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      <title>A summary of a line graph about fast food consumed by Australian teenagers. by Victoria Buts</title>
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      <pubDate>2024-03-29 08:55:29 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>     The provided graph delineates changes in the intake of some processed food by Australian adolescents in the span of 25 years. </p><p>     As a general trend, the amount of fish and chips declined gradually while the consumption of pizza and hamburgers climbed with an upward trend between 1975 and 2000.</p><p>     As for the quantity of fish and chips consumed in the following period of time, it plunged significantly after a slight fluctuation between 1975 and 1985.</p><p>     Concerning the consumption of hamburgers, its amount skyrocketed from 1975 to 1985 and then kept increasing steadily untill 2000.</p><p>     The improvement of the intake of pizza is about the same as hamburgers but with a slighter upward trend which had levelled off by 2000.</p><p>    In conclusion, it can be visible from the following line graph that the intake of hamburgers and pizza consumed by Australian teenagers culminated in 2000 with a minor difference in amount while the fish and chips popularity had dropped drastically by then.</p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-03-29 09:16:29 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>The graph shows that there was a sharp surge in both times pizza and hamburger were eaten per year by Australian adolescents between 1975 and 1995. </p><p><br/></p><p>The reverse is the case with fish and chips where we can see a downward tendency. It has  reached the apex 1975, and continued to fluctuate until the year of 1985. In a span of next 35 years consumption of Fish and Chips decrease nearly in half. </p><p> </p><p>:/ </p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-03-29 13:51:23 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>The provided line graph delineates changes in the consumption of fast food by Australian adolescents between 1975 and 2000.&nbsp;</p><p><br/></p><p>As an overall trend, intake of pizza and hamburgers has increased rapidly, whereas the amount of fish and chips declined.</p><p><br/></p><p>Consumption of pizza has almost tripled in the period from 1975 to 1985. It has continued to climb ceaselessly in the next 10 years, culminating at 100 times eaten per year in 1995 and then plauted untill 2000.</p><p><br/></p><p>Intake of hamburgers has also faced noticeable improvements. It has been rising steadily between 1975 and 1985. It then rocketed to 1995 until it has leveled out 5 years later. &nbsp;</p><p><br/></p><p>In reverse in the case with fish and chips where downward tendency could be seen. It has reached its apex in 1975 amd countinued to flactuate until the year of 1985.</p><p><br/></p><p>In conclusion, it can be visible from the supplied line graph that in the span of following 35 years the consumption of fish and chips decreased nearly by half, meanwhile popularity of hamburgers and pizza shot up significantly.<br></p><p><br></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-04-03 12:50:00 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Proofread version</p><p><br/></p><p>The provided line graph delineates changes in the consumption of fast food by Australian adolescents between 1975 and 2000.&nbsp;</p><p><br/></p><p>As an overall trend, the intake of pizza and hamburgers increased rapidly whereas the amount of fish and chips declined.</p><p><br/></p><p>Regarding the consumption of pizza, it tripled in the period from 1975 to 1985. Furthermore, its intake continued climbing substantially in the subsequent 10 years culminating in 1995 when it eventually plateaued.</p><p><br/></p><p>Relating to the quantity of hamburgers, it faced noticeable improvements as well. It was skyrocketing from 1975 to 1985 and then was rising steadily until 1995 when it finally leveled out. &nbsp;</p><p><br/></p><p>The reverse is the case with fish and chips where a downward tendency could be observed. Its apex took place in 1975 and then it started fluctuating with a descending trend until 1985 when it collapsed drastically. As a result, it reached the nadir in 2000.</p><p><br/></p><p>In conclusion, it can be visible from the supplied line graph that in the span of the following 35 years the consumption of fish and chips decreased nearly by half while the popularity of hamburgers and pizza shot up dramatically.<br></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-04-05 10:49:14 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>The supplied graph delineates changes in the<s> joblessness </s><strong>jobless</strong> rate and <strong>the</strong> number of individuals migrating from Ireland between 1988 and 2008.</p><p><br/></p><p>As an overall trend, <strong>the</strong> percentage of unoccupied</p><p>declined over the period<s>, whereas</s> the number of citizens leaving Ireland decreased.</p><p><br/></p><p><mark>(Both trends seem to reduce with the difference in ratio. Unemployment rate: 17 percent in 1988 and about 6 percent in 2008. The number of those leaving Ireland: around 60000 in 1988 and 50 000 in 2008. As a result, the conjunction 'whereas' is not appropriate in this sentence as it is supposed to indicate a contrast between two ideas. Try to use adverbs along with the verbs 'declined' and 'decreased' to emphasize the difference. Plus, think of the other linking verb to connect the ideas.)</mark></p><p><br/></p><p>Regarding <strong>the</strong> quantity of people <s>leaving</s> <strong>departing from </strong>Ireland, it collapsed drastically in 1990 and continued to <s>free fall</s> ('a free fall' - noun or 'to go into free fall' - verb) <strong>drop tediously</strong>. Furthermore<strong>, <mark>(</mark></strong><mark>words like therefore, however, nevertheless, consequently, furthermore, and moreover are called transitional expressions or independent markers and are </mark><strong><mark>set off by commas</mark></strong><mark>.)</mark> it <s>fluctuated</s> <strong>was fluctuating</strong> with <strong>a </strong>descending <strong>trend</strong> from 1992 to 2002. As a result, <mark>("As a result" is a conjunctive adverb. It acts like a bridge between the previous sentence and the new one. </mark><strong><mark>It is followed by a comma</mark></strong><mark>.)</mark> it reached the nadir in 2002,  but <strong>eventually</strong> <s>in the subsequent period between 2003 and 2008 </s><mark>(place this information later in the sentence)</mark> <strong>a dramatic rise <mark>(I suppose that you omitted it just accidentally here)</mark> </strong>could be observed in the subsequent period between 2003 and 2008.</p><p><br/></p><p>Referring the unemployment rate, it changed sporadically between 1988 and 1992. In 1992 it started declining with<strong> a</strong> downward trend <s>until it </s><strong>and</strong> hit <strong>the</strong> bottommost point in 2000. In the period between 2000 <s>to</s><strong> and</strong> 2004 it <strong>finally</strong> plateaued<strong>; however,</strong> <mark>(After four years of remaining constant, in following 4 years - use it later  in a sentence)</mark> a slight upward tendency <strong>was</strong> seen in the following 4 years.</p><p><br/></p><p>In conclusion, it can be visible from the <s>supplied</s><strong> provided</strong> graph that in the span of the following 20 years<strong> the </strong>unemployment rate decreased threefold while <strong>the</strong> amount of people <strong>moving from</strong> Ireland faced major changes.</p><p><br/></p><p>(I tried :/. Sorry for sending this assignment late, I totally forgot about it. I will hypothetically finish essay this evening! See you soon).  </p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-04-16 10:04:36 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><mark>Symonyms for </mark><strong><mark>Unemployment rate</mark></strong><mark>:</mark></p><p>jobless rate;</p><p>number of jobless/ unemployed;</p><p>amount of people out of work;</p><p>rate = persentage, proportion, ratio. </p><p><br/></p><p><mark>Synonyms for </mark><strong><mark>To leave</mark></strong><mark>:</mark></p><p>to depart from;</p><p>to move from;</p><p>to go away</p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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