https://goo.gl/bYQa6e by Ian Gallie

https://goo.gl/bYQa6e by Ian Gallie https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9 Loop of Jade sequencing activity en-us 2017-10-19 03:10:53 UTC 2023-10-14 00:51:32 UTC hello@padlet.com Gabby, Cindy, Erin, Jade 0108077 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/198525140 loop of jade]]> 2017-10-19 04:30:03 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/198525140 Samuel, Jeffrey, Eddie 0108028 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/198525195 we thought it made sense
NVM ITS AN IMPROV]]> 2017-10-19 04:30:35 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/198525195 0108028 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/198525336 2017-10-19 04:31:58 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/198525336 0108028 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/198525361 2017-10-19 04:32:12 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/198525361 KJ, Waylon, Alfred, Ethan 0007021 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/198525379 By KJ]]> 2017-10-19 04:32:24 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/198525379 KJ, Ethan, Alfred, Waylon 0007021 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/198525529 2017-10-19 04:33:46 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/198525529 Ivan, William, Nic, Lok Hei 01080101 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/198525542 Loop of Jade, best we could do !]]> 2017-10-19 04:34:00 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/198525542 Comparison 0108028 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199448668 In the original, the author speaks about 2 stories at once, with one being the mother talking to the author, and the other being about a pendant made of jade between Zhu and Liang. However, our interpretation revolved around piecing the puzzle together with logic, which in turn creates a different story but with a similar kind of meaning/feel to it. Our improvisation also alternated less frequently between the short and main story.]]> 2017-10-23 05:40:31 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199448668 Compare & Contrast 0412002 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199448669 Sarah Howe and our interpretation were very different. We had a different streamline of logic. It would be challenging to make it match up, because the blocks of proses and poem seemed pretty isolated, both structurally and logically. It made sense after reading hers, but it was hard to see the big pictures when we were trying to put it together ourselves. We made it alternating between short poem and prose, while Sarah Howe's version seems more random.]]> 2017-10-23 05:40:31 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199448669 Compare and Contrast 0007014 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199448858 My Interpretation:
-Limited view
-Random

Sara Howe's interpretation:
-Beautiful
-Going out on tangents
-Logical

]]> 2017-10-23 05:42:29 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199448858 Comparison 0108083 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199449208 Our group attempted to interpret what Sarah Howe's poem Loop of Jade with out looking at the original first. At first we thought it was two different poems since the size of the stanzas were really different in size and word length. ]]> 2017-10-23 05:46:21 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199449208 Compare and contrast https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199449238 Howe's interpretation is very different from ours. The poem was muddled, and they seemed like paragraphs more than verses of a poem.

]]> 2017-10-23 05:46:52 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199449238 Compare and Contrast 00070131 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199449292 Our interpretation is quite different to Sara Howe's as we thought that the different structures we came up with were more logical and made more sense. It was challenging to match up the blocks because we are not familiar with Sara's work and the blocks did not seem to have an obvious structure. After reading her full poem, it made sense but it was still slightly muddled and in some areas, it seemed like she was going off on a tangent and some parts seem relatively random.]]> 2017-10-23 05:47:27 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199449292 Overview 0411005 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199449467 Our sequence was pretty close to the original. We followed the logical order but got confused by the small verses.]]> 2017-10-23 05:49:25 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199449467 Comparison IVAN CHAU 01080101 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199449533 2017-10-23 05:50:24 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199449533 How is our interpretation different from Sarah Howe's? 0108077 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199449563 Instead of incorporating the story in the form of a poem in the middle of larger paragraphs of text, our group arranged the poem to make sense chronologically then arranged the rest of the text. When putting the poem and text together, we looked at hints in the long paragraphs that indicate which stanza is in front or behind the paragraph.]]> 2017-10-23 05:50:49 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199449563 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199449639 2017-10-23 05:51:40 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199449639 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199449642 2017-10-23 05:51:41 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199449642 Comparison 0108008 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199449769 Our groups interpretation of Loop of Jade was very different from Sarah Howe's. Our group thought that each stanza of the poem corresponded with each paragraph of the prose. However, the poem and the prose was connected by meaning. Comparing Zhu and Liang, with her and her mother.]]> 2017-10-23 05:53:11 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199449769 Ivan Chau Comparison 01080101 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199449913 Ours was different than that of Sarah Howe's original, but still included some elements from the original. For example: we thought the stanzas with italics would go in between stanzas with normal words. This was something used in the original, but the order was what we did incorrectly. ]]> 2017-10-23 05:54:43 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199449913 Setting igallie https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199841871 2017-10-24 03:32:24 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199841871 Character and Action igallie https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199841904 2017-10-24 03:32:40 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199841904 Syle igallie https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199842074 2017-10-24 03:34:16 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199842074 Ideas igallie https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199842082 2017-10-24 03:34:20 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199842082 'I can never know this place' Paragraph 0412002 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199842977 2017-10-24 03:41:29 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199842977 Paragraph 1 0108028 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199843008 When the television has stayed on too long, the channels ended, and all the downstairs lights switched off but one, sometimes, rarely, my mother will begin to talk, without prelude or warning, about her growing up. Then her words feel pulled up from a dark and unreflective well - willed and not willed. It isn't that this tacit contract is not tinged by our same daily fumblings, but when men are asleep, I think she believes that it's someone else's turn to listen.]]> 2017-10-24 03:41:41 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199843008 paragraph 5 setting 0411005 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199843050 inside a room with an autumn storm happening outside. The poet is with her mother?]]> 2017-10-24 03:42:03 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199843050 Character and Action 0108008 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199843095 Characters: "Me", mother
Action: "Huddles closer to the other girls." This could be to keep them warm, and show motherly love. "Hairs begin to lift" shows the coming of the lightning, which symbolizes something bad.]]> 2017-10-24 03:42:30 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199843095 Characters 0412002 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199843158 'I can never know this place' shows that the character e.g. the poet feels like she doesn't belong, and she feels unfamiliar.]]> 2017-10-24 03:43:04 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199843158 Group 3 (Jade, Brendan and Nic) - Paragraph 3 Analysis 00070131 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199843185 Setting - Set in a dark, gross place (very unhygienic). There are cockroaches and algae and rust and faeces. It is disgusting. It is set in a school and the school is described with dark imagery.

Character and Action - The character washes her hair with green detergent. This suggests that poverty is imminent within the environment she is exploring.

Style - The style of text that she displays throughout this poem in paragraph 3, she utilises extensive vocabulary to describe the imagery, fully sculpting the idea she would like the audience members to understand with adjectives. For this section of the poem, they have devised this into a range of sentences, being indifferent to the structure of the entire poem. Additionally, figurative examples such as metaphors are used to describe the given imagery thus painting a visual for us with connection to the use of the five sense.

Ideas - Paranoia, disgust, hyperboles, smilies, exaggeration.]]> 2017-10-24 03:43:13 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199843185 Structure 01080101 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199843413 Looking at the structure of this text, the poet does not end each section with full stops, instead in a rather more "run-on" style. ]]> 2017-10-24 03:44:53 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199843413 Setting 0412002 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199843449 'its daily thinning soup' shows that the characters are poor, because they are running out of flavour and they just have to add more and more water to their soup, suggesting food shortage.]]> 2017-10-24 03:45:12 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199843449 Paragraph 0007021 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199843454 She tells of her mother's childhood horrors through describing the communal kitchen and the "muggy" climate. This effectively conveys ]]> 2017-10-24 03:45:16 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199843454 Setting 0108028 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199843655 The first paragraph is set in a dimly lit living room with a television.]]> 2017-10-24 03:47:28 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199843655 Character & Action 0108028 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199843822 The characters in this paragraph are the author and the author's mother.]]> 2017-10-24 03:49:15 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199843822 Pathetic Fallacy 0412002 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199843978 'The harbour thundering in the echoing room' shows chaos through how loud it is, and how vulnerable the people in the room are under comparison. This creates a gloomy mood in the poem.]]> 2017-10-24 03:50:31 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199843978 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199844340 2017-10-24 03:53:23 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199844340 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199844371 I think the paragraph is trying to highlight a trapped feeling felt by the narrator. A night dead television set shows that there is not more entertainment; a sense of loneliness and emptiness is present. The autumn storm mentioned also indicates that the narrator is trapped indoors. Finally, the mention of wrought bars could be a metaphor for bars in a prison cell. Further emphasising the trapped feeling. ~ Jade w]]> 2017-10-24 03:53:42 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199844371 Paragraph 1 Style https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199844381 The style of the first paragraph is that it is in first person, with the person being the poet, Sarah Howe. She used some form of symbolism, because 'her words feel pulled up from a dark or unreflective well'.

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"Harbor thunder echoes in their sleeping room"

"they interred him by
The mountain road."

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"Harbor thunder echoes in their sleeping room"

"they interred him by
The mountain road."

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]]> 2017-10-24 04:34:55 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199848975 Action 0108081 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199849014 This paragraphs illustrates the horror of Sarah Howe's mother living in poor conditions, and shows the fear her mother has faced by using may descriptive words and builds up tension]]> 2017-10-24 04:35:25 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199849014 Paragraph 10 0108077 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199849131 About the narrator's experience of living in a man's home and how he told her and his children stories at night.]]> 2017-10-24 04:36:26 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199849131 Character and Action 0007021 https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199849158 Sarah explains in detail how her mother's "trademark non - sequiturs" has affected her trip to Shanghai. She explains the table at the family with high importance.]]> 2017-10-24 04:36:47 UTC https://padlet.com/igallie/4gtshwgma6r9/wish/199849158