Interesting: The sentencing seems a little low for the severity of the fraud

Even Better: Could have less text on the slides

Something interesting from this presentation is Mizuhara was forced to pay 14 million dollars for punishment.

Something they could've done better is they could not read of the slide as much but overall went really well.

Interesting: $17 million is crazy!

Even Better: Talk slower

Interesting- The translator stole over 17 millon dollars from Ohtani

Even Better- didn't see anything that needed to be better, maybe some pictures?

Interesting - How easy it was for him to steal it

Even Better - look at the board less

I: It's interesting how long Mizuhara worked with Ohtani, and how even after all of that time together, he was willing to lose that built-up friendship for personal gain.

E: Try to read off of the slides a little less.

Interesting- Did a good job explaining what was going on

Even better- Maybe a little less monotone

I: interesting to hear about the effects on the MLB as a whole

E: a few things were restated multiple times for every sections

Interesting that somehow the translator stole 17 million before being caught

There could be a few fewer words on the slide, so it's easy to follow, and maybe some more pictures or a video

Interesting: That is a lot of money, seems like it had a huge impact on many

Even Better: Would be even better if the slides had a similar amount of info.

Interesting: Your topic was very interesting

Even Better: Use more pictures

interesting - I liked hearing the facts about this situation

I - I thought it was interesting how this affected views on translators.

E - You could have a little less writing on your slides because I feel like you had it.

Even Better- I'd suggest adding more photos and less paragraphs so we listen to your words more

Interesting: Was interesting to see how many Shadows he cast, and how short his sentence is.

Interesting - I have never heard of this case, so very interesting to learn about

Even Better - Could put a little less writing on the screen

Interesting: The topic is pretty unique compared to the others that I see here.

Even Better: The font size could be consistent per slide.

Interesting- repeated animal welfare act violations, staff pressured to focus on profits over welfare

Even Better- Try not to read off the slides as much

Interesting: The focus was profits over well fair of the animals

Even Better: You could add more pictures

Interesting - How the employees stuck with this behavior

Even Better - Scan the whole room

I: It was surprising that they had no veterinary care on site for the animals.

E: Add more life and character to the slide theme. You could've considered adding more images and less words per slide.

Interesting that people were getting bitten by animals, and no one did anything about it

Could use fewer words and more pictures or videos on slides

I: I had no idea this topic existed

E: maybe just glace up at the slides less, use notecards

Interesting: It's sad that nocturnal animals were forced to interact during the day

Even Better: Could be a little more concise and to the point

interesting - I've never heard of seaquest, interesting.

even better - presentation is great but could be better with some pictures

Interesting: there weren't any inspections so health codes were being broken which is not good or safe

Even better: try reading off the slides a little less

Something interesting from this presentation is how the animals were treated even though they were the reason SeaQuest were getting money.

Something this group could've done better is maybe be a bit louder but that's it.

Good context on the stakeholders

Shadows and shadow caster were accurate and justified

Spoke at a good volume and made eye contact with us

I - interesting that they still have locations open when some of their locations were this horrible.

E - The only thing that comes to mind is maybe a little more pictures on your slides to spice it up and add a little color.

Interesting: It's interesting how the controversy goes back almost 20 years.

Even Better: Could use less "uhh..."s

Interesting- Sold the team for 6 billion

Even Better- Practice a little more before presenting/ read less off the slides

Interesting - How much this guy did

Even Better - More confident

Interesting: Something I found interesting is that native Americans were protesting against the name redskins but after a few seasons they wanted the redskins name back.

Even Better : Could have used less filler words like uh or and during sentences

Interesting: the team hid 44 million dollars of revenue from the league and never reported it

Even better: try to have a little less text on the slides

I: I didn't know anything about the Dan Snyder scandal with cheerleaders

E: Maybe include a more intriguing slide layout and try to look up at the audience more

Something that was interesting from this presentation was Snyder was the first owner to ever charge to get into a training camp.

Something this group could've done better was not read off the slides as much and that's it. Overall very informative and interesting.

I: It's interesting that Snyder could say the name of the Washington Redskins would never change, as if he was the only one in charge of that.

E: You could work on rehearsing a little more and sounding more prepared.

I: I had no idea how much dan snyder did past the name change issues

E: just add slides for shadows otherwise a really good topic

The info was laid out well on the slides

Talked loud and seemed confident

Interesting: It's interesting that a sale took 9 months

Even Better: Stay engaged when it's not your turn to speak

I - I thought it was interesting that he said they would never change the name.

E - My only thing is that you probably did not need so many full sentences on your slides because you seemed to have it memorized.

Interesting: I wasn't aware there was more than just the name being bad, interesting to learn about the greed.

Even Better: Would have been better with more eye contact

I: I didn't know all of the bad stuff that he did or that he did not want to change the name.

E: Maybe practice a little more and do less reading off the slides.

interesting: the team hid 44 million dollars of revenue from the league

even better: have a more organized flow for your talking

I: I didn't know this happened and it is very interesting that he took advantage as a translator.

E: You could have written less on the slides.

Interesting: I like how you speak in bouts instead of alternating every slide.

Even Better: Could sound a little more engaged.

Interesting- 8 billion in 2021 in bankruptcy

Even Better- could of looked more engaged

Interesting: It was interesting that oxytocin was very addictive. Didn't know that

Even better: Try to not say uh and and in sentences.

Interesting - How much money was involved

Even Better - Get to the point a little quicker

Something interesting from this presentation was how Sackler's was able to manipulate the information regarding OxyContin but weren't able to get away with it.

Something this group could've done better was not read off of slides as much but overall interesting and informative.

I - Interesting that they were generous donors, and then they stole money.

E - It would have been even better if all of your slides included images to go along with what you were saying.

People came out guilty, even though the family didn't

reading a little less off the slides and speaking louder and enthusiastically, but overall good

I: It's interesting that no one from the Sackler family confessed or owned up to their crimes in court.

E: Work on facing the front of the room so that you can more evenly distribute who you're making eye contact with and talking to, and it's not limited to just one side of the room.

Interesting: The way they aggressively pushed sales is sad and toxic

Even Better: Say um or uh less

interesting: that they kept promoting it even though they knew it was harmful

interesting: $8 billion in 2021 bankruptcy filing

even better: have a conclusion slide

I: I didn't realize the severity of this case, it's crazy what unethical things people will do to make money.

E: Maybe speak a little bit louder

Good detail on slides

Very detailed and good info about each part on the slides

Interesting: I wasn't aware oxy was such a scandal, the marketing part was interesting

Even Better: Could be even better if the slides matched aesthetically, still had a good layout.

Interesting: It was interesting to me how an Aquatic company was mistreating animals when that was what was making them money

Interesting: Never really looked into this scandal too much. Interesting to learn about.

Even better: More practice and less reading off the paper

Interesting, he only has up to 10 years in prison

A little less reading of notecards and slides

Interesting: Interesting to hear the beginning of the scandal.

Even Better: Slides are formatted a little weird.

Interesting - did not realize the case started with his ex-girlfriend

Even Better - have a better tone, sound more interested?

Interesting - How just being famous can help bad people avoid punishments

Even Better - be a little more confident

I: I've always heard of the Diddy case, but I never knew that it was from sex trafficking and assault

E: Look up at the audience a little more

Interesting: I'm surprised that he didn't get a life sentence for the things he did. For the infamous "Diddy parties" and for other crimes. Should have received life in prison.

Even Better: Try not to read the paper while presenting and look out to the audience.

Something interesting from this presentation was how it was Diddy's ex-girlfriend was the reason everything was eventually revealed.

Something this group could've done better was maybe to look at the audience more and maybe more details.

Even Better: Know your information better and speak more confidently

interesting: could face up to 10 years in prison

even better: make the text on the slides a little bigger

I: It's interesting that it took one person speaking out on Combs character, for more people to open up about it, setting off kind of a domino effect.

E: You could work on speaking less rapidly, and slowing down a little to really focus on the words that you're saying.

Interesting: It was interesting to see how it all started with his divorce and his ex wife speaking up.

Even better: Speaking a little more loudly and confidently would make this presentation even better.

Interesting: Didn't know his ex girlfriend was the first to come forward.

Even Better: could be better with less reading from notes/slides

I: interesting points

E: could have had slightly better structured bullet points, and prepare to not have to find things in note cards during the slide

Could have memorized more

I - I found it interesting that he only had 50 months of prison.

E - You could have had a little more volume.

Even better- Adding more information to the slides and provide more facts

Interesting - how much the price has risen

Even Better - read off the slides a little less

I: I didn't know that each dose for an EpiPen only costs a dollar to make, but they charge over 700 dollars for one.

E: read off the slide a little less and limit words on each slide

interesting: they charged $550-700 for an EpiPen

even better: read less off of the slides

I - I can't believe the price they put on EpiPens when it only costs $1-$2.

E - I think you could have had less full sentences on your slide and maybe just some bullet points.

Interesting: Going very indepth into the topic was nice.

Even Better: Way too much text on the slides imo.

Interesting: One shot is worth a dollar, but you actually have to pay 700 dollars.

Even Better: Don't look at the slides as much and practice before hand

Interesting: Adding your own personal experiences to the presentation. Makes it more interesting.

Even Better: Shorter bullet points on the slides. Really good presentation though.

Something interesting from this presentation was that Mylan agreed to pay millions to resolve their practices of illegal price gouging.

Something that this group could've done better not much I thought they did really overall. Maybe look at the audience more.

Interesting: Personal Connections

Even Better: Less words on the slides would be better

Good slides and pictures

I like the added personal experiences

Interesting: Crazy that it costs $1 to make yet they sell for hundreds

I: The extent of the price raise of the EpiPen recorded as increasing by over 500-550% between 2007 and 2016 was very surprising.

E: Maybe work on standing a little more still, but I did like how expressive everyone was.

Interesting: It was interesting to find out what excuse they gave to the schools, to see the wheels turning when they were figuring out how to explain why the cost was raised so much.

Even better: Maybe in the Analysis slides make the Shadows, and shadow casters more clear

Interesting: chose profit over the health and safety of others

Interesting: I never knew one tree nut could need 3 epipens, both personal stories showed how expensive they are, great use of personal stories.

Even Better: Could be better with less words on slides

I: great framing the skates; people being forced to pay whatever or die due to a reaction

E: maybe omit some info off the slides and just say it?

Interesting that they can get away with that much price gouging

If there were fewer words on slides

Even better- Don't be afraid to keep rolling and move on to the next point if you're stumbling on another

interesting: listeria outbreak in some meats

even better: talk louder

Interesting- It is interesting how many people were affected and how much it affected them

Even better- Talk a little louder

Interesting: I didn't think that the facilities to manufacture the boars head food would be so run down. I thought examinations would force boars head to clean up

Even Better: Try to not look at your notes for so long during the presentation.

Interesting: The symbols used for slides are very interesting.

Even Better: Could speak up a little more.

Interesting: didn't realize how unethical this scandal was

Even Better: sound more positive and not so nervous

Well-spoken and y'all know what you're talking about

Engaged with audience and made eye contact

Interesting: Weird to me how any employees would let the factory get this bad. Gross.

Even Better: Practice more and be able to get rid of the note cards.

Something interesting from this presentation was the number of issues (60) that were found.

Something that this group could've done better is maybe talk a bit louder at times.

I - I found it interesting that a meat company did not have safe and clean practices. I would think they would take the most care with safety.

E - You could add a couple more pictures in your presentation and maybe raise your volume a little.

Interesting: I was completely unaware of this, seems like it affected so many people

Even Better: Could be better with less pacing

interesting: the leaders downplaying how bad the situation was

even better: have a little more confidence

Even better- Possibly add more photos

Interesting: How their actions even led some to death before they were noticed

Even better: for those who used notecards, maybe a little less reading off of them.

I: I had no idea this was such a big issue, I'm glad that they privately paid families that suffered death

E: speak a little bit louder

I: interesting to hear your groups thoughts

E: louder speaking

The listeria outbreak

You could talk a little louder so its easy to hear

Interesting: The tax laws were certainly interesting.

Even Better: Try not to look down at the notes and rather out to the audience.

Something interesting from this presentation was how PwC was able to take advantage of loopholes and get around new laws.

Something this group could've done better was speak a little louder at times.

Interesting: The ethical dilemma was interesting

Even Better: Try not to read off notes

I - I found it interesting that the laws used to keep people in line were used in a way that was out of line.

E - You could have been a tiny bit louder, but I thought you did really good.

interesting: leaked draft proposals

even better: talk less off of the slides

Interesting: Very expansive with information on notecards.

Even Better: Summary could be split into multiple paragraphs.

Interesting: It was interesting to see how the insider information was used so that they could use it to gain more.

Even better: maybe speaking a little more loudly and less like you're reading

I: I didn't know that PWC leaked draft proposals for Australia's Multinational anti-avoidance law

E: Speak louder and look up at the audience a little bit more

Confident when speaking and expanded on slides

Good interaction with audience

Interesting - How it being in Australia affected things like google

Even Better - Look around more

Interesting- How the PwC was able to find about the tax laws

Even better- try making more bullet points/ less crowded slides rather than full on paragraphs, makes it easier for us to follow

Interesting: How the company got around various laws.

Even Better: A lot of words on the first couple slides kind of hard to read.

I: They helped other companies slip through the cracks by reducing their tax payments to the bare minimum.

E: Talk a little slower and louder.

Interesting: Gave perspective by relating it to Enron, stakeholders interesting, interesting that the investigation hasn't closed yet.

Even Better: Could be better if read slides/notes less, voices would be clearer.

Even better: try not to read off of the slides or notes as much

I: i thought the fact the investigation is still on going was very interesting

E: Too much writing on the slides, and too much reading from it.

trying to prevent people from avoiding tax, but then they had a scandal themselves

You could read off slides and notes a little less

I: I thought it was interesting that it allowed criminals to get away with highly expensive crimes

E: Speak louder and look up at the audience a little bit more

Interesting: Images are very interesting.

Even Better: Enthusiasm is good but could speak up a little more.

Interesting - very expensive fines

Even Better - Look at slides/cards less

Good slides and delivery, info was laid out well

Interesting

$3 billion in fines is crazy

Even better

Memorize a little more otherwise great

Interesting that it allowed criminals to get away

You could speak louder; I couldn't tell what was being said in certain parts

Interesting: I'm surprised that the bank was not caught earlier with how much banks are regulated and examined. I'm in a banking family and we are examined every few months and have strict requirements.

Even Better: Could have a louder speaking voice. Try to not look at the slides so often when presenting.

Interesting: Crazy that the bank was tied to cartels.

Even Better: More practice and less reading off of slides.

Interesting: it was interesting that these would not have been found if they had not been investigating a drug cartel.

Even better: Speaking a little louder and confidently. You had good information

Interesting: It is interesting how there are so many stakeholders connected to the bank

Even Better: Don't use notecards

Even better: look at the audience a little more

Interesting: Never knew this money, laundering scandal, crazy that its related to drug cartels

Even Better: could be better with similar amounts of info on slides

I: Interesting the CEO took responsibility

E: maybe slightly better visual aids

I: I was surprised that the CEO took full accountability of his actions, and he didn't really put up a fight, he just retired early.

E: Use the notecards a little less.

Interesting - how much money was lost

Even Better - read off the board less

interesting: FTX manipulated their records to hide losses

even better: less reading off of the slides

Interesting: I'm surprised that they used the investment funds were used that recklessly. Kind of reminds me on the Enron scandal

Even Better: Try not to read off the slides so much and try to look at the audience more.

Interesting- It is interesting how they lost that much money

Even better- Don't look at the slides as much

Interesting- no formal board of directors

Even Better- don't read off the slides as much

Interesting: That there were large political donations.

Even better: Less reading off of the slides.

Interesting: I found this to be the most interesting story of all the different presentations

Even Better: Avoid saying Um or Uh

I: The alleged straw donor schemes that took place in this scandal.

E: You could try to elaborate more, rather than just putting all of your information on the slides to read off of.

I - I found it interesting that there was no board of directors.

E - The only thing I could say is at times you could make eye contact with the audience more, but nice job!

even better: try reading off the slides less

Good information on slides but a little bland

Crazy how much money was lost and how blind people were to it as there was no accounting in the company

Even better- work on tone while speaking, making sure it's not one note the whole time

I: how they used billions of dollars in customer deposits to fund research

E: Talk to the audience and try to avoid reading off slides

Something interesting from this presentation was how they committed fraud.

Something this group could've done better was maybe look into the audience more.

Interesting: It was interesting how FTX also made false records to hide their losses like Efron

Even better: There were a good amount of bullet points on your slides, maybe put less and explain more?