https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c Made with a clear thesis at the start:) en-us 2017-07-11 16:45:27 UTC 2017-07-12 12:10:01 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Lightdecrease.png https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178552825 Advice: Ask yourself questions to ensure you have identified the topic, focus and instruction appropriately.]]> 2017-07-12 10:46:23 UTC https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178552825 https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178552875 2017-07-12 10:47:07 UTC https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178552875 my17567 https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178552915 Advice: use a mind map to brainstorm sources, examples, concepts, and vocabulary linked to the topic and, then, the focus of the question.

Comment: I think it is very practical and it help us generate ideas. In addition, it's can provide enough evidence and sources.

]]> 2017-07-12 10:47:52 UTC https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178552915 https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178552969 Advice: Use your plan to identify evidence for and against your main points.

Comment: help to organise the overall structure of SAQ but too general, and may not be applito every SAQ question.


]]> 2017-07-12 10:48:53 UTC https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178552969 yw17752 https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178552977 Write three possible thesis statements from a range of perspectives. Select one which you feel can be best supported by the evidence available.

This advice suggests writing thesis statements while doing brainstorm. It would be better if choose idea first and then write thesis. ]]> 2017-07-12 10:49:01 UTC https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178552977 https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178552981 Review your notes on language to express evaluation/ stance/ critical response.

It is also connected to the stage 4 and stage 5 because during the process reviewing the notes I have to evaluate it and give my stance.


]]> 2017-07-12 10:49:04 UTC https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178552981 https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178553022 advice：Read your response through carefully，starting with last sentence and working back to the beginning sentence by sentence.

]]> 2017-07-12 10:49:57 UTC https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178553022 yc17734 https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178553039 Advice：Read your response through carefully, starting with the last sentence and working back to the beginning sentence by sentence.

]]> 2017-07-12 10:50:22 UTC https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178553039 yz17543 https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178553107 Advice: It's better to write the thesis according to the evidence that you get,so collect the evidence first and then write your thesis.
Comments:since you won't waste time writing the thesis which is not practical.It means the thesis isn't consistent with reality ]]> 2017-07-12 10:51:03 UTC https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178553107 https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178553110 Advice: Use amind map to brainstorm sources, examples, concepts, and vocabulary linked to the topic and, then, the focus of the question.

]]> 2017-07-12 10:51:07 UTC https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178553110 https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178553116 Advice: Review your notes on language to express evaluation /stance/critical response
Comments: You can review your notes at stage 2 to recall the useful vocabulary to express your opinions. In addition, before you start writing, you can also review your notes which you taking through stage 1 to stage 5 to help build in language.]]> 2017-07-12 10:51:14 UTC https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178553116 https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178553130 advice：Ask yourself questions to ensure you have identified the topic, focus and instruction appropriately.
Comments: You can write down your topic,focus and instruction in a paper]]> 2017-07-12 10:51:23 UTC https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178553130 https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178553134 f]]> 2017-07-12 10:51:31 UTC https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178553134 https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178553192 Advise:use a mind map to brainstorm sources,examples,concepts, and vocabulary linked to the topic and,then,the focus of the question.]]> 2017-07-12 10:52:41 UTC https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178553192 https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178553199 Advice：Write three possible thesis statement from a range of perspectives. Select one which you feel can best supported by the evidence available.
Comment：It is necessary to choose a thesis which you can find enough evidence to support. This will make your argument more convincing and robust.]]> 2017-07-12 10:52:47 UTC https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178553199 jz17854 https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178553326 Advice: Use your plan to identify evidence for and against your main points.
Comment: Evidence is part of the evaluation. For and against main points mean argument and counter-argument.]]> 2017-07-12 10:53:30 UTC https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178553326 https://padlet.com/sp8376/4t9cglpz4j8c/wish/178555100 Plan:
Thesis：both material and cultural factors can contribute to the health inequalities.

Material explainations: the 5% richest live 17 years longer than the 5% poorest

Cultural explainations：attitude, values and lifestyle 


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