Writer's Workshop Periods 1+2 by Elise Grangetto https://padlet.com/egrangetto1/50tp4svvm138aqka Use the rubric to grade a student's introduction paragraph. You must add 2 glow and 2 grow comments. Move onto a new intro if you're done early. en-us 2021-11-02 16:37:56 UTC 2021-12-01 22:25:06 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/270d.png Student 1 egrangetto1 https://padlet.com/egrangetto1/50tp4svvm138aqka/wish/1923880082 In the beginning it was a normal day in 2020. I Was in 7 grade. In the 4th period the teacher said “grades are going home!” I started trembling because I knew I was in huge trouble.The rest of the day in school I couldn’t focus anymore because I was just thinking about my mom seeing my grades.]]> 2021-12-01 22:20:16 UTC https://padlet.com/egrangetto1/50tp4svvm138aqka/wish/1923880082 Student 2 egrangetto1 https://padlet.com/egrangetto1/50tp4svvm138aqka/wish/1923880516 It began late Saturday night. My cousin and I went to walmart. If you know anything about Walmart you probably know everyone and their moms are up in there. It would be an
understatement to say that Walmart was packed. My cousin and I went to go get some chips when we started messing around, pushing each other slightly harder each time we went to do it.
]]> 2021-12-01 22:20:42 UTC https://padlet.com/egrangetto1/50tp4svvm138aqka/wish/1923880516 Student 3 egrangetto1 https://padlet.com/egrangetto1/50tp4svvm138aqka/wish/1923881087 It was just a normal Saturday, I woke up early like at 8 AM no one was home and I was super bored little did I know that what was going to happen that day was crazy. I started talking to my friends in our group chat. I told them I was really bored and one of my friends had an idea to meet up at his house. I eventually went to his house after I asked my mom for permission. We started blasting music and played video games. I'd say 2 hours have passed and we got bored so we took the bus to the mall. We looked around and played around. Eventually we bought some stuff and we left the mall. We dropped our stuff off at my friend's house and later went to the park to just chill out.]]> 2021-12-01 22:21:18 UTC https://padlet.com/egrangetto1/50tp4svvm138aqka/wish/1923881087 Student 4 egrangetto1 https://padlet.com/egrangetto1/50tp4svvm138aqka/wish/1923881471 I was at the crib and I started to pack and then I went to the car and drove 3hours to my friend's house. When I got to L.A where my friend lives I picked him up then we went to go get some food because we were hungry then when we were done eating we went back home to kickit.]]> 2021-12-01 22:21:40 UTC https://padlet.com/egrangetto1/50tp4svvm138aqka/wish/1923881471 Student 5 egrangetto1 https://padlet.com/egrangetto1/50tp4svvm138aqka/wish/1923882397 in day you’re playing in a big grassy me do with lots of trees for the next day you’ll be in some futuristic chamber, like a prisoner in solitude for what feels like forever. It started when I was in second grade playing next to the biggest tree in the field when I hear a zzzz it goes silent zzzz I’m shocked at the sight of a massive beetle be thing to this day I don’t what it was but it was a weird but it looked like a battle had the colors of a bee and had an very odd pattern. I run like a cheetah but it catches up and bites/stings me.]]> 2021-12-01 22:22:33 UTC https://padlet.com/egrangetto1/50tp4svvm138aqka/wish/1923882397 Student 6 egrangetto1 https://padlet.com/egrangetto1/50tp4svvm138aqka/wish/1923882705 Being home alone was a DREAM. My brother and I were hardly ever home alone. Until this one night our parents decided to go out, it was very exciting. As the night went on and about an hour had passed we began to get bored. We didn’t know what to do. We started eating loads of candy and got extremely hyper. As we got hyper we started messing around in the house. We were running and playing with the dog too.]]> 2021-12-01 22:22:53 UTC https://padlet.com/egrangetto1/50tp4svvm138aqka/wish/1923882705