https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585 Comment below with the feedback that will help you the MOST for Tuesday. en-us 2018-04-06 19:18:45 UTC 2018-04-06 19:35:50 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Templeball.png sage_campbell https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249350855 T-I like how you did a unique person.
A-Are you done with your expository?
G-Spell a little better]]> 2018-04-06 19:21:44 UTC https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249350855 arush_duvuru https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249350873 I told someone in my group that they had a interesting topic.I also told them that they had a good two reasons

A R U S H D.]]> 2018-04-06 19:21:46 UTC https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249350873 hayden_pearson https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249350897 Kayley was my partner and the feedback was to fix her capitalization because of her I's were lower case like this i. I liked how she put numbers instead of "She is older I am older I am done now."]]> 2018-04-06 19:21:51 UTC https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249350897 chayah_stamps https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249350983 Tell- Great closing and 
reasons and organization : )
Ask- Why did you write this piece?
Grow- work on better, juicier transitions 
from: My partner Ella]]> 2018-04-06 19:22:12 UTC https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249350983 regan_cleverley https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249350990 The feed back I gave my partner is 
T- I like your hook
A- What are going to be your reasons? 
G-I think that you can go over your work and check to make sure your spelling is correct.]]> 2018-04-06 19:22:14 UTC https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249350990 orlandoroque https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249351063 This is what I gave to Alex
T-I like your use of a question hook.
A-Where did you state your thesis.
G-You need to check your spelling and state your thesis more clearly.]]> 2018-04-06 19:22:33 UTC https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249351063 jackson_lesikar https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249351132 I told my partner to have more details ]]> 2018-04-06 19:22:49 UTC https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249351132 kayley_czarnecki https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249351217 i liked that she organiz the papper the feedback that i got was fix my grammer ]]> 2018-04-06 19:23:04 UTC https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249351217 amelia_reed https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249351314 T-I like how you did your reason and your closing.
A-Why did you choose to write about Collins Key and Devin Key?
G-Maybe next time you can use a dictionary to help you spell. :)]]> 2018-04-06 19:23:22 UTC https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249351314 livia_hindi https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249351414 2018-04-06 19:23:44 UTC https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249351414 emily_obryant https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249351447 The feedback I got from Zoe is that I need to relate my closing to the opening or restate my thesis]]> 2018-04-06 19:23:52 UTC https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249351447 zoe_bernet https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249351561 The feedback I got was I spelled surface wrong,but I fixed by looking in the dictionary.]]> 2018-04-06 19:24:18 UTC https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249351561 https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249351591 the feedback is I like how you did your docs]]> 2018-04-06 19:24:24 UTC https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249351591 mason_lefave https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249351881 i like how you had a great hook]]> 2018-04-06 19:25:35 UTC https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249351881 kiley_brooks https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249351949 T-I like how you made a text-to-self connection.
A- Wheres your thesis?
G- Go over your paper and check your grammer.

]]> 2018-04-06 19:25:51 UTC https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249351949 ella_montoya https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249352025 T-great ending and resons
A-Why did you write this peice ?

G-   work on transtions]]> 2018-04-06 19:26:05 UTC https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249352025 alexander_delgado https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249352040 2018-04-06 19:26:08 UTC https://padlet.com/hillary_bordeaux/4zgif8bca585/wish/249352040