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sohski — 2013-09-08 06:39:10 UTC

My friends and I hadn't met each other for a long time, so we decided to go to the park together. It was over 4pm,and I haven't done my homework yet. We had fun together, but suddenly, my mum called me and said that she needed my help, so I went home. When I had come home it was 5pm.After I did all the work that my mum said, it was dinner time, but then my father remind me that there is no bread at home for sandwiches that I bring with me at school,so I should go and buy it quickly.When I came home again,it was 8:30. After dinner, I was doing the homework with my brother, it became 9:30 and I was very tired, but instead of sleeping or taking a rest I had to do my own homework and after I had done it all,(it was over 11 o'clock) I could go to sleep. So I was very tired and very sad that I had gone to the park with my friends and hadn't done my homework first.

after + time word = AFTER 4pm

2013-09-08 06:41:23 UTC

in typing: 1 space after a comma, either 1 or 2 spaces after a full stop.

2013-09-08 06:47:34 UTC

in reported speech (e.g. my mum said that...) we move the tense backwards - so my mum said that she needED my help

2013-09-08 06:48:11 UTC

instead of should do my own homework use HAD TO because it was not just a good idea, but also you really had no choice

2013-09-08 06:57:16 UTC

great writing. check all your verbs are past

2013-09-08 07:06:37 UTC

Homework: What are your plans for the Chu-seok holiday next week? Will it be similar to last year or different? Why/How?

2013-09-09 09:22:20 UTC