Argument Writing Reflection by Kimberly Leibold https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij Competitive Sports Paper en-us 2018-03-29 13:24:40 UTC 2025-11-21 12:22:36 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Rocket.png kleibold https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247240604 Comment with a reflection about this assignment. What did you do well? What could you have done better? ]]> 2018-03-29 13:26:56 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247240604 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247244659 I think I could have put more but I didn’t want to make u suffer reading my long juicie paragraphs ]]> 2018-03-29 13:35:21 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247244659 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247245075 Aidan
I did good on working  but I could do more work on it ]]> 2018-03-29 13:36:13 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247245075 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247245726 I think i could have added more detail and more facts on the story. I liked how i organized the story. ]]> 2018-03-29 13:37:40 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247245726 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247245938 I did well on the writing but I could have done better on more detail for the body paragraphs 

]]> 2018-03-29 13:38:11 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247245938 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247247363 Luis
I could have add more ]]> 2018-03-29 13:40:47 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247247363 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247247986 Zi

I think I did good maybe I need more improvements on my details and citations ]]> 2018-03-29 13:42:01 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247247986 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247248121 Add more phargraph kylie]]> 2018-03-29 13:42:19 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247248121 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247248477 Caleb 
 I feel like I added enough sentences and provided a lot of evidence to support my claim


]]> 2018-03-29 13:43:04 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247248477 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247248608 Andrew
 I stated my facts well and made strong conclusions. I could’ve made my body paragraphs longer]]> 2018-03-29 13:43:23 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247248608 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247254768 Starr Peters 

I think I did really good job stating the quotes and I think I did really good with my writing paragraphs. I could have written longer sentences.]]> 2018-03-29 13:56:39 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247254768 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247256292                            Alexis Smith
I think i did good with my spelling  and my paragraphs ]]> 2018-03-29 13:59:37 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247256292 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247264227 Curtis Shealy

I think I did good with my quotes and my paragraph and really good on starting my sentences.]]> 2018-03-29 14:17:44 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247264227 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247265737 Madison- I think that I did good with my spelling but I could of done better with my intro and conclusion]]> 2018-03-29 14:21:18 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247265737 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247267448 Hailey-i think I’d well on my success and did your horrible at doing at last minute.]]> 2018-03-29 14:25:08 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247267448 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247271226 stephanie-i think that if i spent more time on it i could of done better]]> 2018-03-29 14:34:02 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247271226 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247272545 Bubba
I did pretty good ]]> 2018-03-29 14:37:28 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247272545 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247272765 Zaira 
    I think it’s good because of what I put but I could have made it more longer ]]> 2018-03-29 14:38:04 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247272765 hughesnatoshaa https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247272975        Natosha-I did good with coming up with ideas , and next time I would want to stay more focused.]]> 2018-03-29 14:38:43 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247272975 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247274171 I did well with staying on task about what I was focusing on and adding good details. I think that if I thought about my quotes better that's what I could've done better on.- halle lucas ]]> 2018-03-29 14:42:19 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247274171 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247275094 Amber
 I think I did well on body paragraphs, but I think I could do better with spelling and also grammar ]]> 2018-03-29 14:44:46 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247275094 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247277368 Nicholas
Use more grammar and punctuation ]]> 2018-03-29 14:50:16 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247277368 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247277847 I think I did well was my paragraphs and quotes. I could have done better by explaining it more 
Keylin]]> 2018-03-29 14:51:26 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247277847 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247314537 Hannah
I did the best on citing I need to work on spelling ]]> 2018-03-29 16:18:11 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247314537 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247316051 Devin R.

I think I did the paragraph and quote structure quite well, however the citations, I could’ve just included a slight little bit more.]]> 2018-03-29 16:21:47 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247316051 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247316114 Sophia
I think one thing I did well was citing sources. One thing I can work on is grammar.]]> 2018-03-29 16:21:56 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247316114 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247316397 Skyler

I probably should have put more details in my paragraphs but I did include quotes in every paragraph ]]> 2018-03-29 16:22:36 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247316397 walkerevanc https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247317493 I think I did good on citations but I think I could do better on adding details and grammar - Evan ]]> 2018-03-29 16:24:08 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247317493 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247317717 Sydney
 
I did good on my punctuation I think, but I am not the best at making my paragraphs long]]> 2018-03-29 16:24:38 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247317717 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247317797 Jayson 

One thing I did good at was using punctuation ]]> 2018-03-29 16:24:49 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247317797 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247318172 Jakob Rish one thing i did good at was following the quotes I could have worked on more details ]]> 2018-03-29 16:25:44 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247318172 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247318763
  • Abby Hoover- I should have added more details. I did well with grammar and spelling. 
    • ]]>     2018-03-29 16:27:20 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247318763     https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247319630 * Jessica I think that I did good with punctuation. I could have done better with my conclusion.]]> 2018-03-29 16:29:54 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247319630 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247319642 I think I did well on including my facts correctly. I think I could have stayed focused more. 
    Nicholas]]>     2018-03-29 16:29:57 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247319642     https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247319883 Brayden- I think I did well over all I maybe could have added a little more thought but still think I i did good.]]> 2018-03-29 16:30:43 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247319883 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247320510 Gage Ellisor - I think that I should’ve used my time better but I also think that we got way too much time. This was a simple assignment that should’ve taken a week at most. I think that I used good word choice.]]> 2018-03-29 16:32:30 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247320510 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247320849 Janet 
    I probably could’ve done more quotes in it or something but other than that I feel like I included everything that was needed ]]>     2018-03-29 16:33:35 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247320849     https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247321175 Kira
    I think I did well on including quotes but I could have worked harder on sentence structure. I made good points as well.]]>     2018-03-29 16:34:37 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247321175     https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247321797 Thelesie
    I think I could of added more detail. I did really well on the argument. ]]>     2018-03-29 16:36:33 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247321797     https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247321996 K.C McDaniel

    I believe I did well on quotes and sentence structures, but I could have done better on being more consistent.]]>     2018-03-29 16:37:04 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247321996     https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247322465 Caleb Shumpert
    I think I did good including all my information but I could’ve included more quotes ]]>     2018-03-29 16:38:19 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247322465     https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247331031 Dallas mcdaniel

    1. I think that I did well on quotes but I probably could’ve added more info
    ]]>     2018-03-29 16:59:19 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247331031     https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247333096 Hannah S
    I think I did good on finding and citing my quotes ]]>     2018-03-29 17:05:25 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247333096     https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247338440 I think this school and class sucks]]> 2018-03-29 17:20:58 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247338440 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247338618 I did good with organization and  could have done better on stating the topic dalton]]> 2018-03-29 17:21:30 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247338618 safkerkalebc https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247339245 I think that I could have done better but I don’t like this]]> 2018-03-29 17:22:55 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247339245 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247340017 Kirsten Harmon 
      I could of put more transitions and I think I did well with putting quotes in writing. ]]>     2018-03-29 17:24:42 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247340017     https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247340582 Bailey 

    I like all my evidence that I used but I think I could have did better on the introduction and the conclusion ]]>     2018-03-29 17:26:00 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247340582     https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247341923 I think I introduced, stated and cited my quotes pretty good. I could've elaborated more and had affection in my writing.]]> 2018-03-29 17:29:19 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247341923 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247342805 I feel like I did a lot of spelling good.]]> 2018-03-29 17:31:33 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247342805 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247343157 I wrote well in my opinion I could have put more time into this but I didn’t  - Noah morales]]> 2018-03-29 17:32:26 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247343157 zimmermanconnorw https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247343595 Connor

    I think I did a good job putting in the quotes. But i think I could have inserted more punctuation ]]>     2018-03-29 17:33:34 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247343595     https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247346979 Jamie
    I think I did good on organization but I could have cited it a little bit more]]>     2018-03-29 17:41:17 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247346979     https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247347173 I wrote about Cons and I I think I did a good job on my quotes]]> 2018-03-29 17:41:50 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247347173 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247347261 Avila -I think I did good on my paragraphs and my information but not my quotes ]]> 2018-03-29 17:42:00 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247347261 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247347493 Olivia Clemons
     I think my argument paper is pretty good. I think had everything that i needed.]]>     2018-03-29 17:42:38 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247347493     https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247347586 I wrote about Pros and I think I did pretty good on my quotes

    From your boi josh]]>     2018-03-29 17:42:57 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247347586     https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247349052 I think I did pretty well on it but I probably could have put more information in it]]> 2018-03-29 17:46:49 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247349052 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247352284 Havanna 

    I did pros and I think I did pretty good on quotes and how long the paragraphs were. And I could’ve put more details ]]>     2018-03-29 17:55:25 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247352284     https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247353322 I did cons I had a lot of good information and a lot of quotes.marissa]]> 2018-03-29 17:58:20 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247353322 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247356157 Luis
    I think I did good]]>     2018-03-29 18:05:13 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247356157     https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247358381 I think I did really good with the guotes and good on all the  paragraphs makenize ]]> 2018-03-29 18:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247358381 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247360772 i think that i did good]]> 2018-03-29 18:17:39 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247360772 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247360882 Brennon I was pro and I would love more time on this]]> 2018-03-29 18:17:57 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247360882 https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247370922 I did good with organization but I did bad with the citing dalton ]]> 2018-03-29 18:49:11 UTC https://padlet.com/kleibold/4rnk4jxs7lij/wish/247370922