Writing Task by Felipe Eduardo Gomez Lizama

Set of connectors

felipegomez7 — 2021-07-29 12:31:49 UTC

Some connectors work BEST together. Here you have 3 sets of connectors that you can use in your texts.

a) 1.-Speaking for myself
2.- Firstly, 3.-Secondly, 4.-finally, 5.-in conclusion.

b) 1.-To begin with, 2.-furthermore, 3.-what is more, 4.-finally, 5.-to sum up.

c)1.-As I see it,2.- first,3.- next, 4.-lastly, 5.-all things considered.

Instructions

felipegomez7 — 2021-07-29 12:32:08 UTC

Write a simple text using connectors to structure your writing.

Answer the following question:
'' Do you think Schools should open and start receiving students?''

You must START YOUR OPINION (P1), GIVE THREE REASONS(P,2,3,4) , AND SUMMARIZE YOUR IDEAS IN THE LAST PARAGRAPH (P5).

Use the connectors covered in class to structure your text.

Felipe Gómez

felipegomez7 — 2021-07-30 14:25:44 UTC

Write your text.

2021-07-30 14:34:53 UTC

Some connectors work BEST together. Here you have 3 sets of connectors that you can use in your texts.

David Taucana

davidtaucanal — 2021-07-30 14:37:40 UTC

'' Do you think Schools should open and start receiving students?''

1-as i see it, isn´t a bad idea as long as this is fulfilled and respected:

2) first, i think that is very important get rules of distancing and disinfection in addition to those stated by the government

3) second, i firmly believe that the family and the student decide to sent or not sent at the student to school

4) finally all thing considered that the students, teachers and more employers into the school everyone must be vaccinated, fulthemore all are more protected

5) to summarise, as long as these measures are complied with, the safety of all could be maintained

Gabriel Hernández

2021-07-30 14:37:47 UTC

'' Do you think Schools should open and start receiving students?''
Speaking for myself, schools should not be open yet for the following reasons.

Firstly, as i see it, the numbers of infections are still not excellent enough to open the schools.

Secondly, few people own cars so they should take a bus, where the distance is clearly not respected.

Finally, furthermore to leaving the house too much, you run the risk of infecting a family member.

In conclusion, as I see it, going back to presential classes would be too much exposure for students and teachers, in addition to the risk of infecting a family member by having to go out.

astrid gonzalez

astridgonzalezs — 2021-07-30 14:38:14 UTC

To begin with, I firmly believe that schools shouldn't open and run classes.

Furthermore, the fact that we're going through a difficult situation since of the pandemic issue, the best thing to do is to keep your distance from people and take care of yourself.

What is more, we have to consider that if schools reopen, the risk of contagion is higher and the problem is if some people get infected and don't realise it.

Finally they could pass it on to their close family members and spread it even further.

To sum up, it has pros and cons, but in my opinion it's better not go back to school until the pandemic is over.

Vicente Ávila

2021-07-30 14:40:46 UTC

'' Do you think Schools should open and start receiving students?''

speaking for myself, I think it shouldn't be done yet because
first of all, student safety is not 100%.

The first reason is the danger of contagion for families and,furthermore that the security measures are not up to par.

And the second reason is that there will be little attendance.

and finally the last reason is that a student infects and makes other students sick.

In summary is not a good idea to go to school for the reasons that I already said.

Camila Urrutia

2021-07-30 14:43:17 UTC

"Do you think Schools should open and start receiving students"

1- To begin with, i think it is a bad idea for students return to face to face classes, furthemore, the situation for the word in general

the pandemic is not resulting

first exist more possibility of contagion due to the large number of students in the school

second the schools have the necessaty resources to ensure the health of each student, to have them all with social distance, alcohol gel, masks and with salons and patios sanitized accordingly, what is more, students would tun even more risk, and not only them, teachers, assistants and falimies at home.

third , what is the usea of haaving all the cenessary measures to control social distance and covid-19 of if most of the students travel by public transport, such as buses, subways, buses, finally, this means that students will continue to anyway exposed to geetting infected

to sup up, it is not a good idea for studentss to return to face-toface classes , since the population is more exposed, because they are also more prone to infection

I. Preuss

2021-07-30 14:44:40 UTC

Do you think Schools should open and start receiving students?

1) Speaking for myself. I believe that schools, should open and receiving students.
2) To begin with the lessons face to face it does not compare with an classes online. Having a professor around is a big differnce when it comes to learning.
3) Furthemore the most people in the country have been vaccinated so it could be concluded that the country has already controlled the virus.
4) What is more, acording to sanitary measures there are certain students who have priority when it comes to going back to class and it is also voluntary for now.
5) In conclusion and as i see it the the school comunity should come back. It is ridiculous to continue confined to our homes, since the pandemic has already been controlled. Not to mention stress, mental and physical health. The estudents and professors need come back to schools.

2021-07-30 14:46:24 UTC

Ruth Alvarado

ruthalvaradoc — 2021-07-30 14:48:59 UTC

As I see it, I think that schools should start to open and revive students since first because of online classes many students left their classes for different reasons, for example they did not have enough resources to have internet or technological devices.

Lastly, it can be said that face-to-face classes are much better than online classes since in this way students learn better and are not stressed so much by online classes at home, it must also be borne in mind that if schools open they should have all the necessary sanitary measures.

All things considered of the above, I believe and agree that schools should open.

Ariel alvarez

2021-08-04 15:46:10 UTC

'' Do you think Schools should open and start receiving students?''

1- Speaking for myself, I feel that schools should not open yet.

2-First of all, this may depend very much on how the hygienic treatment of schools is due to the pandemic.

3- As a Second I feel that there will be a high chance of the virus multiplying, because covid-19 is very contagious.

4-Finally, I think that if there are classes there may be a resurgence of covid. furthemore maybe in other places if there is good hygiene if it can work the return to class.

5-in conclusion, this may be quite relative to the responsibilities of hygiene in the return to school. it may work in other places and not in others, but in general with public transportation, it will harm the contagion.

Alex soto 😎🥵

alexsotot — 2021-08-04 15:50:50 UTC

"Do you think schools should open and start receiving students?"
1)speaking for myself i think that schools should open in an orderly manner so that infections do not occur

2)First I think there is a possibility of some contagion but if you act in a good way the virus will not infect the whole school

3)Second, most students do not pay attention in online classes

4)

benjamin guzman

2021-08-04 15:51:52 UTC

1.To begin with, I think it would be a bad idea, I think it is still too early.

The first reason that this is a bad idea is because apart from the adult people who work, there are people who do not work and only walk because if on the street, I have noticed this.

I think that adding the students to all those people would be too much of a group of people.

In addition, the only people who lack the vaccine are them, that is, the smallest children, it could bring many consequences, perhaps in generations.

In other words, the worst case scenario could lead to the death of the little ones and for these reasons it would be a bad idea.

Sofía Gutiérrez

2021-08-04 15:52:12 UTC

In my opinion, that schools will going to open to students will be great for the academical study, but also we need to understand that we need to have some rules about the social distance, face mask and all that we need too prevent the COVID-19.
Additionally about this point of view, is a good idea do this because if we do that, all the students will going to have the access to the lesons and teachers.
To summarize, open schools will do that student have a better studing and of course have our teachers close to us, like at the schools, always will be betther then just have access to them two hours per week.

Benjamin Canales

2021-08-05 02:05:58 UTC

1.as I see it, it would be a very bad decision if it were to be made.

2. as I see it, it would be a very bad decision if it were to be made.
first, the sanitary measures are not yet sufficient or effective enough to avoid contagion within the school establishments, furthermore assuming that the sanitary measures will be respected (speaking for the students).

3.Secondly, the sanitary measures are still insufficient because on the way several of the students have to take public transportation to the educational establishment, which is more dangerous than being in the school, high school, university, among others.

4.finally, if one person is infected inside the establishment, more than one person would be infected and this would spread the contagion to their relatives, spreading it more and more and causing an outbreak in the place, which could lead a whole commune or city to quarantine.

5. in conclusion, forcing children to attend on-site classes without even being sure that there will be no contagion or outbreaks is a terrible decision on the part of the state for the reasons given above.

Felipe Schuman

2021-08-11 02:43:21 UTC

'' Do you think Schools should open and start receiving students?''
1.-As I see it, it is not a bad idea if the following requirements are met and are met to the letter:

2.- First, I think it is very important to have supplies and sanitary measures such as alcohol gel, soap in the bathrooms, chlorine for them, disinfect the tables every time the students go out for recess and maintain the social distancing that the SEREMI marks .

3.-Secondly, I believe that students, teachers and assistants who attend school in person should be vaccinated so that everything would be more controlled and safe for those students with health problems.

4.- Finally, the family and the student must decide if the student will attend face-to-face classes because if someone in their family or the student himself has a health problem, they must make the best decision for them and not get infected.

5.- In conclusion, the establishment must open its doors as long as all the aforementioned conditions are met.

Lucero Ahumada

2021-08-12 23:57:29 UTC

As I see it, this is a complicated decision, because you have to take into account different points of view, but I think you have to "prioritize" going back to school.

First, one of the reasons for not returning to classes has been the risk to which the people who are in the establishment are exposed.

Next, speaking of prioritization, third and fourth graders should have a good preparation for the transition test.

Lastly, students who run into internet connection problems cannot be denied education, so they should be priority in this case too.

All things considered, that the return to classes, prioritized or not, must comply with the basic supplies for the safety of the people who are in the establishment.

Gibran Mendoza

2021-08-13 13:15:38 UTC

In my opinion, I believe that schools should be opened for good academic development. But not as in the past, we must take into account the new rules to prevent COVID-19.

First, I think you have to go back to classes but in an organized way, and that the establishments comply with sanitary measures to avoid all possible contagions.

Next, online classes should not disappear, an example would be that one week would be online and the other face-to-face and give priority to students who do not have internet.

Finally, it is very important that the establishment has sanitary measures and that the classrooms comply with social distancing, as well as disinfecting the classrooms every time the students go out

In conclusion, the return to school would be a good idea as long as the establishments have the necessary norms and supplies for the safety of the people in the establishments.

Ignacia Elgueta

2021-08-24 23:01:58 UTC

‘' Do you think Schools should open and start receiving students?''

In my opinion, you should consider going back to face-to-face classes as long as the security measures implemented by the government are met.

It must be taken into account that not all students have the necessary conditions to have a good education at home, for instance, not having internet or a good connection to this

Next, another reason to return to class is to consider the importance of mental health since being behind a screen makes socialization difficult and increases stress more, furthermore, there are physical damages such as sight that is affected by the constancy of looking at the screen.

Finally, we have the third reason, students are more concentrated when they are in a school environment than at home since they have more distractions, so they believe that being at home they have more freedom not to fulfill their homework.

In conclusion, I believe that we must return to face-to-face classes because, as I said before, it would be an improvement in the health and quality of student learning, obviously following the corresponding sanitary measures.

Benjamin Salazar

2021-08-31 01:05:06 UTC

In my opinion, it should be considered that it is still not certain that the schools will open, but if they open they should open with a limit of students and with the corresponding measures.

First, there must be a limit of students so that the probability of contagion is low, because if there is an infected student, it could affect many if they all decide to attend.

Secondly, there must be a hygiene control to ensure that no one gets sick, thus reducing the probability of contagion avoiding affecting others.

Lastly, these measures are necessary since, there are people who do not respect the measures in this pandemic, causing others to get sick and this affects face-to-face attendance at classes, so it is not certain that all students are healthy from the virus and should avoid any risk.

In conclusion, as a see it could be a good idea to open schools, but it must be done with the corresponding measures, and only students who need it should attend because there are students who are stressed by being locked up at home, and not being able to socialize, this could affect them psychologically and social contact could prevent it.

Joaquín Bernal Serey

joaquinalobern — 2021-09-05 01:38:33 UTC

1) Speaking for myself, I think so. Schools should open and start receiving students.

2)Firstly, I understand that because of the global pandemic, educational centers have been shut down in person.

3)Secondly, because of the pandemic, we had to adapt from online education, being at home and locked up, without physical or social activity.

4)Finally, as a student and for other students, we can take precautions to adapt to face-to-face classes.

5)In conclusion, the schools should already receive the students, taking the sanitary measures, to have and attend classes.