https://padlet.com/26jcolvin/4th6lw1i5jks Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2019-12-05 15:13:05 UTC 2019-12-09 16:55:33 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f3cc-2642.png 26rcatallo https://padlet.com/26jcolvin/4th6lw1i5jks/wish/420856626 Hey Jack, I absoutley love your beginig I  love how you showed how Smith got into the crash I really felt like I was in the car. Also I like how they took him to the doctor I was worried for Smith. ONe thing you could work is maybe you could do cause and effects you know try something know I know you did but just more times, get it.]]> 2019-12-06 16:44:19 UTC https://padlet.com/26jcolvin/4th6lw1i5jks/wish/420856626 26sboachiefrimpong https://padlet.com/26jcolvin/4th6lw1i5jks/wish/421709660  Star 1:Smith tried to go up and around but the car had already hit and Smith’s front went up in flames with the hood almost going flying.Star 2: Smith spun and flipped and in the end he was upside down. Smith tried to stay calm but all he could think of was panic. Smith tried to go up and around but the car had already hit and Smith’s front went up in flames with the hood almost going flying. Smith spun and flipped and in the end he was upside down. Smith tried to stay calm but all he could think of was panic.I wish you explain more of the end of 2 and the beginning of page 3 part  I did not really understand ]]> 2019-12-09 16:54:32 UTC https://padlet.com/26jcolvin/4th6lw1i5jks/wish/421709660