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      <title>Mentor Sentence - Day 3 - In the hallways, which were always crowded, my face would always surprise some unsuspecting kid who maybe hadn’t heard of me. Revise  by Sandra Haese</title>
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      <pubDate>2017-11-29 13:49:52 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In the small jammed hallways, which were always crowed my face startled a unexciting kid who was unaware of me.&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In the long very crowed hallways of Beacher Prep, Auggies face would shock an unsuspecting kid, who did not know who I was</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In the halls of my school, which were extremely crowed, my face was a bit of a startle and a surprise to any on-goer who passed by.&nbsp;<br>&nbsp;<br>-Mason Raycraft</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Lauren </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In the long, wide hallways, my face would put some kid in confusion, with no clue of who I, August Pollman, was.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Lilly Bramblett</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In the crowded tiny hallways, my face would always scare this suspecting kid, who probably hadn't seen or heard of me.    </div>]]></description>
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         <title>Haley Barbero</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In the busy, crowded school hallways, my face would always shock a not know kid who would all was staring at me and unaware of me.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Audrey Dexter</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In the slim, crowded school hallways, my face would scare a unown kid, unaware of who I am.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>In the thin loud crowded hallway my face would freak people out </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>-Maria-<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <title>Matye Riley </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In the tiny, cramped hallways, my face would impact an unsuspecting kid, who was unfamiliar with me.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Brenton McPherson</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In the small unimaginative Beecher Prep hallways, my face would always  shock unsuspecting kids and I look down as they jog away and mutter, ¨Freak¨.  </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-11-29 20:40:24 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Cristiano Artigas</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In the pristine white halls, which were always jam packed,my face would usually startle an expecting kid who didn'tn know who I was  </div>]]></description>
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         <title>Mary Campbell</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In the tight compacted hallway in the school my face would surprise some unknown kid who didn't know I existed.&nbsp;<br>&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Emily Toczylowsk</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In the deep dark hallways, which was full of kids, my face would always shock an unsuspected kid who was not sure who I was. </div>]]></description>
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         <title>Gabrielle (AKA Gabi) Sewell</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In the long, jam packed hallways of the school, my face would always shock someone who had no idea of my existence.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Hailey West</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In the small very crouded  hallways my supprizing face would always shock some unawar kid that had not thoght i had not ixisted.<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <title>Corrine Waugh</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Inside the tiny, overflowing school corridors, my face would always startle an uninformed kid, who was unfamiliar with me. </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-11-29 20:45:45 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Fisher Wells</title>
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         <pubDate>2017-11-30 15:34:00 UTC</pubDate>
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