https://padlet.com/katherine_castillo2/4u9l741mtxi097b5 en-us 2020-11-18 16:18:07 UTC 2026-03-10 02:25:32 UTC hello@padlet.com 0220741 https://padlet.com/katherine_castillo2/4u9l741mtxi097b5/wish/937626147 the final draft was more structured than the first one, you could tell that the first one was just a list of ideas. there were more grievances in the first one and they gave more reasons to want to become a free nation that gets to govern itself in the second one. the second draft is more professional whereas the first one is more of a rant. ]]> 2020-11-18 16:47:31 UTC https://padlet.com/katherine_castillo2/4u9l741mtxi097b5/wish/937626147 022262 https://padlet.com/katherine_castillo2/4u9l741mtxi097b5/wish/937626364 Some things that changed between the first and second are in the second draft it was more well written and detailed. It was as if the first one was a rough draft and the second was the final. ]]> 2020-11-18 16:47:33 UTC https://padlet.com/katherine_castillo2/4u9l741mtxi097b5/wish/937626364 022099 https://padlet.com/katherine_castillo2/4u9l741mtxi097b5/wish/937628733 The first draft had its detail and specifics, but no structure. The second one had structure and elaborated more on America's reasons for becoming independent. That's why I stole it.]]> 2020-11-18 16:47:58 UTC https://padlet.com/katherine_castillo2/4u9l741mtxi097b5/wish/937628733 0220791 https://padlet.com/katherine_castillo2/4u9l741mtxi097b5/wish/937630300 We noticed that there were a few more grievances in the final draft compared to the rough draft. He also made a lot of revision in the final draft. The reason he needed to make these changes was that more grievances allowed Jefferson to get all of his thoughts out. With the revision, it is easier to read.]]> 2020-11-18 16:48:14 UTC https://padlet.com/katherine_castillo2/4u9l741mtxi097b5/wish/937630300 022514 https://padlet.com/katherine_castillo2/4u9l741mtxi097b5/wish/937631642 2020-11-18 16:48:27 UTC https://padlet.com/katherine_castillo2/4u9l741mtxi097b5/wish/937631642 022412 https://padlet.com/katherine_castillo2/4u9l741mtxi097b5/wish/937634493 The first one is just a rough draft, while the second one was more in detail and was also the final draft. The second one is more simplified, and addresses the common people in a easier way. The second one also spoke about the experiences they faced when there was a King in charge, and how they were under an unjust government. ]]> 2020-11-18 16:48:56 UTC https://padlet.com/katherine_castillo2/4u9l741mtxi097b5/wish/937634493 022083 https://padlet.com/katherine_castillo2/4u9l741mtxi097b5/wish/937639881 2020-11-18 16:49:52 UTC https://padlet.com/katherine_castillo2/4u9l741mtxi097b5/wish/937639881 022163 https://padlet.com/katherine_castillo2/4u9l741mtxi097b5/wish/937641957 2020-11-18 16:50:12 UTC https://padlet.com/katherine_castillo2/4u9l741mtxi097b5/wish/937641957 022048 https://padlet.com/katherine_castillo2/4u9l741mtxi097b5/wish/937642794 In the rough draft of the DOI they seem to not have all their thoughts together as well as almost seem more angry. In the draft they also bring up more information including slavery which is kind of hypocritical since they also started to take others from their land but what so i know ah ha ha. lastly in the rough draft they seem less composed and have more harsh emotions such as anger. In the final draft they are more composed and bring up less of what Britain has done ]]> 2020-11-18 16:50:21 UTC https://padlet.com/katherine_castillo2/4u9l741mtxi097b5/wish/937642794 022307 https://padlet.com/katherine_castillo2/4u9l741mtxi097b5/wish/937654514 2020-11-18 16:52:29 UTC https://padlet.com/katherine_castillo2/4u9l741mtxi097b5/wish/937654514