep name and doesn't fit the gameplay but fits the theme very well.

Jack Williams

2018-03-07 21:46:04 UTC

The poster looks amazing there is a lot of color fun picturse and there is a fun fant. The idea is very createtive and sounds really fun. I like the idea that different people have different abilities. I like that the colors you chose go very well together. The game cards sound very creative and fun/funny. Like the midivile theam. The tiny keys are very cute but the propobility that they get lost under a couch or something is very high. Pieces are great!!!!!!!!

Gannon

2018-03-07 21:46:05 UTC

Name doesn’t fit with the objective or theme. Cool box and board. So confusing. I don’t understand how to play. And how to win.

Mr. Edge

jeff_edge — 2018-03-07 21:46:08 UTC

I love your presentation skills! This is how all presentations should start: the title, objective, and then a summary of the story of the game. I enjoyed the charisma you showed. Perfect!

The box looks nice, though it does look like something my nana might have stored in her closet.

The board looks fantastic, though I don't know if it matches up with the box. The board also seems a little too much like Candyland. I was looking for something a little more complex.

The creativity on this game is astounding. Nothing wrong with cheese.

Jake

jpoind — 2018-03-07 21:46:10 UTC

Caden

sargentoyeeherman — 2018-03-07 21:46:10 UTC

I like the name nightshade a lot. I like the team aspect. The narrative is really cool. I love how you have to use a lot of imagination. The board is so cool. I love your box. I love the poof cards they add a funny aspect and I like how the poof cards all have to do with cheese.

Oliver

oliver_benson — 2018-03-07 21:46:11 UTC

The box looks great
the box looks a little to floral
The board is a bit messy
nightshade is a great name
good storyline
castle keys are a good idea
first one that has teams
seems replayable
I like that you can select your own profile/character
poof cards?
the concept seems well thought out and interesting
floating cheese is something I have never hear of before. Can you get me some?
the poster is kind of hard to read and comprehend
try to make your game poster more clear
it seems a LOT like candy land

4/5 stars

Seth

2018-03-07 21:46:12 UTC

• Box looks amazing
• good story
• interesting objective
• good idea for the character cards
• keys look a little small what if I lose them?
• can i get some of that cheese???

fintan

FintanRH — 2018-03-07 21:46:16 UTC

cool name
nice story
cool concept
beautiful box
nice board
good cards
cheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese

first, cool. i should play. second, cheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese.
third, needs cheeeeeeseburgers.
fourth, cool cards. fifth, just good game.
if you add cheeseburgers, tell me.
and cheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese.
tasty

Kane M

2018-03-07 21:46:19 UTC

Nice start Its is like a fantastic game and those game pop out to me more that anything else(besides horror games). The art work is amazing it is one of a kind and I would play this almost any rainy day or any other day. Shot a stream of cheese in someones mouth....... niiiiiiiiiiiice. I like it and would play it.

Maya Sasi

MayaSasi — 2018-03-07 21:46:19 UTC

Very nice introduction, really energized. The idea is very creative. The box is really nice and looks professional. I like that it's teams. The board looks really nice, the drawings are very good. Is a team of players or is it a team of characters? Do you get to choose your characters? Can you use your characters powers to help heal the queen? The characters are really nice

Riley

rhoffm — 2018-03-07 21:46:20 UTC

Love the art on the poster! LOVE YOUR ENTHUSIASM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THE CHEESE CARD!!!!! Love the idea!!!!! I had a blast listening to you!!!!!

SELMA

stimpe — 2018-03-07 21:46:20 UTC

CANT READ THE POSTER!

The game sounds super awesome, but you might want to make the poster so that people can easily read it.Your presentation is super funny, like the way you explained it. It made me want to play this game.
I like the box outline.

Noa

2018-03-07 21:46:24 UTC

I love your story behind this. I really really really like your board! I like how you have a lot of energy when your precenting. I love how you wrote the title.

bEaU baUmAN

2018-03-07 21:46:29 UTC

Good name. Bad description
Good game. I would play. Innovative. Looks and sounds professional. I AM THE CHEEZBURGR GOD OF THE LOLCATS I WUI SHOOT CHEEZ AT PPL

Maya samipur

2018-03-07 21:46:31 UTC

Love the colors of the board and the box. I like your background story of this game. The poster is a little hectic. What is ability tiles? i like the different places/lands on the board. I like your enthusiastic

Emma Grisham

egrish — 2018-03-07 21:46:33 UTC

Try not to say like to much.
How do you fit your board into your box.

Romi Cohen

rcohen7 — 2018-03-07 21:46:33 UTC

I like how she is explaining her game with confidence. I like cool and unique her game is.

Caedmon

2018-03-07 21:46:40 UTC

The art on the poster poster is great! The story is AWESOME!

The box is very eye catching and The gameplay sounds fantastic!

The board is awesome! I love how you made it look 3D-ish maybe it could have more colors and details in the background though

Julius Ellington

2018-03-07 21:46:42 UTC

I like the name so far. "Nightshade" it seems like a fun, creative name. Well not fun but creative. The way you're explaining the game actually makes me laugh. Keep that up. Ooh, Aah. It's sort of a gimmick. The box is really cool I like all the roses and flowers. I also like the game objective. It's almost like everyones else but different. But still.. cool. The board needs a little help but the box covers up for that. That was my favorite project yet. Wow.

Xoe

2018-03-07 21:46:42 UTC

I love how you are saying everything it makes me into it more and excited to listen! I would definitely play your game . I don’t really see anything that I don’t like about it . I love your board and poster . I love the flouting cheese! 😂 i like all the colors that you put on everything. How dose your board fit in your box ? Everything is so magical and fantastic! All the items are super well made . You really got me interested in your game I would but it . Good job 👍 I love your game ⭐️

Teagan Ryan

2018-03-07 21:46:46 UTC

Lilly’s box is beautiful and so is her poster. I really like her story because it goes well with the game. I lo

zaq

zbensi — 2018-03-07 21:46:48 UTC

The energy that you are putting forth I think will be really beneficial when it comes to the real board game expo.

Charlette

2018-03-07 21:47:07 UTC

I like the board it’s eye catching. The box looks amazing looks like you spent a lot of time on it. I like the idea. I like the poster it’s very vibrant and makes me want to go to your game and play it. The board looks phenomenal.

JOE

2018-03-07 21:47:08 UTC

Very interesting idea! I love it! Really nice job. I have not seen a lot of games like this.

I would add pictures on the final board to fill the empty space and decorate it.

I like the little pieces! Very cute and cool!

I love this cool and exciting game! (And the cheese)

Ruby

rrobin1 — 2018-03-07 21:47:20 UTC

I love the game title!!! The idea is awesome! I like how you were so enthusiastic.... This enthusiasm will get you a HUGE crowd. You were so funny, and We all loved it! ( sorry I didn't write more, I just have like nothing to suggest )

Colt

2018-03-07 21:48:28 UTC

I like the energy while she’s explaining it, the game sound intresting so far

Jake

jpoind — 2018-03-07 21:49:41 UTC

The way she talks is great she emphasises points by raising her voice or being sarcastic its great. And its so smart the way she is advertising her game and explaining everything without having them with her that is great bussiness woman. I also noticed that she has different types of cards a lot of them like poof cards for example and the name is great! I also like there is different zones that you cant go to like wizard down or like the sewer city (not sure what it was called but it was like the lizard thing). I also like there is different pieces that are really cool. I think she could improve by re designing the board.

Talia

sargentoyeeherman — 2018-03-07 21:52:02 UTC

I love how enthusiastic you are it makes it so much more fun and interesting I LOVE IT. You showing us your game very clearly and nicely. GREAT JOB!

Addison lee

2018-03-07 21:52:19 UTC

Very VERY clever. so much fun. would definitly buy.

Jacob

2022-02-10 20:15:37 UTC

Wow! this is just absolutely incredible I can not wait to succ your dick off. I want my dick in your ass so bad!! LOL!!!