Task 1- Re Design Group Collage by Gil Bozer

Group collage

2020-12-08 22:30:13 UTC

I would love to know what do you all think about it, thank you.

Table of evaluation results.

2020-12-08 22:37:41 UTC

Yana Tyshler

2020-12-09 18:28:57 UTC

maram

2020-12-09 18:35:19 UTC

yanatyshler — 2020-12-10 09:26:36 UTC

I think that the idea of the flow you have built helps to understand in an organized and orderly way the message that each of the writers wanted to convey. I liked that you built a table of contents for each color it helps to understand the flow.
Yana Tyshler

altoryhaneen — 2020-12-10 11:55:39 UTC

altoryhaneen — 2020-12-10 11:57:44 UTC

2020-12-10 12:15:05 UTC

2020-12-10 12:15:26 UTC

The redesign of Adi Ifrach:)

sigal-group collage

2020-12-10 14:35:23 UTC

Raneen's table

2020-12-10 23:44:41 UTC

2020-12-10 23:46:25 UTC

I used the "LEGO serious play" tool.
My idea was that we all complement each other.
And then I thought of myself in the idea of making it in the shape of a specific game, that's why I chose this tool.

2020-12-11 18:53:51 UTC

2020-12-11 19:25:48 UTC

Adi's response to yana

2020-12-14 13:20:05 UTC

Throughout your redesign of the Collage, it seems that you have indeed found a solution for the criterion that was rated the lowest in the table which is the criterion, "easy to read", throughout the separation of each text on separate pages and a wide view of the text and its content, which made the collage appear and be accessible to everyone.

Adi's response to Haneen

2020-12-14 13:21:44 UTC

Your chosen criterion chosen by you "The content of the text" is indeed different in the redesign of your collage where I got a different perspective on the look of the text, where I can also see as content that can affect my life and be preserved as a meaningful memory in my life.

Adi's response to Aya

2020-12-14 13:22:50 UTC

Empowering the strengths and dominant values that characterized each text, made me adopt different perspectives in looking at the group collage in a way that enhances the core values of each text individually, and sharpens the central idea that each of my teammates tried to convey to each other.

to yana

2020-12-16 14:09:58 UTC

The design and title are attractive, and it is arranged, which facilitates access among participants, it's not crowded as in a group collage before. I think you met all the criteria that you set.
maram

To Raneen

2020-12-16 21:51:46 UTC

The idea of deciding to reshape the collage enhances the criteria you incubate the lowest. The idea of the puzzle and the drawing in it is very eye-catching and interesting, it creates interest and makes one want to read everything the writers have written.

To Raneen

2020-12-16 21:53:18 UTC

Haneen's response to Yana

altoryhaneen — 2020-12-17 11:10:28 UTC

I liked the design idea, the idea was clear and attractive at the same time, and it really made me feel that they are stories and not just written words.

Haneen's response to maram

altoryhaneen — 2020-12-17 11:15:08 UTC

I liked the way you think about this strange and amazing design, you made me feel that their characteristics are brief information for their big personality that needs analysis, but you summarized this in the design

Raneen's response to Maram

2020-12-17 12:14:29 UTC

You used an unique design that caught my attention at first sight and I like it so much! also I liked the way you coordinate the colors in your design and how you summed up the work of each of us.

I congratulate you for this invested work. keep going on this way!

Raneen's response to Yana

2020-12-17 13:25:56 UTC

I liked how you decided to build your own design in this way. I liked your choice on the background image at the beginning of the work. it comfortable on the eyes and makes everyone who sees it feel completely reassured and peaceful. moreover, you added an interesting title at the beginning that attracts readers to read the content with passion and enthusiasm. keep going!

to raneen

2020-12-18 14:17:13 UTC

I liked the design in general, it was beautiful and not boring, and I liked the idea of the puzzle game that we are separate parts and complement each other as a group. I think you have fulfilled the criteria you set such as the writing, the content, and the details of the presentation.
maram

To Adi

2020-12-18 20:27:07 UTC

For the first time when I saw you with your design, I tried a lot to understand the idea that you wanted to communicate, then read what you wrote, I understood what I wanted to communicate and changed my viewpoint, I really liked you and your unpredictable way of thinking, we together with our differences also form a different and very special beauty.
thank you
Aya Dbsan

to Hanen

2020-12-18 20:34:43 UTC

Each of us has a specific message and topic different from the other, whether it is in ideas and imagination, you have envied the concept with a layer that is very compatible with your design. Your design is good and easy to understand, and your message is clear.
thank yoy
Aya Dbsan

2021-11-24 15:30:40 UTC

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