I felt that, even though it was short and to the point, it needed further organization.

- Organization

- Text/Font/Background Colour

- Picture Quality

I liked how you:

- Built suspense by saying "and the winner is..."

- Placed the Hannah Certification slide at the very beginning

- Chose a black background, so your white text would really "POP"

If I had to ask you some questions related to your Slideshow, they would be:

Why did you elect to display all 5 contestants on one slide?

What was your thought process, during the creation period of this presentation?

Which structure would you choose, if it were being auctioned off for free, and why?

* It had substantial writing 

* Imaginative word choice 

* Creative structure names

* Extremely organized

* Complex Criteria

What I liked:

* Bright colors

* Punctuation

* Information chart

Questions:

* What evidence could you add?

* Did you feel you met the criteria?

* Where did you get your inspiration?

~ you had terrific criteria

~ i like how you had the table for your contents

~ you were very orginized

~ very discriptive words

~ Breathtaking information of why you put it in that place

If i had to ask you questions about you slideshow i would ask you:

~  Why did you choose to orginize that way

~ The names you came up with.

~ How you put what gears and pulleys are being used.

~ Why your structures are in that place.

~ What forces were being used for that structure.

~ Well organized.

Questions:

~Why would you chose to sell it at Walmart?

~Why would you chose that criteria?

~ What inspired you to come up with those names?

~ Why did you name your structure Moooooo?

Table of contents you forgot about

- Your criteria was short and to the point

-Multiple fascinating fonts and texts

- The white background really made your text appealing

-Well organized and interesting

Question:

-Why did you choose this criteria?

Summary:

Over all a magnificent presentation, it was appealing, interesting, and well rounded.

your criteria was great.

you explained everything like a pro.

Amazing.

Your background really made the font stand out.

Your transitions weren't all over the place.

You had the same font throughout the whole slideshow.

Questions I have for you:

Why'd you choose that criteria?

Where did you come up with your structure names?

What was I liked:

~>I liked how you had the idea of make a prize for the winner!

~> You were extreamly  orginized!

~> I found that your background was creative!

~> I was impressed by how much you wrote, it is unbelievable!

~> The colour of the text stood out from the background.

~> You had phenomenal pictures!

~> I admired your table of contents it was well layed out, I loved how you put 'The winner is..' instead of first place is.

~> You had breathe taking information!

What was perfect:

 ~> Table of contents.

~> Pictures

- your presentation was very organized and had a beautiful set-up

- you used your criteria effectively to judge the contestants

- the black background and the yellow font made everything stand out

- your descriptions were brief, yet detailed

- you answered all the required questions with described detail

Questions:

- What inspired you to name the structures the way you did?

Overall:

This was a phenomenal presentation. You had all the required slides in your presentation, made the slides descriptive, well thought out and over-all admirable.

what structure would make any object what would u make ?

picture quality

I thought you did this project perfectly

good but could have a little more text 

~ Your names

~ Table of content.

~ Well organized.

~ How you put why you put the structure in that place.

~ How you put what forces were being used.

Questions:

~ Why did you choose those names for your structure?

~ Would you only sell your structure at Cat?

~ Why so many criteria?

~ What structure would you sell for free?

You were extremely organized.

-The texts you chose stood out

-You had plenty of criteria.

-Each question was well explained and had many examples.

-You made sure that 1st place met the criteria.

-You used creativity to make up your named and they still matched your structures.

What I liked:

-The background looked like a notepad to match school.

-The text and font stood out.

-You made creative names.

Questions:

-Why did you choose that criteria?

-Why did you choose these names?

-Where did you get your inspiration from?

- Jakob your presentation stunning (very

Your cover page was perfect i like the title and how you put hosted by...

I love you introduction its probably the best i've ever seen .

I like how you started it of with good evening ladies and gental men that was very professional.

I liked how you orginized the contestants slide .

The way you put you photos was very cool.

I like you conclusion

Your background really made the font stand out.

You had an introduction and conclusion, not many people thought of adding that.

How you had the criteria that each structure fit, on each structure's slide.

It was well organized.

Questions I have for you:

Why'd you choose flexibility as one of the criteria? (I'm not asking in a negative way)

How'd you choose the criteria?

Your background matches your text

Your criteria

The creativity of the names of your creations

The reasons for 'Why this place?'

The descriptions of Forces,Gears and Pulleys

The concluding page

I think I speak for the class when I say that your presentation was amazing!!

Great layout & nice names

Why did you choose that criteria

Questions

What made you pick the names ?

How did you choose those places ?

-Beautiful chart it is spaces out and all the criteria is along the top

-I learned new words

Questions:

Why did you choose those places?

Fine criteria you should of put the meaning too

Okay table of contents dont forget capitals

Question:

Why did you pick those places

Your background made the font stand out.

How you had a "Final Ranking".

How you wrote the amount of criteria met.

Questions I have for you:

Why'd you choose that criteria?

What did you use the websites for?

Observations I've made:

On "Structure #4" the place/rank is not filled in.

On "Structure #5" the structure "Wheely" you stated "None" for the question "What gears/pulleys?" When in fact it does have a gear, which is the wheels that make the structure move.

The Criteria is terrific.

Great explanation on the Ranking.

Well organized.

It is a little difficult to read because of your font and background.

Extraordinary wording.

Why did you decide to use that as your criteria?

- Your choice of names were very professional

- You stated your criteria in an elegant form

- I enjoyed your imaginative thinking (The money, and snow came down on particular slides)

- Your pictures were incredibly clear (almost High-Definition)

- When you were organizing your slides I found it interesting that you inserted them in a backwards formation

- I enjoyed how you made each piece of text a different colour

Overall, an prestigious presentation!