Writing practice Augst 7 by Trung Nguyen

Writing practice Augst 7 by Trung Nguyen https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc min 70 and max 100 words en-us 2021-08-07 12:06:31 UTC 2025-10-23 11:29:44 UTC hello@padlet.com nguyenbaotrung1986 https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671656545 Emphasis lead-in for argument:

…..we need to admit that

…..we need to acknowledge that……

…..it is worth mention that……

…..there is no denying that…..

Connective for explanation:

· This is because

· the explanation for this could be the fact that …

· the basis of this is the fact that …

· The point I want to emphasize is (the fact) that … (connection to opinion)

· what we have to realize is that …(connection to opinion)

Connective for evidence

• For example….

• For instance…..

• In fact…..

• As a matter of fact…..

• I have heard that….. (academic / well known ppl or event only)

• If I recall correctly…. (academic / well known ppl or event only)

]]> 2021-08-07 12:26:00 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671656545 NHAT MINH nhatminhnguyenxuan https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671663003 We need to admit that children should be able to fully express themselves through the clothes they choose to wear instead of being forced to dress the way they dont want to. The basis of this is the fact that when you dress well, you feel good and thus, spreading that positive energy to people around you. As a matter of fact, I have read a study which present that students study in schools that don't require them to wear uniform normally achieved a higher G.P.A score compare to those who attend schools in which wearing uniform are a obligation

]]> 2021-08-07 12:43:40 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671663003 Quang https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671667751 Admittedly, the school uniform’s law is the best way to decrease the social class gap. The point I want to emphasize could be the fact that if every student has to wear a similar suit to school, they could not distinguish who is rich or who is poor. As a result, students will assume that everyone is in the same social class, thereby treating everyone fairly. The potential benefit is minimizing school violence.

We need to acknowledge that school uniforms give students a serious attitude, responsible for the expectations of their parents and teachers. The reason for this could be the fact that when students wear uniforms, they will have a sense that their parents have paid for their education, so they need to cherish the hard earned money of both parents. The result is students will try their best to graduate and open their future door.

]]> 2021-08-07 12:55:59 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671667751 NHAT MINH nhatminhnguyenxuan https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671668136 There is no denying that for some parents, uniforms can become an extra financial burden. Because of the fact that uniforms are an compulsory part among the majority of the education system, parents have to pay a significant amount of money each year in order to purchase enough uniforms for their children to wear for the entire week. In fact, many schools utilize this policy as a way to exploit parents through selling incredibly overpriced uniforms, which can cost an arm and a leg for many, especially working-class parents.

]]> 2021-08-07 12:57:02 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671668136 Duc Minh leducminhpan1k https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671668553 It is worth mention that it is necessary to allow students to wear what they want to. The thing I want to emphasize is the fact that dressing freely helps students to express their individuality. As a matter of fact, each students have difference body figures and styles, which proves why it is uncomfortable for them to wear school uniform all the time. By wearing clothes as their interests, students can be more self confident and sastified with how they look while interacting with friends at school. For instance, school uniforms with trousers and long shirt might not fit with sporty students.

Alongside, we need to admit that uniforms can be made from low quality clothes. The basis of this could be the fact that not every students can afford high-end uniforms. Most of schools prefer to use low quality materials to decrease the costs, making uniforms more accessible. This leads uncomfortable feeling when where these clothes, especially in hot seasons or winter. For example, many Vietnamese students claim that their summer shirt uniforms are too thick while the jackets are too thin ]]> 2021-08-07 12:57:45 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671668553 NHAT MINH nhatminhnguyenxuan https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671670677 For a variety of reasons, the school uniform is reportedly a symbol of equality.. It would seem that wearing a uniform helps students avoid the wealth gap, as every student is wearing the same clothes. By way of illustration, without the uniform policy the students born into poor families may have to wear second hand clothes to school which, naturally, push them into an inferiority complex due to family circumstances and their background. ]]> 2021-08-07 13:01:42 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671670677 Duy https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671671284 We need to acknowledge that students cannot expressed their own characteristic if wearing the same as every other student. This is because each pupil has their own fashion-style along with their personality, and many students feel the most comfortable when having the chance to dress up in their own clothes. For example, it is impossible for the teacher to tell each student is good or bad at something if everyone just wearing the same costume.

Furthermore, school uniform can be an extra cost which causing a financial burden for family lack of financial condition. The explanation for this could be the fact that school uniform cannot be in any other circumstance outside of school while other clothes fit in both of the situation in and outside of class. For instance, each year the student parent needs to carry an addition expense for uniform that can only be wear within the school environment.

]]> 2021-08-07 13:03:58 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671671284 nhat minh nhatminhnguyenxuan https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671672771 Another point to consider is that school uniforms enhance school pride. There is every likelihood that this outfit provides students with a sense of unity which brings a bond that allows them to feel closer and more responsible for their actions. Due to the fact that they represent their school through the uniform, they will be less likely to conduct illegal or indecent behaviour that may damage their insitution’s brand and reputation.

]]> 2021-08-07 13:08:00 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671672771 nhat minh nhatminhnguyenxuan https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671674029 It is worth considering that the role of teachers started to fade because computers have been helping some students to progress in their studies quicker than when compared with an original classroom. For example, in the same classroom, students have different intellectual capacities, thus some would be tied to a slow advance in their studies because of others’ incapacity of understanding. In this way, pupils could progress in their acquisition of knowledge at their own pace using computers instead of learning from teachers.

]]> 2021-08-07 13:12:17 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671674029 nhat minh nhatminhnguyenxuan https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671675131 We have to admit that the presence of a teacher is essential for students because human contact influences them in positive ways. The reason for this is the fact that students have to realise that they are not dealing with a machine but with a human being who deserves attention and respect. Through these interactions, they will learn the importance of studying in groups and respect their facilitator and peers , which helps them to improve their social skills.

]]> 2021-08-07 13:15:47 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671675131 quang https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671675410 We need to admit that school should not demand student to wear uniform to easily educating students. In fact, in the contemporary life, each person has their own styles and the styles will reveal part of individual personality. if teachers could see it through letting students wear clothes they like, they will be opened the door to be close to student. As a result, student will think teacher is a person who actually empathize them, then they will share their problems for teacher to find the best way of education.

There is no denying that requiring student to wear uniforms is help student to study better. The basis of this could be the fact that, each student has their individual fashion sense, and if they can wear what they want, they will be themselves. The biggest advantage is when student feel comfortable, they can study more effectively. As a matter of fact, there is a research show that students in Europe, who have a good condition to show their strong personality, always take in knowledge 2 times better than Asian students, who were forced to wear uniforms.

]]> 2021-08-07 13:16:43 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671675410 Quang https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671675649 2021-08-07 13:17:13 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671675649 Duc Anh ducanhbee06 https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671677001 We need to acknowledge that uniform make students feel oppression . This is because uniform prevent students from express themselves , if students don’t have to wear uniform , they will be able to show their personality comfortably. For instance , a girl that want to be cute and adorable , therefore she loves to wear fashion styles like lolita , but the stark uniform is a large obstruction to her so in her mind, many negative feelings are developed

]]> 2021-08-07 13:21:27 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671677001 Quang https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671680418 We need to admit that directly teaching helps teachers to indicate knowledge more clearly. The reason for this could be the fact that, when teachers have face to face lessons, they can regard students’ expressions to guess if they have understood the lesson or not. It can help teachers to maximize the quality of lessons. In fact, the covid-19 pandemic has forced countries to study online, so the state has to reduce the quality of the test for fear that online teaching will reduce the quality of learning.

Personally, I suppose that online teaching in the future should not be done at all. The point I want to emphasize is that the online area is the best way for hackers to propagate terrible things. For example, if hackers have an ID of a class, they can illegally join the class and use hacking software to disturb class. The potential risk is student will not be able to learn the knowledge, even being bad affected by things that are not right

]]> 2021-08-07 13:31:13 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671680418 Duy https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671681358 There is no denying that when wearing uniform, students can put more effort into their studies. The point I want to emphasize is the fact that wearing the same costume daily can help them save up time not to think what they have to wear for the day. I have heard that Albert Eistein dressed up the same every day in his life so he can save up his braincell in the more important stuff.

Furthermore, wearing uniform can show the students the fact that they are balance. Everyone dress up in the same way mean that no one will look better than anyone, creating an atmosphere which every student will have the feeling equal to each other. As the matter of fact, if a student from a wealthy family wearing really fancy clothes while another kid just wears a normal T- shirt and short, that will really make a different between them.

]]> 2021-08-07 13:34:00 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671681358 Duc Anh ducanhbee06 https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671682084 It is worth mention that uniform creates a balance and equal environment in school . The explanation for this could be the fact that wearing the same clothes will not create the comparison and distinction between students . For example , a rich student wearing luxurious vest or suit will receive the respect and admiration while poor student with a dirty tank top will be looked at with spitting.

]]> 2021-08-07 13:36:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671682084 nhat minh nhatminhnguyenxuan https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671683366 We need to admit that studying online allows both students to reduce time spent on travelling from home to school. Instead of having to wake up at 6 A.M to catch a bus in order to attend a class that only about to start at 8, via online studying, learners can spend that valuable 2 hours working out, eating breakfast or revising for the class. Surely spending their morning doing activities that they fancy instead of commuting during the rush hours would make them feel more inspired and motivated, which promotes productivity for school work.

]]> 2021-08-07 13:40:09 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1671683366 Duy https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1674010150 It is worth mention that online classes can come with multiple convenient benefit. Studying in an online class mean that you can be much more flexible in managing you daily schedule since class can be available in various parts of the day. For example, with standard class you have to go to school from the morning till afternoon, while in online classes you can freely choose the most suitable learning time for youself. ]]> 2021-08-10 11:59:07 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyenbaotrung1986/4wgrk9fuzjy1k7nc/wish/1674010150