https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt Directions: 1. These are anonymous comments. Don't write your name on them // 2. Look at your evaluation sheet // 3. Open a new post. Write 'GLOW' at the top of the post - type in something you did well on this essay // 4. Open a new post - write 'GROW' at the top of the post and type in an area in which you want to grow or improve your skills. en-us 2017-11-02 17:02:53 UTC 2017-11-03 17:45:00 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203395250 I liked my idea of the essay. I think all the paragraphs came out the way  I hoped they would. 

]]> 2017-11-03 17:11:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203395250 https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203395298 I enjoyed my Introduction and concluding paragraph]]> 2017-11-03 17:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203395298 https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203395428 Intro. Conclusion.]]> 2017-11-03 17:12:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203395428 https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203395513 My paragraphs had unique, original, ideas. I liked how I used evidence to describe and support my thoughts. ]]> 2017-11-03 17:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203395513 https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203395605 Something that I found I did will with my essay, is I believed I had a strong opening and beginning. I thought I interested the reader enough to want to know more in my introduction, and I thought I had a bit of a cliff hanger for my conclusion. ]]> 2017-11-03 17:12:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203395605 https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203395637 I want to improve my hooks, and have better reasoning]]> 2017-11-03 17:12:44 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203395637 https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203395689 At first I had trouble finding topic sentences]]> 2017-11-03 17:12:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203395689 https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203395720 i want to grow on making paragraphs]]> 2017-11-03 17:12:55 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203395720 https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203395880 I think I had an opening paragraph]]> 2017-11-03 17:13:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203395880 itrumbullstearns18 https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203395922 putting down my ideas fast on paper

]]> 2017-11-03 17:13:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203395922 https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203396040 I wrote things from the text

]]> 2017-11-03 17:13:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203396040 https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203396161 I liked my main ideas and think I went in detail explaining them. ]]> 2017-11-03 17:13:46 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203396161 https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203396198 My sentences were good but not amazing. ]]> 2017-11-03 17:13:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203396198 https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203396199 I thought my body paragraphs were the perfect length and had a lot of background information and flowed really well.]]> 2017-11-03 17:13:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203396199 https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203396352 I would like to use more synonyms, so that I don't repeat the same word too many times.]]> 2017-11-03 17:14:09 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203396352 https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203396365 I think I used a lot of good evidence from the text]]> 2017-11-03 17:14:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203396365 https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203396614 My paragraphs were a little disorganized and I could have made the topics more clear. ]]> 2017-11-03 17:14:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203396614 https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203396620 Q U O T E S.]]> 2017-11-03 17:14:36 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203396620 https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203396655 The transitions between my body paragraphs need work]]> 2017-11-03 17:14:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203396655 https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203396657 I think I was able to form a deeper meaning very well, and that I edited thoroughly. I also enjoy how my quotes and examples assisted my thinking and helped the reader understand.

]]> 2017-11-03 17:14:41 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203396657 https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203396769 I think my conclusion was good]]> 2017-11-03 17:14:55 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203396769 https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203396802 I think that I did not give enough evidence to support my claims. I did however use some, but once again I don't think I had enough. ]]> 2017-11-03 17:14:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203396802 https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203397022 i did well on my conclusion]]> 2017-11-03 17:15:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203397022 itrumbullstearns18 https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203397146 editing more and have better trasitions ]]> 2017-11-03 17:15:38 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203397146 https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203397212 I need to add quotes. ]]> 2017-11-03 17:15:47 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203397212 https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203397282 I need to italicize the title ]]> 2017-11-03 17:15:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203397282 https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203397415 My essay came a long way ]]> 2017-11-03 17:16:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/4jbt4za7q0rt/wish/203397415