Period 5/6 Narrative Writing by Rebecca Rinaldi https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w MAKE A COPY of your writing and post the link here. Make sure it is on VIEWER mode. In your description, you can ask for specific feedback or just general feedback. (Example: "How can I add more descriptive details?" OR "How can I improve?") Read others' writing. Comment in the chat feedback to HELP or ENCOURAGE. en-us 2020-11-05 05:05:45 UTC 2025-07-21 06:15:21 UTC hello@padlet.com Mrs. Rinaldi rrinaldi1 https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/895852805 Welcome to my paper!  Please read and _______..  Ask for some feedback! 

MAKE A COPY!!!!DO NOT ADD YOUR ORIGINAL.  Adjust share settings.]]> 2020-11-05 20:45:35 UTC https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/895852805 Ally alexaperry9008 https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051146 Here is my story!]]> 2020-11-05 21:56:48 UTC https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051146 Deacon https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051161 Welcome to my paper feel free to comment some feedback. ]]> 2020-11-05 21:56:48 UTC https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051161 sienna https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051189 Welcome to my paper!  Please read and give me some feedback in the comments!  

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jsU1v9jFSKbCUaVD7ED4Q_WiEDyb01du8GHmPMLHT0M/edit?usp=sharing ]]> 2020-11-05 21:56:49 UTC https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051189 Chloe Sky Nicolacakis chloenicol3309 https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051275 Welcome to my paper! Please read it and tell me stuff you think I should change/please give me constructive criticism.]]> 2020-11-05 21:56:51 UTC https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051275 Ashley https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051293 Welcome to my paper! Please read and give constructive criticism. Enjoy!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/19EIIQqLzgYz9hC3m-39OoG2Sf2Cosa5221Xyk-nc-D0/edit?usp=sharing]]> 2020-11-05 21:56:51 UTC https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051293 Hope https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051302 Welcome to my paper! Please read and give positive feedback, I'm very sensitive. ]]> 2020-11-05 21:56:52 UTC https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051302 Sienna https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051345 2020-11-05 21:56:53 UTC https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051345 Charlie O charlieoc https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051366 Feel free to leave some feedback! Also remember to write your name with your comment.]]> 2020-11-05 21:56:54 UTC https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051366 Jake Cheng https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051419 Mischievous John: 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YceLi600fH05tpgJmFRebu0f-BcTuXIOiYof6zd3PHk/edit

Please comment on the doc not the pad lit post.

]]> 2020-11-05 21:56:55 UTC https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051419 Nitin Mathew https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051454 This is my paper. Please and tell me if it is to dull and give me some feedback. Thank You!


]]> 2020-11-05 21:56:55 UTC https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051454 Miles Slotnick milesslotn6008 https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051507 Please read my story and give me feedback!]]> 2020-11-05 21:56:57 UTC https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051507 Adler adlerviola5908 https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051689 Welcome to my paper! Please read and give back feedback.
There is a link at the end for fun it plays music. Enjoy! 🙂🙂🙂

]]> 2020-11-05 21:57:02 UTC https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051689 Adina Thanislas https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051725 Welcome to my paper! Please read  my story and give me some feedback on how I could make it more intruiging and maybe how I can improve punctuation. Also if you spot anything else I can improve please feel free to tell me

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1w9CKHitqDG0eMu8mkJgenv2Xnxqk64-ml5uOfWhNc0k/edit]]> 2020-11-05 21:57:04 UTC https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051771 avery s :) https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051826 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-cGNizo2hNRDOg20t70QgLOYC5VCv7zc2DHk8W-Cqes/edit]]> 2020-11-05 21:57:05 UTC https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051826 Gabriel https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051839 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-AJoOy3P1ONKIKGrfPn_OuWEJkaOt_hMLShCbLYyvio/edit?usp=sharing]]> 2020-11-05 21:57:06 UTC https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051839 ~M.I.A~ https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051906 Hi I'm mia and here is my writing!                           plz give feed back i thing its kinda bad :/]]> 2020-11-05 21:57:08 UTC https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896051906 Drew Mitchell andremitch8908 https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896052364 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IBarGH4qdMSeD0aetCwWJezOWT28y_kJeQKUol9kyfM/edit?usp=sharing]]> 2020-11-05 21:57:21 UTC https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896052364 Sid B. sidnebrize8408 https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896052729 I hope you enjoy my story and please leave feedback!

]]> 2020-11-05 21:57:29 UTC https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896052729 Phoebe Gentile https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896053068 if it does not work tell me in coments also its not done but just tell me what you think of it so far]]> 2020-11-05 21:57:38 UTC https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896053068 Zach zachatirsc9108 https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896053251 This is the first half of my writing I'm not quite done with the ending yet, (and I don't want to spoil it to you) but please give me some feedback on my doc. ]]> 2020-11-05 21:57:43 UTC https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896053251 Dolly O. https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896053511 Here is my writing! Please give me any feedback! ]]> 2020-11-05 21:57:49 UTC https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896053511 Tess https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896054374 Welcome to my paper and feel free to give feedback.

]]> 2020-11-05 21:58:10 UTC https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896054374 Jake T jacobtirsc9008 https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896054469 this is my story, you can give me criticism if you want ]]> 2020-11-05 21:58:12 UTC https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896054469 Quinn https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896054475 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ChWhwmDSFq4DPcNErAvDpJ3_VwdmyynsW69YDATP7Pg/edit?usp=sharing]]> 2020-11-05 21:58:13 UTC https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896054475 Avi avrammitchell https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896055271 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1m0Mu_Z8INpoRmcUckp_cvHR0N2KfugVyQiS2MP1e-Ig/edit?usp=sharing]]> 2020-11-05 21:58:35 UTC https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896055271 Audrey Hathaway https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896056944 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1emr2b84q2b9zO0JpRJfXVUhHXs1CCcVGU6VQfFFaVjc/edit?usp=sharing]]> 2020-11-05 21:59:14 UTC https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896056944 Kate Young kateyoung7709 https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896060146 Welcome to my paper. Please read and tell me if you like it and what I should change. Thank you.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1owQwM_O-_FV26jC6lJgvQjvxCWqC6ODopkTEhWU-K1o/edit]]> 2020-11-05 22:00:41 UTC https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896060146 Alexa rrinaldi1 https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896065429 Please read my narrative and give any feedback. I am open to change. ]]> 2020-11-05 22:03:03 UTC https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896065429 Lilah https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896098722 Hey, guys! This is my paper, hope you like it!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cvjMOe0WnR73-hThE_ZSO9wDvelUwGLl31vto7O6pR4/edit]]> 2020-11-05 22:18:45 UTC https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896098722 Delil5ah delildamo2608 https://padlet.com/lvusd/4uyy4zybyhk15n8w/wish/896506361 The Potting Bench Adventure
I was holding a fat ball of fluff that was puffing like CRAZY when it jumped up and started to run. I jumped up from the floor where I was seated and ran after him. 5 minutes passed. No signs of Olaf. I was starting to get a little worried when I heard puffing coming from underneath the potting bench. I slowly crept towards the potting bench. I held my breath as I looked under the bench. I gasped, There stood my trembling rabbit covered in soot.
“There you are!” I cried with complete happiness.  “Are you alright sweetie?” I reached under and felt my fingers brush a mink, soft, surface. I wrapped my hand around his body and pulled him out. He was so dirty that I had to give him a bath. 
Now I know that Olaf will never climb under the potting bench again!


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