Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus. Do the advantages of this form of education outweight its disadvantages? by Kieu Anh Hoang

khanhs

2022-03-16 11:57:30 UTC

There is an opinion: "The use of social media is alternating face- to- face interaction among many people in society" . In my point of view, although there are many pros, the cons are more.
=> Em không nên dùng dấu "..." này nhé vì người ta chỉ dùng để trích dẫn 1 câu nói nào đó thôi nhé. Ngoài ra câu của em paraphrase chưa sát đề bài. Chị chưa nhìn thấy cụm từ đồng nghĩa của các keywords: universities, online courses và lessons on campus. Em nên paraphrase lại nhé.
Câu 2: ..., the cons are more considerable (em dùng thêm từ này cho câu rõ ràng hơn).

Đạt

2022-03-16 12:00:43 UTC

Distance learning through online platforms is gradually replacing traditional classes at almost-=>almost all educational institutions, even at colleges/ in tertiary education. From my perspective, the pros of online learning significantly eclipse its cons

Giang

2022-03-16 12:02:11 UTC

The idea of offering distance learning as a substitute +for traditional classes by numerous universities has been (hoặc become) trendy these days. In my opinion, this trend is a positive development though it includes several downsides.

SOS!!! KHÔNG ĐƯỢC QUÊN: Khi em nêu quan điểm là: advantages nhiều hơn disadvantages thì sẽ phải viết về advantages ở Body 1, còn Dis ở Body 2 nhé

Tuan

2022-03-16 12:02:55 UTC

Distance learning through an online platform is provided=>has been provided by numerous universities for students as an option to replace (em có thể dùng luôn từ as a substitute for) traditional classrooms at many universities. In my view, such a development, although can be bad at some point, could be seen as an essential step forward.

khan

2022-03-16 12:04:43 UTC

On the one hand, there are a number of positive impacts from using networks to communicate. The first reason for believing the above opinion is that distance learning will help students eliminate the costs of accommodation, transportation, meals. Therefore, students can save a lot of money. The second point for believing this is that students can be more active. In other words, they may be better able to learn at their own pace, following their own timetable.

Dung.

2022-03-16 12:05:06 UTC

Online courses are provided by some Universities as a substitute for on-campus classes nowadays. This essay believes this is a positive development because it is extending the reach of education, and it saves us time by cutting down commuting time. => Despite several demerits, online learning brings/ offers more benefits to university students.

hoàng anh

2022-03-16 12:05:46 UTC

Some colleges provide distance learning as an substitute to classes delivered on campus ==>for offline classes. I believe although there are not without advantages (câu này em diễn đạt sai NP nên chưa rõ nghĩa nhé, the disadvantages will justify these.
=> Although there are several advantages, disadvantages are much weightier.

Dung

2022-03-16 12:06:34 UTC

The main benefit of online courses is that it helps many students to study in renowned Universities that are situated in western countries (em chỉ cần viết là foreign countries là được nhé, chứ để Western thì phạm vi đang bị bó hẹp) (Câu này của em chưa phải là câu topic sentence của đoạn Body 1 rồi, mà là câu giới thiệu Main point 1 thì đúng hơn. Em xem lại format và sửa lại nhé). This is because, earlier, the multitudes=>a multitude of students could not afford living expenses of those countries=>costs/ expenses of living abroad, but now with this online study facility=>the online education facility they can complete courses of their choice by sitting at their homes just with the internet connection.

Minh

ngminhanh214 — 2022-03-16 12:07:15 UTC

It is said that long-distance learning is provided=>has been provided as an alternative to face-to-face learning by some universities +these days.I n my opinion,the benefits of this significantly overweigh its drawbacks.

Tuan

2022-03-16 12:09:46 UTC

On the one hand, online learning proves to be a great alternative although traditional universities are still widely considered as the best way to acquire knowledge and a diploma. Access to all resources of a traditional course is offered, which certifies=>enables learners to freely choose a wide range of different subjects, from science to economics. Furthermore, lower costs and the widespread presence of the Internet allow unlimited numbers of participants, regardless of not only their financial background but also current living location. For example, Coursera is a website that offers a variety of courses at reasonable prices and presents valid certification for participants upon completion of each course.
Body 1 của Tuấn copy trên 70% bài mẫu và chưa paraphrase. Nếu em muốn sử dụng idea của 1 bài mẫu nào đó thì phải PARAPHRASE LẠI THEO NGÔN NGỮ CỦA MÌNH NHÉ!!!

ngoc anh

2022-03-16 12:10:03 UTC

Some people said=>sai thì=> Em nên dùng bị động nhé: It is said that the use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society (Câu này của em giống bạn Khánh, chưa paraphrase thành công đề bài. Em viết lại nhé). In my opinion, I think its drawbacks are more=> more significant than benefits.

khan

2022-03-16 12:10:05 UTC

On the other hand, the negative impacts of distance learning replacing face- to- face interaction are much more concerning. Firstly, from a distance- learning course, the teacher may seldom or indeed never actually meet the student. To be specific, this may make it hard for teachers to understand their learners' principle learning needs. Secondly, time and geography must also be considered when contrasting these two types of learning. To explain, face-to-face learning must take place in real time and in one location. As a result, it is very time- consuming.

huyy

2022-03-16 12:11:43 UTC

Several colleges have recently begun to provide distant learning as an alternative (for what??? em nên viết cụ thể ra nhé, VD: an alternative for traditional classes). This tendency, in my opinion, is a great one, despite the fact that it has some drawbacks.

2022-03-16 12:12:01 UTC

LINH
Interactions in real life are limited in part due to the emergence of social media among people these days. From my experience, despite the obvious advantage, the drawback of the lack of relationships between people is practically undeniable.
Introduction của em chưa paraphrase thành công đề bài nhé. Nhớ là: để paraphrase được đúng đề bài, thì em cần tìm được synonym của các keywords trong đề bài, ví dụ: universities=colleges, online courses=distance learning/ online learning.

Minh

ngminhanh214 — 2022-03-16 12:19:34 UTC

On the one hand,offering online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus brings a host of drawbacks.First and foremost,It will make students' concentration on the lesson not high, teachers will not be able to manage their students in the most effective way: Em nên dùng từ 'may' để thay thế cho 'will', mang ý nghĩa phỏng đoán, vì không hẳn tất cả hs đều bị mất tập trung. Ngoài ra, Mệnh đề 1 của em đang diễn đạt word by word => it may decrease the concentration of students during the lessons/ students may not pay full attention during an online lesson and teachers can not ....For instance,when learning online, students can do many things that are not related to the teacher's lectures. And of course, just by looking at students from one side=>through the computer screen, the teacher cannot observe the entire actions of students, This cannot help the school guarantee the quality of students.

huy

2022-03-16 12:24:20 UTC

On the one hand, there are a number of advantages to communicating=>không phải là communicate mà là learning nhé over networks. The first reason to believe in the aforementioned perspective is that distance learning will help students save money on expenses such as=>which may otherwise be spent on lodging, transportation, and food. As a result, students can save a significant amount of money.

Đạt

2022-03-16 12:28:53 UTC

On the one hand, I have to admit that learning based on online platforms may result in some undesired results. The principle reason is that participants of online learning programs to procrastinating (mệnh đề này chưa hoàn thành=>participants of online learning programs have a tendency to procrastinate doing their tasks) and tend to poorly allocate time to finish their assignments. This form of studying requires high self-discipline and time management skills and +learners would be easily demotivated without direct instructions from the teacher (Em có thể bổ sung thêm idea là hs có thể không đạt được kết quả học tập cao). The second disadvantage is that learners cannot interact with instructors and peers. In a lesson, everyone needs face-to-face discussion and two-way interaction so that the lesson can become more engaging and effective. And learners tend to study harder, more self-disciplined when they are in an educational environment where everyone is endeavouring +to achieve better academic results.

Đạt

2022-03-16 13:58:00 UTC

Despite the possible disadvantages mentioned above, I am more convinced of the advantages of web-based class. The first advantage is that online learning can +help students overcome time contraints and geographical boundaries. A typical example of this is that during the Covid-19 epidemic, students in pandemic areas=>areas/ places where the pandemic is severe such as Hanoi and Ho Chi Minh City could not go to school, so=>which means online learning creates=>has created opportunities for students to continue their studies without leaving home (hoặc: while being in quarantine - để sử dụng được topical vocab). Furthermore, from an economic perspective, the online course is extremely economical=>an extremely/ a more economical/ affordable option. Because online course providers could save operating and management fees=>costs/ expenses, ~~so (because clause 1, clause 2)~~ they are able to sell online courses for purchaser at an affordable price. Moreover, the distance learning can aid learners eliminate the costs of accommodation, transportation and meals, which may cost them a great amount of money otherwise.

Đạt

2022-03-16 14:27:24 UTC

The discussions above favours a conclusion that although there are many drawbacks of an online course, I believe the aforementioned online studying methods is an effective method and should be developed and applied more in the future.

Giang

2022-03-17 11:31:52 UTC

To begin with, personally, providing online courses by some universities as an alternative to offline classes is noticeably beneficial. At first, one of the main advantages is it saves a lot of learners' money and time. Since studying remotely, students don't have to pay several=>a plethora of fees such as accommodation ( for ones living far from home ) - em bỏ dấu ngoặc được nhé, transportations, and other inevitable costs like food and commute=>commute cũng là phí đi lại rồi em ơi=> chỗ này em chỉ cần gộp lại thành: students dont have to pay a plethora of inevitable fees such as ... là được nhé. Especially to ones studying abroad, this trend might +tremendously reduce financial pressure on their families. Additionally, with paying less expense for operation, educational institutions might=>often offer cheaper courses. (Last but not least, in this present special situation, when the COVID-19 pandemic is occuring severely=>becoming more severe, which leads=>has lead to social isolation, online course is=>becoming an ideal way of ~~remote~~ education. Students are not obliged to go to face-to-face classes. Meanwhile, they can still obtain lectures with no worries of getting knowledge gap. Therefore in the last 2 years, online colleges become=>has become one of the most significant features of educational systems.)Chị nghĩ em nên viết 2 main idea thôi nhé, vì body này không phải body mà mình đồng tình, nên viết ngắn chút cũng được, và Main point 2 của em cũng chưa được explained nhiều=> có thể bỏ point này. .

Giang

2022-03-17 12:08:17 UTC

On the other hand, besides positive effects, this offer might be a poor substitue for classes delivered directly at schools. At first, learning online for a long time may lead to children's incomprehensive developments. Because, students cannot interact with their peers, fellow classmates, tutors and so on=>, etc. in person, which might causes several serious problems in their social skills especially communication (Câu này đang chưa đúng về mặt ngữ pháp nhé=> em đổi thành: It is because... thì mới đúng). Similarly, bad internet connection usually occurs due to huge number=>amount of accession to the internet at the same time, which results in procrastination=>interruptions thì hợp lý hơn nhé in gaining knowledge during lectures. This negatively affects=>may/ might/ could affect/ delay student's attempt to join in classes or compete with other peers. That might be the consequent of lacking awareness of the neccessity of interraction and rivalry with their friends in scholastic environment (Chị nghĩ là em nên bỏ ý này đi, vì nó không thực sự liên quan đến main point và ý giải thích bên trên). In addition, offering online lessons might not be appropriate to children=>students/ learners (nhớ keyword universities) in remote areas due to poor Internet connection and students whose finance cannot respond to the technology requirements=>who cannot afford essential technological devices such as computers, laptops, smartphones,... As a result, distance learning may be an awkward trend causing financial stress and feelings of inferiority.

Giang

2022-03-17 12:11:52 UTC

In summary, I do believe that providing distance learning as a substitue is a revolutionary step in contemporary education systems though there are still several shortcomings.

Minh

ngminhanh214 — 2022-03-19 08:13:51 UTC

On the other hand, in spite of the downsides given, i believe that the benefits are more significant.The primary reason is that offering online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus will save a lot of students' time from time to money=> both teachers and students' time and money. To=>For instance, the fact that teachers stay at home to prepare lectures thanks to smart devices will save them a lot of effort or=>commuting time and travel costs. Similarly, Students ~~won't spend a lot of time commuting on long distances, they~~ just need to stay at home and prepare for class, which can help eliminate a plenty of costs such as transportation, accommodation, meals, etc. Furthermore, offering online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus will be a~~n effective~~ method to help students learn more effectively. One way to explain is that in the modern era, students will tend to learn in a fast and interesting way, and online learning is the way to respond to that trend. As such, students can create their own way of learning. Teachers can create games for students to play while learning or to help students reduce stress in the learning process (Ví dụ này của em chưa thuyết phục vì học trên lớp, GV cũng tổ chức được các hoạt động này).

Minh

ngminhanh214 — 2022-03-19 08:21:03 UTC

In conclusion, i believe that the advantages associated with distracting and affecting students' learning are eclipsed by various advantages related to saving time, effort and increasing efficiency in their learning.

Tuan

2022-03-20 09:43:33 UTC

On the other hand, this method of remote learning, without the need for regular face-to-face contact with teachers in a classroom, is negative for two reasons. Firstly, students who study online do not develop comprehensively in the way that other students who attend classes at school do. During online courses, it is difficult for students to make friends or attempt to compete with their peers. This is often linked to the fact that those learners seem to undervalue the significance of interaction and rivalry with classmates in an educational environment, which are regarded as great stimuli for scholastic success. Secondly, participants of online learning programs have a tendency to procrastinate more and poorly allocate an appropriate amount of time to complete assignments. This form of studying requires tremendous self-discipline as well as excellent organization and time management skills as students usually struggle with balancing their coursework with other priorities and quickly become unmotivated without direct guidance from instructors.

Tuan

2022-03-20 09:44:22 UTC

In conclusion, though there are some drawbacks to studying via online courses, I do believe that this method is a revolutionary step in contemporary tertiary education systems.

khanhh

2022-03-21 15:36:27 UTC

In conclusion, my view is that the benefits offered by the above phenomenon are undeniable yet outweighed by the disadvantages mentioned above.

Dung

2022-03-21 16:46:44 UTC

On the other hand, the drawback of this trend should not be ignored. The problem is that students can be distracted by the surrounding environment like replying to their friend's messages, joining in and out of social networking sites, and responding to their parents. Consequently, they can not attention to their lessons, which is leads to reducing the effectiveness of the learning process. In addition, lacking face-to-face interaction can be a big problem. For instance, when professors give students a group assignment, they will not discuss it just through messages or emails. As a result, students can miss information when all members in a group chat with a lot of people in there.

Dung

2022-03-21 16:47:04 UTC

On the one hand, several benefits of distance learning programmers should be taken into account. Firstly, students can save time to travel to school and back. As a result, they can spend time for other purposes such as sleep, doing their homework, and helping their parents to do household chores. Secondly, online courses can help universities to cut down on their expenses. For example, because schools do not need to invest in facilities as well as building infrastructure, which means that schools can deduct more money into student scholarships.

Dung

2022-03-21 16:48:00 UTC

In conclusion, I believe that traditional or modern platform classes can have both positive and negative effects depending on individual students.

hoang anh

2022-03-23 10:14:30 UTC

One argument in support is that in traditional education, the student must be present in the classroom for every lesson. So they need to commute from one place to the other and that is time and cost consuming. Digital learning can help universities reduce costs and pass along savings to students. This means that online course providers save operating costs and avoid additional operations costs.

hoang anh

2022-03-23 10:14:53 UTC

Firstly, the face-to-face interaction between students and teachers at online learning is limited. The traditional classroom model allows student live discussion and improves interpersonal skills in the classroom, while studying online, students rarely interact with other classmates.