https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca Final Draft: Character Creation Story en-us 2021-12-10 17:47:50 UTC 2022-02-24 22:47:13 UTC hello@padlet.com marknewman5 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945193680 2021-12-13 17:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945193680 marknewman5 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945196617 2021-12-13 17:55:21 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945196617 marknewman5 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945202735 2021-12-13 17:57:41 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945202735 marknewman5 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945204999 2021-12-13 17:58:30 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945204999 marknewman5 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945207674 2021-12-13 17:59:45 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945207674 marknewman5 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945208789 2021-12-13 18:00:17 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945208789 marknewman5 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945210310 2021-12-13 18:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945210310 marknewman5 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945211578 2021-12-13 18:01:35 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945211578 marknewman5 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945212963 2021-12-13 18:02:11 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945212963 marknewman5 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945214319 2021-12-13 18:02:43 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945214319 marknewman5 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945216513 2021-12-13 18:03:46 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945216513 marknewman5 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945217944 2021-12-13 18:04:26 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945217944 marknewman5 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945219025 2021-12-13 18:04:57 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945219025 marknewman5 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945220501 2021-12-13 18:05:34 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945220501 marknewman5 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945223258 2021-12-13 18:06:48 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945223258 marknewman5 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945224321 2021-12-13 18:07:18 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945224321 marknewman5 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945225230 2021-12-13 18:07:45 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945225230 marknewman5 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945226441 2021-12-13 18:08:17 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945226441 marknewman5 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945230503 2021-12-13 18:10:08 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945230503 marknewman5 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945244057 2021-12-13 18:15:38 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945244057 marknewman5 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945245335 2021-12-13 18:16:12 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945245335 marknewman5 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945246356 2021-12-13 18:16:39 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945246356 marknewman5 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945249428 2021-12-13 18:18:05 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945249428 marknewman5 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945252813 2021-12-13 18:19:40 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945252813 marknewman5 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945255049 2021-12-13 18:20:44 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945255049 marknewman5 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945256659 2021-12-13 18:21:28 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1945256659 marknewman5 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952255962 I liked the action words like, gross, smelly - Lauryn]]> 2021-12-16 17:04:42 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952255962 marknewman5 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952256880 I think you should check your grammar and punctuation. - Caleb]]> 2021-12-16 17:05:13 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952256880 marknewman5 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952257978 My favorite part was when Pear kicked the gem's cockpit because I think she was trying to defend herself. - Ashley]]> 2021-12-16 17:05:51 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952257978 marknewman5 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952259078 The story was getting good, but then it just ended! I want to read more! - Kourtney]]> 2021-12-16 17:06:28 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952259078 leonardsobers https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952299841 try your best to add more emotions like was DJ scared and try to fix your grammar and for ps4 " its Ps4 ]]> 2021-12-16 17:28:11 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952299841 rogerrose2 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952326701 Why did mom buy clothes for her daughter? - Roger]]> 2021-12-16 17:42:44 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952326701 rogerrose2 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952332543 Why was there a frown on his face? - Roger]]> 2021-12-16 17:45:43 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952332543 emmabritto https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952336764 I love the story and all the details in it! -Emma]]> 2021-12-16 17:47:45 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952336764 rogerrose2 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952341154 Your writing is good so far, but why did your character get in trouble?]]> 2021-12-16 17:50:10 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952341154 aduramilasile https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952443021 2021-12-16 18:48:04 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952443021 rogerrose2 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952445102 How did the phone go missing? Did someone take it? Did you misplace it? - Roger]]> 2021-12-16 18:49:17 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952445102 rogerrose2 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952448438 Your writing is good, How did Amy lose her cat? Did someone take it? - Roger]]> 2021-12-16 18:51:12 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952448438 rogerrose2 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952449924 Your writing is good, Why did her mom get you the iphone 11, Did you get good grades? - Roger]]> 2021-12-16 18:52:10 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952449924 rogerrose2 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952459635 How did you feel hen you first got to the place where you went? Otherwise, Its really good! - roger]]> 2021-12-16 18:58:13 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952459635 rogerrose2 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952460875 Your riting is good, But why did you title it chicken wings? - Roger]]> 2021-12-16 18:58:58 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952460875 rogerrose2 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952464146 How did Lia lose her corgi? Did she misplace it? - Roger]]> 2021-12-16 19:00:53 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952464146 rogerrose2 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952477459 How did you lose your sister's dog? Did you do what was asked? - Roger]]> 2021-12-16 19:09:50 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/1952477459 https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/2049829981 Your title is good, but does not give me an understanding of the text. (other than that, its great)]]> 2022-02-16 01:05:52 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/2049829981 milianagordon https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/2065424837 2022-02-24 22:47:13 UTC https://padlet.com/marknewman5/55h33vz5e548o0ca/wish/2065424837