Haneen Abdulridha

Amy Doty

ENGL. Composition I

31 August, 2018

    My assignment was about Teens pregnancy social issue. I decided to write a project about it because I know that pregnancy before the age of 20 years of age surrounding the many concerns, and the reason for this is the incomplete growth of the pelvic bone in a girl at this age, especially between the age of 14 - 17 years. There were a lot of topics that I did reject. First time I was interested to write about Freedom of Religions social issue because a lot of people struggle with it and became racist. For the first time, I didn't know a lot of things about Teen Pregnancy until I did some research and figured out the negative sides of it. My parents also motivated me to write about it. That is helped me to improve what I'm trying to say.

  The process that I used to write the project is talking to my parents and use my past knowledge about early pregnancy affection. For example, In High school I learned that there are many medical risks that a pregnant teenage could be exposed to during or after giving a birth and girls need support. Such as hypertension, anemia, strong headache.. I also believe that It is important for the school to talk with teenage students about sex education because teen pregnancy causes a domino effect where instead of living a normal life as a teen they lose their personal freedom. I did not get any suggestion from others because I used my own thought, and I do not always like to get people suggest about something I really know. In this case I do not have to change my opinion if I know what I'm writing and thinking about.

  I gave a good example of what good parents could do and teach their teens about early pregnancy life. My experience when I was a teenager my parents told me that you are still a teen and though it may be tempting to start a family and be loved, and you need to remember that there is a time for everything and you have a choice...From long time conversation with my parents realized that If I try to have a baby at an early age first think that in many cases maybe I won't be able to manage to stay together with my boyfriend. And I divorce or breakup if I'm not married, and this scenario will happen in most of the times because I did not choose my life partner. I also notice that my choice is I could graduate and protect myself from guys who like to take advantage of girls. I just need to wait for that right guy who's going to give me his heart. My parents conversation lets me know that a happy and good life does not depend on sex or having a baby. It depends on how you handle everything and wait for the good thing to happen at the right time. 

  In my writing project, I think there is no thing that could be improved in my third essay because I talked about a lot of important stuff such as, school sex education, and how teen pregnancy causes many health problems for the girl and her fetus during pregnancy and childbirth along the range which that was more equality and depth of information than my last paper. On my second essay paper I judged and blamed only parents which is that not always right.

  The purpose of my project is to inform the audience about the causes of teen pregnancy. My audience would be parents, school sex education and health problems that teens may experience because if those were available it could help teens avoid early pregnancy. I think the appropriate place for publishing this essay would be on Facebook because a lot of people will response and comment on it. That will get a lot of views, attention, and discussion.