Grow: The only thing that I would change about the video is for the discussion sidebar to be pushed away so the actual window of the website is bigger. This would make it easier for the website to be seen, and therefore easier to see all of the resources and visuals. 

Grow: The only thing that I would change about this video was the fact that she did not really show the details of the embedded resources on her website. She did not scroll through them, for example her Symbaloo in the beginning, so it did not provide the visual aid that would increase the viewer’s understanding of the resources. 

Grow: The only thing that I felt could be different about this video was the fact that there were some points where she was talking a little faster. This made it difficult to follow or comprehend what she was saying, and then was switching subjects very quickly. 

Grow: There was not anything that I would change about this video description. The video was easy to follow, and viewers who were watching that did not hear of any of the websites that were used were then able to leave the video with a lot of new information. There was enough information for new viewers to be able to use all of these websites if they wanted to. 

Grow: The only part of the video that I would fix would be the couple of little pauses that were in the audio. Those are easy things to fix by adding more descriptions, or clicking to the next portion of the page quicker. Overall, there was not anything that I could see as being something drastically wrong. 

Grow: The only thing that I would improve on in this video was speaking more formally. He used the phrase “you know” a lot after sentences, and got stuck on some of the subjects he talked about. This could be fixed by creating a script beforehand, and mapping out your thoughts in order to completely describe and be sure you say everything that you want to say. 

Grow: This video did not show her website at all which is what the purpose of it was. I would have wanted to see how she learned to use the other new websites and the progress that she made when learning how to use the new technology resources. 

Grow: The one thing that I would correct was when there were some points where I felt as though she lost her train of thought and did not know what to talk about next. If a script was written, it would have been clearer that she knew what she wanted to say about each tab of the website, and there would have been no pauses within the video. 

Grow: There was not anything that I would change about this video. Each tab of the website was displayed and described completely, and was a very interesting video to watch. It made the video more intriguing, and therefore was able to teach people more information. 

Grow: One part that I thought needed a little improvement was the audio component. It sounded like she was talking from very far away. There were also points where there were long pauses in the video. Overall, the video was well put together, however it just needed clearer audio and more of an explanation of some of the aspects of the website. 

Grow: One thing that I noticed that should be improved on is that the video should be more formal. Using a script is a good way to do this, and based on the long pauses in certain places in the video or the laughing at some points, it shows that a script was not used or there was not a lot of planning done ahead of time. I feel as though when showing what a website is like, the tutorial should be more educational and formal. 

Grow: There was nothing that I would change about this video, accept for the fact that there was a little bit of background noise in the audio. It did not cause her voice to be lower, but if I had to correct anything, that would be the only correction needed to be made. 

Grow: In my opinion, there was nothing that I saw that needed improvement or needed to change. The video was well put together, she was easy to understand with clear audio and was not speaking quickly, and thoroughly explained each component of the website. 

Grow: There was only one thing that I felt needed to be corrected was the audio. Throughout the entire video, there was an echo and some background noise. It can make it somewhat easier to be distracted by the echo, and can take viewers’ attention away from the actual website. It could be fixed by simply moving to an area that did not have an echoing environment. 

Grow: I noticed that he was talking very informally throughout the video, so it was clear that a script was not used to plan out his thoughts beforehand. There were awkward pauses in his speaking, so it would have been easier to plan out thoughts with everything written out and planned beforehand. 

Grow: One thing that I would change about this video was the fact that it seems as though there were times where she got to a section of the website and did not know what to say about it. There were long pauses in some points, so using a script on the side while speaking would be something that could correct this. 

Grow: In some parts of the video, the audio fades out and is unable to be understood. In order to fix this problem, I would re record these portions of the video. The audio otherwise was very clear and concise, just the portions that faded out were the ones that made it difficult to hear what she was saying. 

Grow: The one thing I wished was in the video was showing every tab of the website. I was only able to see a couple of the tabs, and was intrigued on what else she included in her website. The tabs that I saw were very well created, so I wanted to see the other technological resources we learned how to use in the classroom. 

Grow: The one thing that I would change would be the audio component of the video. She was easy to hear and understand, but there were times where the sound glitched or momentarily stopped working, and there was a constant mumbling sound in the background.