https://padlet.com/26ltittanegro/533z7tiwbm5c Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2019-12-05 15:13:04 UTC 2019-12-10 18:51:10 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f438.png 26vslack https://padlet.com/26ltittanegro/533z7tiwbm5c/wish/421626370 I really like your hook. I think it pulls the reader in. I think that because it’s a little confusing, not in a bad way and it wants to make the reader, read more! My next star is when he drags his feet because it really tells me about how he is feeling. If he is dragging his feet he is lazy or tired. One wish I have is when he trips over his goalie stick. What happenes? I think you should add a little more detail but besides that it’s good.

]]> 2019-12-09 14:55:21 UTC https://padlet.com/26ltittanegro/533z7tiwbm5c/wish/421626370 26cfynes https://padlet.com/26ltittanegro/533z7tiwbm5c/wish/422236591 I loved how you went straight to your character's trait at the start of the story so the reader would know how they felt.  Another star I have for you is I liked the way you used dialogue when Hunter was yelling. The wish I have for you is maybe you should have checked over your story more because there was some spelling errors and grammar mistakes.

]]> 2019-12-10 15:58:12 UTC https://padlet.com/26ltittanegro/533z7tiwbm5c/wish/422236591 26bkloepfer https://padlet.com/26ltittanegro/533z7tiwbm5c/wish/422355861 A star I have for you is that you have a lot of conversations and dialogue this helps me understand the story because all of the characters are kind of explaining the event or situation that is happening.Another star that I have for you is that you really explained the story. And a wish that I have for you is to italicize more thoughts and capitalize after a sentence is over as an example “Why did this happen to me? My moms ferrare goes fast” also you have a lot of lot of lowercase I’s but you had a super good story and I enjoyed reading it 

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