8-1 Mindmap J -- Constructive Criticism by Megan Wilkinson https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6 Religion Sparks Reform en-us 2016-09-15 17:39:18 UTC 2023-10-20 23:21:21 UTC hello@padlet.com mwilkinson2 https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124151997 2016-09-15 17:39:45 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124151997 stsosie https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124184889 In the Americans form ideal communities box i think you should have explained what shakers are.

]]> 2016-09-15 18:58:00 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124184889 You used too much of the same words in the book. You didn't reword them which is pretty much plagiarism.  disidro https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124185672 2016-09-15 19:00:24 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124185672 sdelfin https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124185775 You need to use your own words and not the words from the book. ]]> 2016-09-15 19:00:45 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124185775 eriesen https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124186320 I think that you should have told us what transcendentalism is.]]> 2016-09-15 19:02:22 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124186320 rbamburg https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124186816 You could have wrote more about how the schools and prisons changed and who helped make those changes.

]]> 2016-09-15 19:03:55 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124186816 pehawkins https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124187252 I like but it doesn't give information about the failed community's.]]> 2016-09-15 19:05:12 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124187252 dserna https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124188065 You could' wrote more about the different options for educations for the black and white.]]> 2016-09-15 19:08:27 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124188065 jruiz6 https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124189579 this was short and to the point but was missing names]]> 2016-09-15 19:14:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124189579 for Americans form ideal communities, i think it would of been better if you added more info on asylums being reformed and the increase in schooling  dnewcomb1 https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124214942 2016-09-15 21:23:33 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124214942 asingh9 https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124222110 This is straight to the point but you missed the important people that were in it.]]> 2016-09-15 22:24:31 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124222110 jvalladolid https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124222866 you could have added more information ]]> 2016-09-15 22:32:43 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124222866 Under "Schools & Prisons Undergo Reform" you explained what was going on before prisons and hospitals changed not what happened to it or what made it improve afterwards. This is misleading because it looks like it wasn't something that was later on fixed. Incomplete and misleading section. rbamburg https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124231398 2016-09-16 00:12:55 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124231398 nisidro https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124236391 Could have expanded a little bit more on the information given]]> 2016-09-16 01:13:23 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124236391 I don't like how you didn't put it in your own words. amartinez46 https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124240013 2016-09-16 02:05:25 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124240013 wrowan2 https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124244805 There was a lot more info you could've added. But its over all pretty good.]]> 2016-09-16 03:12:57 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124244805 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https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124249073 2016-09-16 04:32:53 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124249073 lugutierrez https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124249531 you need to used more your own words]]> 2016-09-16 04:44:38 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124249531 rvilla1 https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124250602 The main ideas should be a different color then the other ideas]]> 2016-09-16 05:12:31 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124250602 This one is pretty good just needs to be more compact and spread out  skandler https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124433168 2016-09-16 17:30:24 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/4py2fyi73gh6/wish/124433168