https://padlet.com/cdavis575/4xodskt17n03iq1f Write the heart of your story. en-us 2020-09-21 02:01:47 UTC 2025-12-12 07:30:07 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/cdavis575/4xodskt17n03iq1f/wish/764843205 I learned today that you have to add more detail in revising and put a heart on the problem.]]> 2020-09-21 16:03:13 UTC https://padlet.com/cdavis575/4xodskt17n03iq1f/wish/764843205 https://padlet.com/cdavis575/4xodskt17n03iq1f/wish/764844305 I lernd that we put ar hart in the problem of ar story to put a lot of ditel and be happy wid ar riting ]]> 2020-09-21 16:03:23 UTC https://padlet.com/cdavis575/4xodskt17n03iq1f/wish/764844305 https://padlet.com/cdavis575/4xodskt17n03iq1f/wish/764854580 2020-09-21 16:05:13 UTC https://padlet.com/cdavis575/4xodskt17n03iq1f/wish/764854580 https://padlet.com/cdavis575/4xodskt17n03iq1f/wish/764854612 To add more points of my story

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