https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7 en-us 2023-01-25 15:29:43 UTC 2026-03-15 12:14:34 UTC hello@padlet.com peachsquibb https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456326241
Room 1: Paragraph 1 - Opening]]> 2023-01-25 15:31:35 UTC https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456326241 peachsquibb https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456326585
Room 2: Paragraph 2]]> 2023-01-25 15:31:49 UTC https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456326585 peachsquibb https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456326811
Room 3: Paragraph 3]]> 2023-01-25 15:31:57 UTC https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456326811 peachsquibb https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456327256
Room 4: Paragraph 4 - Closing]]> 2023-01-25 15:32:10 UTC https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456327256 peachsquibb https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456327687
Room 5: Format – heading, date, Salutation]]> 2023-01-25 15:32:26 UTC https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456327687 peachsquibb https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456328994 2023-01-25 15:33:14 UTC https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456328994 peachsquibb https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456329809 2023-01-25 15:33:43 UTC https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456329809 peachsquibb https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456330871 Task compare and contrast the section your room has been assigned to analyze for both cover letters.

Identify one strengthen and one area of improvement]]> 2023-01-25 15:34:24 UTC https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456330871 peachsquibb https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456339262 Add the names of your group members to your section]]> 2023-01-25 15:39:15 UTC https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456339262 peachsquibb https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456341024 Assign someone to take notes within your Padlet Section and someone to present your results to the full class after the breakout session. ]]> 2023-01-25 15:40:22 UTC https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456341024 peachsquibb https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456342427 Prepare to summarize for the class. ]]> 2023-01-25 15:41:18 UTC https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456342427 peachsquibb https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456346846 Adam and Johanni]]> 2023-01-25 15:44:05 UTC https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456346846 peachsquibb https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456351031 Cameron, Zachery, Carina]]> 2023-01-25 15:46:28 UTC https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456351031 peachsquibb https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456351348 Joan and Robbiana]]> 2023-01-25 15:46:40 UTC https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456351348 peachsquibb https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456351736 Taishawn 

]]> 2023-01-25 15:46:55 UTC https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456351736 peachsquibb https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456352095 Aaisha and Kennedy

]]> 2023-01-25 15:47:08 UTC https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456352095 peachsquibb https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456357272 2023-01-25 15:50:35 UTC https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456357272 peachsquibb https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456357617 2023-01-25 15:50:48 UTC https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456357617 peachsquibb https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456358183 What's Good: Outlining their skills for the position

What Needs Work: Reasoning as to why they are interested in the position, and how their skills would translate]]> 2023-01-25 15:51:11 UTC https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456358183 peachsquibb https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456358402 What's Good: Very detail oriented, and includes how their previous experiences can translate to the job

What Needs Work: Too much information, some can be put into the resume instead]]> 2023-01-25 15:51:20 UTC https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456358402 peachsquibb https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456358678 Strength: sally mentions her skills that are applicable to the job and made connections about how her skills are transferable from working at mcdonalds

Weakness: Seems generic, could be more detailed and eye catching, or more personal.]]> 2023-01-25 15:51:32 UTC https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456358678 peachsquibb https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456358898 Strength: very detailed and specific and mentions volunteer experience along with her take-aways and skills gained from the experience. Effective use of action words.]]> 2023-01-25 15:51:42 UTC https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456358898 peachsquibb https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456359133 her closing statement seems very copy/paste as if this section could have been a fill-in-the-blank. It doesn't seem that this was a job they were very interested in, more so that they were looking for a hit-or-miss style of applying ]]> 2023-01-25 15:51:52 UTC https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456359133 peachsquibb https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456359333 she had Thanked the reader, which emphasize that shorn valued the reader's time and also informed them that Sharan was looking forward to a follow-up, which can make to reader feel more obligated to respond. ]]> 2023-01-25 15:51:59 UTC https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456359333 peachsquibb https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456359609 What is good:
- Listed her name
- Listed her email and linkedin
- Listed the address

What needs work:
- List a correct phone number 
- Didn't delete [insert digital signature]
- Put the hiring manager above the address, should not be like that]]> 2023-01-25 15:52:09 UTC https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456359609 peachsquibb https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456359879 What is good:
- Listed her name
- Listed her email and linkedin
- Listed the address

What needs work: 
- List a correct phone number 
- Did not put her postal code 
- Put the hiring manager above the address, should not be like that
- Didn't delete [insert digital signature]]]> 2023-01-25 15:52:21 UTC https://padlet.com/peachsquibb/4m38vuaufubcraf7/wish/2456359879