TASK VII by Rahma Restia https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII Answer the question based on the section. en-us 2022-10-10 01:45:02 UTC 2022-11-22 01:51:32 UTC hello@padlet.com pparisalexia https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2374324867 Princess Paris Alexia (1209622034)
The beginning of the presentation is great because it creates a emotional connection and states the background of the presentation. By saying this is the moment I’ve been waiting and it is a big day for me, Steve jobs moves the audiences curiosity and emotional connection. He also introduces apple, its history, and its contribution to the technology world. By showing it step by step and finally revealing the newest product, Jobs create this emotional feeling that the audience is a part of that journey too which makes the audience proud and moved by the latest invention. Steve Jobs also stated the problem that we have now and how iphone is the solution to the problems that “other smartphones”  have

 

]]> 2022-11-08 04:18:23 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2374324867 pparisalexia https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2374326445 Princess Paris Alexia (1209622034)
Yes, it is a good introduction. Because it introduces the product history and how the brand (Apple) contributes to ther real technology world. It also gives this sense of “you are a part of this journey” to the audience so the audience is also proud and excited for the new invention (emotional connection). Steve Jobs also stated the background or the problem that they currently have and introduced Iphone as the solution to those problems.

]]> 2022-11-08 04:20:00 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2374326445 pparisalexia https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2374331176 Princess Paris Alexia (1209622034)
The structure of the talk

I assume that the video is not a full video, there should be

1.       Introduction (where he introduce the history of Apple, stated the background problem, and how Iphone is the solution to those problems)
2.       Explanation of the product : 
        a.       Revolutionary user interface
        b.      Software
        c.       Quotes that relates to the invention of Iphone
        d.      Design
3.       Closing or conclusion

But the video is cut only until the explanation of the product 

]]> 2022-11-08 04:24:47 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2374331176 Gitasya Pane (1209622037) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2374403252 The beginning of the presentation is very interesting, exciting and the way of explaining it's very calm. stave job explains a revolutionary user interface, software, software qoutes, design and introduce three revolutionary of iPhone. the frist is a widescreen ipod with touch controls, the second is a revolutionary mobile phone, and third is a breakthrough internet communications device. show a revolutionary user interface is the result of years of research and development, such as sophisticated operating system on mobile device well because it's got everything we meed. it's got multitasking, go the best networking.]]> 2022-11-08 05:27:58 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2374403252 Gitasya Pane (1209622037) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2374417568 Yes it's a good introduction. because stave jobs introduced the original brand is iPhone was a revolutionary product from Apple and it changed the way smart phones look and work. ]]> 2022-11-08 05:42:32 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2374417568 Thalia Jessica Emeralda (1209622043) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2374420015 The beginning of the presentation attracted the attention of the audience, and the delivery of each part of the material was carried out calmly and clearly. Starting with the introduction of three revolutionary products, namely: a widescreen iPod with touch controls, a revolutionary mobile phone, and a breakthrough internet communicator. These are not three separate devices but one device is called the iPhone. Furthermore, Steve Jobs also explained the categories of the most sophisticated cell phones using data and graphs for more effective visual indications. There is a problem with how to use a smartphone, so a leap product is made that is much smarter than that of another mobile device, namely the iPhone.

]]> 2022-11-08 05:44:57 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2374420015 Thalia Jessica Emeralda (1209622043) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2374429417 Yes. It's a good introduction because it begins with a background explanation and contains important things about the discussion. Introduce the product carefully and describe the goals and progress that have been achieved. In addition, Steve Jobs also found a problem-solving discussion after there was a shortage of the previous product.]]> 2022-11-08 05:53:58 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2374429417 Gitasya Pane (1209622037) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2374429763 1. Introduction
introduced the macintosh it didn't just change apple it changed the whole computer industry. introducing 3 revolutionary product Iphone such as widescreen ipod with touch controls, revolutionary mobile phone, and breakthrough internet communications
2. Explanation
such as Revolutionary user interface, software, software qoutes and design the brand of iPhone

]]> 2022-11-08 05:54:20 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2374429763 Thalia Jessica Emeralda (1209622043) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2374552709 The structure of the talk:
1. Introduction
Contains an explanation of the product background, product development process from time to time, and problem-solving in previous products that were less effective.
2. Explain the product: 
- Revolutionary User Interface
The interplay of hardware and software 
- Software 
Desktop class applications and networking
- Software Quotes 
- Design
Something wonderfull in your hand]]> 2022-11-08 07:48:43 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2374552709 Ally Siti Medina (1209622007) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2374561009 For me, I think it was such a great way to start the presentation. Just by how the audiences are cheering emotionally and clapping over him that saying “This is a day I’ve been looking forward to for two and a half of years,” we can already sense that Steve Jobs’ delivery can make a way to a success presentation. And by how he wanted to introduced iPhone as the main presentation, but he managed to explained the journey of his invention before iPhone. For me, it made the audiences felt more excited to listened to him more, because even those who didn't know him or his career could just learned by how he opened his presentation.]]> 2022-11-08 07:54:20 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2374561009 Ally Siti Medina (1209622007) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2374569627 For me, it is a good introduction. Even in introduction, he also mentioned the main part of his presentation. Which in my opinion, it’s very nice to start because presentation should be very simple and crystal clear. He mentioned the main part of this presentation to keep the audiences feel excited and want to listen more to him, I might say. And that’s a good point to make avoid a boring or emotionless presentation.]]> 2022-11-08 08:01:33 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2374569627 Ally Siti Medina (1209622007) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2374633443 The video might not be a full version, I might say. So, for me there are only 2 structures of the talk;

1.       Introduction.
It is where Steve Jobs opened his presentation with an explanation of the journey of his invention before iPhone as the main part. And how he came up with solution of most phones’ problems with his new invention; iPhone.
2.       Explanation of the Product.
-Revolutionary User Interface. The other smartphones’ user interfaces using many buttons and keyboard that whether we need them or not, it still will be there. And the buttons can’t change for each applications. To solve this problem, he came up with an idea to get rid all of the buttons and make a giant screen and use the phone only with our fingers.
-Software. Came up with a strong foundation, iPhone runs OS 10 because it got everything we needed that can at least five years ahead from other smartphones that time.
-Software Quote.
-Design. It got a big screen and had the highest resolution screen that is 160 pixels per inch. There’s only one button on the bottom; the home button. It was really thin than any other smartphones at that time. On the side, it got volume up and down button, switch ring and silent button. On the back side, it got two megapixel camera built in. On the top, it got a headset jack, a place for sim card, and a switch for sleep and wake button. On the bottom, it got a speaker, a microphone and iPod connector.

]]> 2022-11-08 08:54:29 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2374633443 Zhelva Syazwina Putri (1209622022) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2376155211
I think the beginning of the video is great. He did a good job starting the presentation and managed to get the audience’s attention. He spoke clearly and not rushed, and the way the audience started clapping their hands after the “This is the day I’ve been looking forward for two and half a year” really showed how successful He is. He used the appropriate body and hand gestures and used the appropriate stress and intonation which helped him building connection with the audience. He did excellent at explaining Apple’s history and it’s products because he kept it simple and made it understandable for everyone. His audience looked so excited, appealed, and interested which means he succeed in engaging the audience’s interest. 

]]> 2022-11-09 04:05:35 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2376155211 Zhelva Syazwina Putri (1209622022) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2376155947 Yes, it’s a good introduction. Because he introduced his revolutionary products  which are the important part of the presentation. He introduced it very clearly and kept it simple. He also said that his revolutionary products changed the entire industry. I think he did a very good introduction by providing data and how he managed to solve the problems they were facing by inventing iPhone.


]]> 2022-11-09 04:06:28 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2376155947 Zhelva Syazwina Putri (1209622022) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2376157004 - Introduction:
In this part, Steve Jobs started his presentation by introducing  his revolutionary products, explaining Apple’s history, and solving problems they were facing by making an invention: iPhone. 
- Explanation:
• Revolutionary User Interface: Interplay of hardware and software
• Software: Software breakthrough that’s at least 5 years ahead of any other phone
• Software Quotes: Quotes related to software 
• Design 


]]> 2022-11-09 04:07:29 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2376157004 Philomena Rizka Shareta (1209622005) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2378262347 The beginning of the presentation was very interesting because he introduced some of his past products that have been successful which built the curiosity and interest of the audience to what the product was going to be. Although it was interesting to hear, but there were some parts that I think he made the audience lose their enthusiasm. Hence, he had to build it from the start again to gain the audience’s attention. 

]]> 2022-11-10 08:46:48 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2378262347 Philomena Rizka Shareta (1209622005) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2378263631 Yes it is a good introduction, because he described the advantages of the Iphone such as how it is a combination of 3 of Apple's breakthrough devices. He also shows how the Iphone is much more superior to smartphones especially with its multitouch technology. ]]> 2022-11-10 08:48:02 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2378263631 Philomena Rizka Shareta (1209622005) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2378264595 1. Introduction: 
Steve Jobs started by giving thorough backgrounds of Apple's past devices which lead them to invent the Iphone. 

2. Explanation of the product:
He described how the technology in the Iphone is more user-friendly and sophisticated. 

The video was cut short with no closing or conclusion.

]]> 2022-11-10 08:48:59 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2378264595 Elva Danaparamita (1209622025) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2379648218 In my opinion, Steve Jobs started his presentation in a good way. He spoke calmly and clearly so people didn't get hard to understand and there was a visualization on a big screen that could help to get people's attention.]]> 2022-11-11 03:20:14 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2379648218 Elva Danaparamita (1209622025) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2379654314 He spoke calmly and clearly. There was a big screen of visualization that could help people's attention. He mentioned the backgrounds of the products so people could remember and curious about what new product that he would introduce. He explained the journey of Apple's products in a simple way and a little of jokes so people didn't get bored]]> 2022-11-11 03:26:34 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2379654314 Elva Danaparamita (1209622025) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2379660146 1. Introduce > He stated the backgrounds of his products and how it is upgraded from time to time

2. Explanation of the products > He explain what is the new products, what are the differences from previous products, the innovation of technology in it, and its advantages

3. Closing (got cut)]]> 2022-11-11 03:32:34 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2379660146 Nindia Rahmadita (1209622004) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2379743238 I think the beginning of the presentation is very great, because he can attracted audience attention and speaking very calmly. When he says "this is the day i've been looking forward to for two and half of years." It makes the audience feel the emotional in his voice and also makes the audience feel curious. First he explain the first product that apple makes, and then the history, and the revolutionary products. He explain it  with a body gestures, clearly voice and also keep it simple so everyone can understand easily. ]]> 2022-11-11 05:12:11 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2379743238 Nindia Rahmadita (1209622004) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2379744641 Yes, i think its a good introduction, because he introduce the history of brand apple and then the revolutionary products. He makes the introduction very simple and clearly. He also said that he want to make smartphone that easy to use, so it is Iphone. ]]> 2022-11-11 05:13:45 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2379744641 Nindia Rahmadita (1209622004) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2379746439 •Introduction : Steve Jobs explain the history of apple and then the revolutionary products and also solving the problems by making a new easy smartphone to use : Iphone. 
 •Explanation : 
   - Revolutionary user interface 
   - Software –> Desktop class applications and networking
   - Software Quotes 
   - Iphone design. 

The video was not a full version so there is no closing or conclusion.]]> 2022-11-11 05:16:00 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2379746439 Sarah Wijaya (1209622006) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2381487075 The beginning of introduction it's very interesting. It talked about the brief history of apple, and the breakthroughs that the iphone will achieve that will make the iphone a smarthphone that is different from others. He speaks very calmy with supportive body gestures so that he can make the audience excited to listen to his presentation.


]]> 2022-11-13 11:41:53 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2381487075 Sarah Wijaya ( 1209622006 ) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2381489632 Introduction : a brief history of Apple and a little introduction of what is Iphone
Materials : Revolutinary UI ( a brekathrough that Iphone make that distinguish Iphone from other smarthphones ), Iphone Design.
Closing : Since the video incomplete there is no closing in this video.]]> 2022-11-13 11:47:11 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2381489632 Sarah Wijaya ( 1209622006 ) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2381490325 Yes, it is a good introduction because Steve Jobs explain the introduction very clearly and also he can make the audience excited to hear the presentation about Iphone.]]> 2022-11-13 11:49:05 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2381490325 Giezka Nauval (1209622032) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2381652241 I don't understand and have no interest in technology, but somehow I'm interested in continuing the video without feeling bored. It feels like I got hypnotised by his introduction and how he began his presentation. I guess everyone on the stage felt the way I do.]]> 2022-11-13 16:23:25 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2381652241 Giezka Nauval (1209622032) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2381652757 Of course, it is. The way he introduced his presentation amazed the audience and he made his introduction concise and clear. ]]> 2022-11-13 16:24:10 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2381652757 Giezka Nauval (1209622032) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2381653334 1. Introduction
 He mentioned a brief history of Apple and described the main problems concisely.
 2. Explanation
      A. Revolutionary UI
      B. Software
      C. A Quote about software and how steve job executed it
      D. Design

]]> 2022-11-13 16:25:01 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2381653334 Berliana Martogi E. M. S. (1209622045) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382192053 I think the beginning of the presentation is very interesting and catching the audience eyes, because in the beginning, he comes with his confident, with a very good opening, didn't make the audience get bored. he create like a contact with the audience, make the audience impatient what will he present next. Steve Jobs introduce the product too, even though it isn't so detail, but it makes the audience get more interesting, and more question, what will he give or make to the product.]]> 2022-11-14 03:49:32 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382192053 Berliana Martogi E. M. S. (1209622045) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382203530 Yes, I think it's officially a good introduction. the way he introduced his product, it simple but detail to make the audience sure that the product (Iphone) more better than the other smartphone. he's also have a very good gesture from the beginning

]]> 2022-11-14 04:01:05 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382203530 Berliana Martogi E. M. S. (1209622045) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382213751 1. Introduction : Steve Jobs introduced his product, history of Apple, and tell about his solution of most phone's problem is Iphone
2. Explanation the product : 
- revolutionary user interface, software, and the design of Iphone, and he gives some quotes that relates to the product.
3. Closing]]> 2022-11-14 04:12:59 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382213751 Mayra Fatima Azzahra Putri ( 1209622058) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382597351 In my opinion, the beginning of the presentation was very good. He got the presentation off to a good start and managed to get the audience's attention. First he explained the first product Apple made, then he talked briefly about the history of Apple and the revolutionary products. ]]> 2022-11-14 09:42:25 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382597351 Mayra Fatima Azzahra Putri (1209622058) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382610828 Yes, I think it is a good introduction. Without leaving out small details, he has managed to capture the audience's attention without seeming boring or unemotional. He presents the product very clearly. The audience is enthusiastic about the new invention. And it is also important for his point of view that his product (Iphone) is much better than the other smartphones.]]> 2022-11-14 09:52:29 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382610828 Mayra Fatima Azzahra Putri (1209622058) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382626326 1. Introduction : 
He explains the history of the product, the development process and then a problem-solving method, making an easy-to-use smartphone: the Iphone. 

2. Explanation : 
- Revolutionary user interface
The interaction of hardware and software 
- The software 
Desktop class applications and networks
- Software quotes 
- Iphone design

The video was cut short, it did not have a closing.

]]> 2022-11-14 10:04:15 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382626326 Muhammad Rafif Farrel Bandie (1209622042) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382720655 I think he did a great job at the beginning of the presentation, because he speaks in a very clear tone and it's very easy to understand the words that he's saying, Steve Jobs also speaks in a calm soothing way that makes the audience more than happy to pay attention]]> 2022-11-14 11:27:44 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382720655 Muhammad Rafif Farrel Bandie (1209622042) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382729446 Yes, i think it is a good introduction because he explain briefly but informative from the very beginning of the apple product up until the revolutionary Iphone. He clearly made the audience very excited and interested on the new product because all the new improvements and the advantages that normal smartphones does not have.]]> 2022-11-14 11:35:43 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382729446 Muhammad Rafif Farrel Bandie (1209622042) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382738855 1. Introduction : A short but very insightful history of the apple products until the breakthrough that has all the answer of our problems, the Iphone

2. Explanation : 
- Revolutionary User Interface
- Software of the Iphone
- Software quotes
- The design of the Iphone

The video ended without a proper closing

]]> 2022-11-14 11:44:35 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382738855 Tadzkia Jasmine M (1209622059) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382771575 In my opinion, the beginning of the presentation was very great. The way he engaged the interest of the audience by saying that was the moment he waiting for is so cool. And then he started to explain about the point of the product super clearly and the way he explained it with a good gesture which is make people get easier to understand.]]> 2022-11-14 12:15:08 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382771575 Tadzkia Jasmine M (1209622059) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382774177 Yes, i think it is because the way Steve Jobs explain from points to points is super smooth, and he also speaking in a very natural style which is make the audience comfortable to see it.]]> 2022-11-14 12:17:32 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382774177 Tadzkia Jasmine M (1209622059) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382779869 1. Introduction: He introduced his product, and then he started to explained the history of Apple.

2. Explanation about the product:
- Revolutionary User Interface
- Software of the Iphone
- Software Quotes
- The design of the Iphone

3. It supposed to the closing or conclusion but there is no closing/conclusion in the video.

]]> 2022-11-14 12:22:22 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382779869 Rangga Ray Nusa (1209622028) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382864431 The beginning of the speech was very decent. The way he made the audience applauded multiple times shows that he delivered the speech interestingly. He clarified the history and other informations of his product to attract the audience's attention.]]> 2022-11-14 13:23:00 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382864431 Rangga Ray Nusa (1209622028) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382869266 Yes. It is a good introduction. He got the audience's attention easily by his speech, it shows that he spoke in a very interesting way. It is the sign of a good presentation.]]> 2022-11-14 13:25:53 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382869266 Rangga Ray Nusa (1209622028) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382881694 - Introduction
He explained about the product's history and introduced each of them.

- Product's explanation
He clarified about the revolutionary user interface, the software of his product, software quotes, and the design of his product itself.

- There was no closing in the video.]]> 2022-11-14 13:33:44 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382881694 Dhira Puspananda Ayuningtyas (1209622011) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382944088 In my opinion the beginning of the presentatiom was really good. Steve Jobs introducing and opening the presentation with slow but sure pace. The way that he talked about the presentation is not giving you boredom but instead making you curious about what he will explains. Steve Jobs also making jokes for the audience by not giving them intense surrounding. He really engaged the audience's interest.]]> 2022-11-14 14:08:42 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382944088 Dhira Puspananda Ayuningtyas (1209622011) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382948463 It is a good introduction just by judging from the audience that they have applaude many times we can make a conclusion that is a good introduction.]]> 2022-11-14 14:11:08 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382948463 Dhira Puspananda Ayuningtyas (1209622011) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382957251 Introduction : The introduction of the product and the short history of Apple

Explanation : 
1. Revolutionary user interface
2. Software
3. Software quotes
4. Designs

Closing : there is no closing because the video was cut halfway]]> 2022-11-14 14:15:44 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2382957251 Loviska Acha Agytha (1209622024) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383017621 In my opinion, the beginning of the presentation was very great. It was interesting and eye-catching which is very important to make the audience not bored for as long as the presentation continues. The way that he present the product was structured and hits the right point. He also presents with enough gesture to make the audience more excited and intrigued.]]> 2022-11-14 14:44:49 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383017621 Loviska Acha Agytha (1209622024) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383022178 Yes, it was a good introduction. Judging by the reaction given by the audience is enough to conclude that he had done a great introduction. The audience gave him bunch of applause. The way he talk was clear enough and made the audience comfortable in listening to his presentation.]]> 2022-11-14 14:47:02 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383022178 Loviska Acha Agytha (1209622024) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383036409 1. Introduction:
He explains the history of his product briefly, he then also explains the revolution of his product from time to time and solves the problem that they had faced by inventing iPhone.

2. Explanation: 
- Revolutionary User Interface
- Software
- Software quote
- Design

3. closing:
The video didn't show the closing part of the presentation since it was cut off.]]> 2022-11-14 14:54:36 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383036409 Dewi Anggraeni Hayatun Nufus (1209622046) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383119924 I think the start of the presentation was really good and caught the audience's attention. Steve opened the presentation very relaxed and not boring by introducing apple products and explaining a little history that made the audience interested.]]> 2022-11-14 15:34:43 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383119924 Rifat Hilarry (1209622020) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383140036 I think that the beginning of the presentation successfully brings up the audience's attention by introducing that Apple has made a breakthrough. The breakthrough itself also heightens the audience's curiosity and when the breakthrough is a device that combines iPod, a phone, and an internet capability in a single device with the name iPhone, the audience's curiosity is satisfied. So they looked up to what the presentation had to offer]]> 2022-11-14 15:44:03 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383140036 Dewi Anggraeni Hayatun Nufus (1209622046) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383144011 Yes, i think this is a very good introduction, Steve can explain Apple products and their history in great detail and clearly, from the beginning of Apple products to rovolutioner products. but still simple and easy to understand and succeeded in making the audience believe that the iPhone is better than other smartphones.]]> 2022-11-14 15:46:17 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383144011 Sophie Angelique Nasution (1209622019) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383146716 Steve Jobs did a great job at starting his commercial presentation, his manner of introducing himself and the topic/product he was about to present successfully captured the audience's attention. He appeared confident and enthusiastic about it, and I believe that the speaker's mood always affects the audience, and so his richness of confidence did affect the audience. As we can see from the video, the entire studio's attention was on him. His body language, intonation, and word choice were flawless, and he successfully hypnotized the entire audience into paying attention to him.]]> 2022-11-14 15:47:52 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383146716 Rifat Hilarry (1209622020) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383147676 In my opinion, the introduction is a good one. Why it was a good introduction? Because the introduction itself managed to captivate the audience's attention, it managed to heighten the audience's curiosity, those are the factors that determine the success of a presentation]]> 2022-11-14 15:48:21 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383147676 Sophie Angelique Nasution (1209622019) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383152664 His introduction was, in my opinion, brief but adequate. He didn't make too much small talk and jumped right into the topic to neatly wrap up the presentation while keeping it interesting and engaging. The way he spoke could persuade viewers that the brand he was selling was indeed the best to be compared to other brands at the time.]]> 2022-11-14 15:51:12 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383152664 Rifat Hilarry (1209622020) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383159311 It's not a full video but nevertheless, I am able to structurize the presentation

I. Introduction of the product
This part explains the history of Apple itself and the introduction of problems that have been solved by iPhone

II. Explanation of the product
iPhone has many features including:
A. Revolutionary User Interface
B. Software (baby software)
C. The design of the iPhone 

III. Conclusion of the whole presentation]]> 2022-11-14 15:55:19 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383159311 Dewi Anggraeni Hayatun Nufus (1209622046) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383163990 1. introduction 
steve explained from the start the apple product and its history. then the process of developing and solving problems where iphone is the solution.

2. Explanation
-Revolutionary user interface 
-Software
-Software quotes
-Design

3. Closing
there is no closing in the video


]]> 2022-11-14 15:57:54 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383163990 Sophie Angelique Nasution (1209622019) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383164183 1. Introduction
He introduced himself briefly and jumped right into the history of Apple and how revolutionary it was, fulfilling the needs of easy to use smartphones

2. Explanation 
a. iPhone's advanced User Interface (UI) that was revolutionary
b. It's software, and how everything we need is available in the newest iPhone
c. Software quote
d. Practical and advanced design of iPhone

3. Closing/conclusion
There was a closing in his presentation, but the video ends halfway]]> 2022-11-14 15:58:02 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383164183 Nadia Zahra Roseno (1209622035) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383196743 in my opinion, at the beginning of the presentation, it can attracted the attention of the audience. A good and understandable way of delivering the presentations allows people to imagine how the products they offer. He can makes the audience's feels want to try it. Steve's job also not only makes a flat presentation, he gives just a little jokes to make the audience not to feel bored at that time. ]]> 2022-11-14 16:17:46 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383196743 Nadia Zahra Roseno (1209622035) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383203183 For me, yes it is a good introduction. The reasons are, because of the way he can make the audience's give their attention to him, and also how he introduce also described about the product. 
The way he can makes the situations feel interest with no flat presentation. ]]> 2022-11-14 16:21:23 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383203183 Nadia Zahra Roseno (1209622035) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383219490 The structure of the talk:
1) Introduction
The introduction consists the explanation story of the journey. Especially his invention. The background of the product and the solving.
2) Explanation
The explanation contains of the Revolutionary user interface. software, software quotes and also explain about the specific design. The resolution of the screen and also he explain about the side, back, top, and the button sides of the iPhone.
3) Closing
Actually he must makes any closing statements and a conclusion but there was no in the video. The video was cut and didn't have any closing and conclusion]]> 2022-11-14 16:30:27 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383219490 Yumna Najwa Imtiyaz (1209622038) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383219540 In my opinion he did very well at the beginning of the presentation, very simple but clear introduction, he told the audience what history from the apple first to give understanding to the audience cause of course not everyone knows about the history from apple, he gave the visual from the screen to better understand the audience, and he invited everyone to enjoy the presentation with his style (raised his voice) to make them focus on it and put some jokes in it to not bore them.

]]> 2022-11-14 16:30:29 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383219540 Ariel Iktus Sukandar (1209622054) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383226667 I think Steve Job has manage the crowd super well, starting from the intro when he already made the situation becoming really suspicious but in a good way of course. He own the crowd, he has the ability for the crowd control and the way he delivers and promoting the new iPhone is such a maestro, everything deliver perfectly!]]> 2022-11-14 16:34:32 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383226667 Ariel Iktus Sukandar (1209622054) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383239793 Yes it is a good introduction. Because, the way he gave the visual from the screen to make the audience can easily figure out how would the iPhone be. So it is not only the way he talked to the audience but also the way he able to control the situation and he also try to make the audience laughing by the time he threw a simple jokes but one thing, it is all under Steve Job's control. He gains all of the audience respect and applause. ]]> 2022-11-14 16:41:17 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383239793 Yumna Najwa Imtiyaz (1209622038) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383243818 1. Introduction 

Very good opening, he told the histrory from the apple product is and the problems that exist are also how to overcome the use of the product.

 

2. Explanation

-Revolutionary user interface 
-Software
-Software quotes
-Design of the Iphone

 

3. Closing

There is no closing in the video
]]> 2022-11-14 16:43:35 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383243818 Ariel Iktus Sukandar (1209622054) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383244451 1. introduction 
steve explained from the start the apple product and its history. then the process of developing and solving problems where iphone is the solution.

2. Explanation
-Revolutionary user interface 
-Software
-Software quotes
-Design

3. Closing
there is no closing in the video


]]> 2022-11-14 16:43:53 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383244451 Yumna Najwa Imtiyaz (1209622038) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383281904 It is a really good presentation he always give the understanding first to the audience, like he explains the problems then how to solve the problems are. And not just focus to the screen but he makes an eye contacts to the audience also dont forget about the body movement which is a very good presentation and he knows very well what the audience need it to make them focus on it like the screen for the visual, clear explanation, gives good understanding, and he also knows what he have to do to not bore the audience.]]> 2022-11-14 17:05:17 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383281904 Dirgantara Realito Tou Fannsyah (1209622031) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383395079     What I think of the beginning of the presentation is that Steve really boils the curiosity in me to keep paying attention to what he would say next. Steve giving a brief history of what Apple has made makes me more interested in his presentation. 

]]> 2022-11-14 18:13:30 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383395079 Dirgantara Realito Tou Fannsyah (1209622031) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383417569 It is marvelous. I really like Steve’s style of communication here, he’s not just standing there and talking what he is really about to introduce to the audience. Steve doesn’t leap directly to the point, instead, he carried out his introduction in a slower pace. Garnering the audiences' heart and curiosity, with a slight touch of humor. With that being said, those said things make the introduction more engaging and fun to be followed.

]]> 2022-11-14 18:26:51 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383417569 Dirgantara Realito Tou Fannsyah (1209622031) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383459616 1. Introduction

   - The introduction contains a brief history of products Apple has made, carried out in a relaxing, fun, and  engaging way, then followed up by the reveal of the latest Apple’s product called “iPhone”, which of course succeed to grab the audience's attention and curiosity.

 

2. Explanation

   - Revolutionary UI

   - Software 

   - Software quotes

   - Design

 

3. Closing

    - The posted video doesn’t have a closing, it just ended before the presentation even finished.

]]> 2022-11-14 18:51:31 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2383459616 Ayara Indi Alifia (1209622047) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2392773227 Steve Jobs is still the world's greatest corporate storyteller. In the beginning of his presentation, he used a method of introduction that was very interesting and interactive. Because he seems to attract the curiosity of the audience. Then, the choice of words is very good and right on target. By choosing words that seem to provide new innovations, that's what really makes the audience interested. ]]> 2022-11-21 15:20:00 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2392773227 Ayara Indi Alifia (1209622047) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2392792422 Yes, because of the way he interacted and the way he introduced his previous product and the shortcomings of his previous product and compared his product to other market products. Before Jobs revealed the new phone, he took a moment to review the history of Apple, telling a story that built up to the big event. Then he provides new solutions and innovations. When Jobs first told the audience that Apple was going to introduce a mobile phone, he said, "Here it is." Instead of showing the iPhone, the slide displayed a photo of an iPod with an old-fashioned rotary dial on it. The audience got a kick out of it, laughing and clapping. They have been played, and Jobs was enjoying their reactions.]]> 2022-11-21 15:32:34 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2392792422 Ayara Indi Alifia (1209622047) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2392807505 1. Introduction 

- Before Jobs revealed the new phone, he took a moment to review the history of Apple, telling a story that built up to the big event. Then he provides new solutions and innovations.

2. Explanation 

- The revolutionary iPhone's advanced user interface (UI).
- It's software, and the latest iPhone has everything we need.
- Software quote
- Practical and advanced design of the iPhone

3. Closing/conclusion

There was no closing or conclusion on the video.
]]> 2022-11-21 15:42:17 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2392807505 Muhammad Fariq Kahfi Razani (1209622021) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2392873954 In my opinion, Steve Jobs started the presentation with courage and confidence. He made the audience attracted to what he was saying. He delivered history of Apple in words that are easily understandable. The presentation could be boring if Steve Jobs didn't tell jokes, it is a way to get the audience's attentions. His word choice, body language, and intonation really made the whole studio stunned.]]> 2022-11-21 16:25:32 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2392873954 Muhammad Fariq Kahfi Razani (1209622021) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2392895927 The introduction was beyond good. He gave understanding in which he wanted to explain by showing visuals. I really like his explanations, and the way he communicates. Furthermore, he also interacted flawlessly with the audience, which made the presentation even more interesting. He was not in rush at introducing, instead he spoke with slower pace while bringing curiosity to the audience. He controlled the whole studio, and deserved applauses.]]> 2022-11-21 16:41:27 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2392895927 Muhammad Fariq Kahfi Razani (1209622021) https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2392905706 1. Introduction
Steve Jobs began the presentation with the history of Apple. This tells how the company grew from nothing to one of the biggest companies in the world which brings out innovations to the world.

2. Explanation
-Revolutionary User Interface 
-Software
-Software quotes
-Design of iPhone

3. Closing
The video doesn't show how the presentation ended.]]> 2022-11-21 16:48:52 UTC https://padlet.com/rahmarestia/Chapter3TaskVII/wish/2392905706