https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd An inquiry into writing! en-us 2020-09-14 05:02:13 UTC 2025-11-15 23:46:46 UTC hello@padlet.com n_thompson2_daa https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742871336 2020-09-14 05:02:13 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742871336 n_thompson2_daa https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742871339 2020-09-14 05:02:13 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742871339 n_thompson2_daa https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742871342 2020-09-14 05:02:13 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742871342 n_thompson2_daa https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742871343 2020-09-14 05:02:13 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742871343 xiaofanh_daa2_1 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742880074 I noticed that she/he didn't skip lines.]]> 2020-09-14 05:06:44 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742880074 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742880589 I loved the story but I feel like you could make the title more specific.]]> 2020-09-14 05:07:00 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742880589 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742881497 I think that you should write a little more and add more detail]]> 2020-09-14 05:07:30 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742881497 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742882312 I think they wrote her mom lost her ring in the sand they just ca not find it and just left it there, so I think it's not that good to cant find it okay buy a new one.]]> 2020-09-14 05:07:59 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742882312 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742882916 Therd graders do not say The end Only first graders and Katie too and KG one Says the end but third graders do not say the end.]]> 2020-09-14 05:08:19 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742882916 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742883982 I like how they described their mother screaming but I think they can add waaaaay more details ]]> 2020-09-14 05:08:51 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742883982 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742884066 I really like your book because I really like the detail and how you show how you felt when you woke up]]> 2020-09-14 05:08:54 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742884066 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742884105 There was no beginning, middle and end. There were some spelling mistakes like coulded.]]> 2020-09-14 05:08:55 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742884105 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742884355 I think you can add an better ending ]]> 2020-09-14 05:09:04 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742884355 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742884394 It was a nice story I like your doodle at the end but I think you could be more specific]]> 2020-09-14 05:09:05 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742884394 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742884742 Good gob explaining how it was warm in first of the story ]]> 2020-09-14 05:09:16 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742884742 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742885755 I like your story ,the ending was really nice. Next time add more details]]> 2020-09-14 05:09:50 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742885755 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742885910 You did have a good piece of work like it made me think of pictures in my head. Maybe next time you can add “dialogue” in your writing ]]> 2020-09-14 05:09:56 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742885910 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742886251 I disagree. Because  at the part And my mom screamed you should have put a full stop.
And when dad said he will by a new one you need to write this: we told dad about moms ring. That would make it much better but in all it was a good story 

]]> 2020-09-14 05:10:08 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742886251 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742886817 Very nice story I like the part when you thought the black spot was a cockroach ]]> 2020-09-14 05:10:25 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742886817 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742886971 I like your story but there’s one problem from your handwriting you didn’t leave space still words and make it a little bit bigger]]> 2020-09-14 05:10:31 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742886971 xiaofanh_daa2_1 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742887206 I liked that because it is very mysterious.]]> 2020-09-14 05:10:38 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742887206 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742887949 I like the detail in your story and how you were describing the black spot and cockroach. ]]> 2020-09-14 05:11:03 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742887949 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742888310 I like the doodling and drawing of this story and I liked how you started with a "warm sunny day"

]]> 2020-09-14 05:11:14 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742888310 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742888479 It was a really interesting story but you should not say I will never do the monkey bars agin you should practice like first time a tried to that monkey bar trick I fell to but I did not give the next day I tried and tried until I successfully finished the trick and you should to that to!]]> 2020-09-14 05:11:19 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742888479 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742888903 You could have put a lot more emotions ]]> 2020-09-14 05:11:31 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742888903 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742888913 She use punctuation!.?]]> 2020-09-14 05:11:32 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742888913 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742889739 I love wen used the word suddenly ]]> 2020-09-14 05:11:56 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742889739 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742890057 Your story is nice but don’t say it was a new more summer more details that’s just it was a normal summer and I like at that Sending you put a boat for next time don’t say thend say something like It was a good day.]]> 2020-09-14 05:12:04 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742890057 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742890731 I like your story but you cloud have added instead of sad add depress ]]> 2020-09-14 05:12:27 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742890731 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742891274 If you add more detail to your story it is very interesting and I like the drawing at the bottom ]]> 2020-09-14 05:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742891274 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742891737 I think it was a really good story but I think you should add more detail and be more specific next time ]]> 2020-09-14 05:13:01 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742891737 rolenadkotios https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742891959 This book was nice because it had good handwriting and had a great ending but didn’t put the end ]]> 2020-09-14 05:13:08 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742891959 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742892501 I liked how you putted in juicy word in your writing. Maybe the next time you can be more a little bit more detailed in your story.]]> 2020-09-14 05:13:26 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742892501 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742892617 You could have put a happy ending ]]> 2020-09-14 05:13:30 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742892617 xiaofanh_daa2_1 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742894194 I noticed she/he didn't skip lines, and I enjoyed this because it's funny that his mom failed to catch him😂.]]> 2020-09-14 05:14:02 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742894194 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742894392 I liked your story but I think you should remove the in your title because it isn’t so interesting to readers because a lot of people use it and it’s not that exiting.]]> 2020-09-14 05:14:09 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742894392 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742894415 I think you can add how you felt when you were falling and WHAT your mother threw when you were falling. I think you could have said I will TRY again not JUST GIVE UP. 

P.S. the word perfect you spelled it perfict. ]]> 2020-09-14 05:14:10 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742894415 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742894852 I agree  with Walter and the rest it was good]]> 2020-09-14 05:14:23 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742894852 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742896074 I loved the story but maybe you could add a little bit more to your writing like where your dad bought your mom  another ring you know stufff like that]]> 2020-09-14 05:15:03 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742896074 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742896583 I liked wen you said used the word swing great gob]]> 2020-09-14 05:15:19 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742896583 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742896941 I think you need to make sure that your story has been happy and you can put more experience into your story ]]> 2020-09-14 05:15:30 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742896941 rolenadkotios https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742897093 2020-09-14 05:15:34 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742897093 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742897285 There were spelling mistakes and the sentences were too long. He or she used too many I’s.]]> 2020-09-14 05:15:39 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742897285 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742897685 I agree with Lucia]]> 2020-09-14 05:15:50 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742897685 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742899334 I like the juicy words in your story but I think that you can make the story a little longer and skip lines]]> 2020-09-14 05:16:47 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742899334 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742899397 It was funny when her dad pushed her in 😂]]> 2020-09-14 05:16:49 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742899397 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742899417 I agree with Mohammad because he or she can write a little bit more and be more detailed in the last part.]]> 2020-09-14 05:16:49 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742899417 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742900157 Good job , you write very neatly and your hand writing is nice but if you add more discription to story it will be nicer]]> 2020-09-14 05:17:16 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742900157 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742900519 I love the story but maybe you can add more details to the end.]]> 2020-09-14 05:17:21 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742900519 xiaofanh_daa2_1 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742902023 third grade writer's make their writing easy to read. I noticed that she made a drawing of the boat.]]> 2020-09-14 05:17:57 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742902023 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742903072 I like your title was the little drawing but next time make some space in the words I can’t read properly ]]> 2020-09-14 05:18:34 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742903072 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742903974 The story was a good idea but I think you should be more specific on the ending instead of saying ,and then my dad bought her a new one maybe write , and my dad couldn’t find it eaither so my dad had no choice but to by her a new one.and that was the time we lost my mom’s wedding ring 😁]]> 2020-09-14 05:19:06 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742903974 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742904036 I agree with terry because I liked how she/he did the beginning]]> 2020-09-14 05:19:08 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742904036 rolenadkotios https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742904208 I like this book guys it learned me not to do that and she said the end]]> 2020-09-14 05:19:15 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742904208 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742905159 I disagree with Mohammad because you're not really being that specific because you said you can add more details but you didn't say add what details, so next time you can be more specific]]> 2020-09-14 05:19:50 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742905159 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742905327 I agree with ayla who disagrees with xiofan because it is the publishing stage.]]> 2020-09-14 05:19:57 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742905327 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742906332 I love your story because it has a lot of filings]]> 2020-09-14 05:20:32 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742906332 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742906631 Overall I loved your story it was really kind for the dad to get a new ring for the mom]]> 2020-09-14 05:20:42 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742906631 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742906683 I agree with Anthony because he went kayaking with his dad but he didn’t made his trip so much fun things like he just finished with “we went back to the sand safety”]]> 2020-09-14 05:20:44 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742906683 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742907435 I loved the story because there is lots of details and talking]]> 2020-09-14 05:21:11 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742907435 rolenadkotios https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742908325 That is funny it’s just a bug😂]]> 2020-09-14 05:21:40 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742908325 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742908725 But we don’t know if the kid is a girl or a boy matey should add that.]]> 2020-09-14 05:21:53 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742908725 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742909905  I like the story because there are lots of Details to describe the setting]]> 2020-09-14 05:22:34 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742909905 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742910697 This Third graders Title is to Messi what he shod bo next time is right Nicely.]]> 2020-09-14 05:23:02 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742910697 rolenadkotios https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742911226 I know it’s funny too and when her dad push her 😜]]> 2020-09-14 05:23:21 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742911226 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742912004 It was a creepy 🧟‍♀️Story]]> 2020-09-14 05:23:43 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742912004 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742912884 I like your story but I think you can check your work for instance. You were trying to spell taking and you spelled it tuking that is wrong so check your work next time thanks.]]> 2020-09-14 05:24:14 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742912884 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742913049 I loved the drama and the dot reminds me of a story about the big dot and I love that it was night time and that you woke up it is so hilarious 😂😂]]> 2020-09-14 05:24:19 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742913049 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742913091 I agree with Laith]]> 2020-09-14 05:24:21 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742913091 rolenadkotios https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742913895 It’s nice details ]]> 2020-09-14 05:24:44 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742913895 rolenadkotios https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742915474 It’s not creepy ]]> 2020-09-14 05:25:32 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742915474 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742916898 It’s funny because you fell out of the kayak 😂]]> 2020-09-14 05:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742916898 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742917864 This Other third grader olso seid the end but you shod add finally.]]> 2020-09-14 05:26:56 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742917864 rolenadkotios https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742920400 I agree with Anthony ]]> 2020-09-14 05:28:24 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742920400 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742921730 I like that you still tried to do it good job I like how you tried your best]]> 2020-09-14 05:29:10 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742921730 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742922679 I liked how you tried]]> 2020-09-14 05:29:43 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742922679 josephgemechs_daa https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742922993 I liked how you told how she lost her ring]]> 2020-09-14 05:29:51 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/742922993 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/746802089 You need to add more detail ]]> 2020-09-15 06:05:16 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/746802089 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/746809599 It is funny that you fell out of the kayak]]> 2020-09-15 06:08:52 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/746809599 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/746817375 I like the story to be mysterious ]]> 2020-09-15 06:12:58 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/746817375 https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/746823675 I like that you learned your lesson ]]> 2020-09-15 06:15:44 UTC https://padlet.com/n_thompson2_daa/53c70ak0n155dbkd/wish/746823675