7th Grade Writing by Matthew Martucci https://padlet.com/27mmartucci/4na8u7chfj4mx7x4 Leave me feedback for my writing peices en-us 2022-01-31 14:55:30 UTC 2022-03-10 18:08:55 UTC hello@padlet.com Dillon lassman. One star i have is your first data there will be more jobs for construction worriers and then more jobs after the the construction during the games. I liked this because you showed how it related to a important topic and showed how your claim can help it. Another star i have is when you explain how sports can help social skills because i think there are a lot of kids out there who need help building social skills and i think it is good how you showed sports can do that. One wish i have is all the writing is in the center and not in line across the paper . 27dlassman https://padlet.com/27mmartucci/4na8u7chfj4mx7x4/wish/2023552415 2022-02-01 15:18:04 UTC https://padlet.com/27mmartucci/4na8u7chfj4mx7x4/wish/2023552415 2 stars and a wish 27arajadhyx https://padlet.com/27mmartucci/4na8u7chfj4mx7x4/wish/2023844464 1 star)i think that your intro was very strong and it really got me hooked 

2 star)the reasoning was very reasonable and i thought that that was really convinced me 

Wish) i think the piece could’ve been more relatable and less bland ]]> 2022-02-01 17:18:32 UTC https://padlet.com/27mmartucci/4na8u7chfj4mx7x4/wish/2023844464 AJ Skara 🅿️😈 27askara1 https://padlet.com/27mmartucci/4na8u7chfj4mx7x4/wish/2023951585 One star I had was that I really liked your intro. It got me hooked because you said SPF never had a sports complex ever. So not 🅿️. Another star i have is I liked how you put your experience of playing ports helped you shape the readers perspective. SInce you play sports you know you always have to communicate with your team. A suggestion I have for you is add some compositional risks (figurative language). it would spice up your writing and exaggerate the feeling of this. Overall your writing is pushing 🅿️]]> 2022-02-01 18:05:48 UTC https://padlet.com/27mmartucci/4na8u7chfj4mx7x4/wish/2023951585 Buy My Product 27askara1 https://padlet.com/27mmartucci/4na8u7chfj4mx7x4/wish/2088889076 Star: One star I have for you is I really like your hook. I like it because personally I get bored easily and I also really like movies.

Star: I like how you came up with the idea because that’s something I relate to because their are so many options to choose from.

Wish: A wish I have for you is that I wish you added more information about this box. I feel like the presentation would be too quick and not a lot of things shared.

Overall good Job.

- AJ Skara]]> 2022-03-10 18:07:40 UTC https://padlet.com/27mmartucci/4na8u7chfj4mx7x4/wish/2088889076 Movie Box John_Laudman https://padlet.com/27mmartucci/4na8u7chfj4mx7x4/wish/2088891332 Star- I like how colorful and easy to read the slides were.
Star-I like the idea of the box but it seems that you could expand the idea a bit more to make it more engaging
Wish- Try to add more slides about the product, didn’t learn much,

Otherwise your product pushing 🅿️]]> 2022-03-10 18:08:55 UTC https://padlet.com/27mmartucci/4na8u7chfj4mx7x4/wish/2088891332