https://padlet.com/26rbuehler/4s34uy8m4ks7 Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2019-12-05 18:36:43 UTC 2019-12-10 16:07:10 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f60e.png 26edesteur https://padlet.com/26rbuehler/4s34uy8m4ks7/wish/420935608 I like how you use similes and figurative language in your story. It adds description and makes your story fun to read. I also think you developed your character very well, and had a satisfying conclusion. One thing that you could keep in mind for improvement is the amount of description and stretching to give certain moments or parts. I find that some parts are underdone and have no description, while other parts have too much description. Overall, however, you had a excellent story! A 9.5/10 for me.]]> 2019-12-06 18:46:47 UTC https://padlet.com/26rbuehler/4s34uy8m4ks7/wish/420935608 https://padlet.com/26rbuehler/4s34uy8m4ks7/wish/422241534 I like how you change your character's attitude from selfish to caring. My favorite part of your story is when Dexter sees the homless man and learns a lesson. ]]> 2019-12-10 16:05:03 UTC https://padlet.com/26rbuehler/4s34uy8m4ks7/wish/422241534