Show Don't Tell by Stephanie Nickerson https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2 en-us 2019-02-04 15:21:54 UTC 2019-02-05 23:50:49 UTC hello@padlet.com Show, Don't Tell stephanie_nickerson1 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329192955 Rewrite the following sentence to 'show' the reader what is going on in the story rather than 'tell' them.

Sophia was getting excited.


 ]]> 2019-02-08 14:04:51 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329192955 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199729 Sophia was jumping up and down and couldn't wait for the birthday party - Ethan]]> 2019-02-08 14:15:27 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199729 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199747 Sophia was jumping up and down. Her heart was racing.

Nicholas S.]]> 2019-02-08 14:15:29 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199747 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199754 Sophia was jumping up and down

kai]]> 2019-02-08 14:15:30 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199754 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199764 Sophia was jumping up and down she rushed down stairs and yelled to her mom it's finally my birthday. Justin]]> 2019-02-08 14:15:31 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199764 Vanessa https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199776 Sophia jumped out of bed it was her big day she will turn 10 !
Sophia cannot sleep this year she  will turn 10 . Sophia wakes up with a smile she smiles from ear to ear then squeals " It's my birthday ! "

]]> 2019-02-08 14:15:32 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199776 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199805 Sophia was jumping around saying yippee.
Jamie]]> 2019-02-08 14:15:34 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199805 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199840 Sophia did cartwheels, did backflips all because it is her birthday she barley stopped doing stuff. She ran to school when she got to Ms. Nickerson's class she she shouts to everyone,"It's my birthday!!!!
Nimo


]]> 2019-02-08 14:15:38 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199840 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199841 Sophia jumped up and down. "yes!" she sqealed, "it's the best day in my life!"
by Ryan ]]> 2019-02-08 14:15:38 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199841 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199853 Sophia felt her heart thumping at full speed. She couldn't wait for her birthday!
-Nathan L.]]> 2019-02-08 14:15:39 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199853 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199854 Sophia was so excited she jumped downstairs and had  breakfast it was her birthday

William C.]]> 2019-02-08 14:15:39 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199854 Aishi https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199866 Sophia jumped out of bed put on her favourite dress ran downstairs and ate her breakfast it was her birthday she had just turned 10! 

]]> 2019-02-08 14:15:41 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199866 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199873 Sophia's heart was thumping, she was holding back a scream, she was sitting in front of the window squirming with joy. It is her birthday and her friends were coming over!

Arturo]]> 2019-02-08 14:15:41 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199873 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199903 Sophia was jumping up and down!
She was shouting and screaming when she heard news that she was going to Australia!

Emily]]> 2019-02-08 14:15:43 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199903 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199933 Sophia was starting to jump around
and squeal with joy!
   
-Sophia C

]]> 2019-02-08 14:15:47 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199933 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199945 Sophia squealed with joy, today was  her birthday and she couldn't wait!
Madeline]]> 2019-02-08 14:15:48 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199945 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199979 Sophia jumped up and down with excitment

Sophia p]]> 2019-02-08 14:15:51 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329199979 Sophia jumped out of bed put on her best dress and zoomed down stairs. She could not wait because today was her birthday. Sarah https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329200111                               ]]> 2019-02-08 14:16:04 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329200111 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329200541 Sophia was ecstatic! It was her birthday today and she was going on a tropical family vacation. 

NICK D]]> 2019-02-08 14:16:49 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329200541 Sophia was jumping up and down and instantly raced out the door and down the stairs https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329200582 "Nathan W"]]> 2019-02-08 14:16:53 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329200582 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329201170 Sophia was having tears of joy. Her heart felt as though it was lifted up.

Nicholas S.]]> 2019-02-08 14:17:56 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329201170 Sophia was sitting at her desk then the teacher walked in and said, "The printer broke so there is no test and you can do anything," Sophia jumped up and down Justin https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329201283 2019-02-08 14:18:08 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329201283 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329201940 Sophia jumped out of bed and ran down the stairs. She twirled and let out a happy scream, trying her best not to wake everyone up.
                   -Alyssa]]> 2019-02-08 14:19:17 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329201940 Sophia started to jump on her bed feeling warmth in her self. She couldn't wait for the big day! https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329201995 Oscar]]> 2019-02-08 14:19:23 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329201995 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329202076 Sophia raced down the stairs and screamed to her mother " it's my birthday!!!!!!!!!" - Ethan]]> 2019-02-08 14:19:31 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329202076 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329202360 Sophia jumped out of bed. Although it was 2 in the morning they were going to Australia!

Madeline]]> 2019-02-08 14:20:03 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329202360 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329202469 Sophia was counting down the seconds till it was time for school to end.
Jamie]]> 2019-02-08 14:20:16 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329202469 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329202661 Sophia was super excited she was on her way to Disneyland

William C.]]> 2019-02-08 14:20:34 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329202661 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329202771 Sophia jumped out of bed at 4:00 ran downstairs gobbled up her cereal! and ran like crazy all over the house finshed packing her stuff. When she got to the airport with his mom and dad and on the airplane she was out of breath and sleepy. 

Emily]]> 2019-02-08 14:20:43 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329202771 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329202923 Knowing that today was her birthday she ran out of bed,tossed on her clothes and started to jump around! 

-Sophia C]]> 2019-02-08 14:20:57 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329202923 Sophia quickly got dressed went downstairs and... Happy Birthday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329203729 "Nathan W"]]> 2019-02-08 14:22:13 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329203729 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329203788 Sophia was so happy that she felt like she was about to burst! She had planned the absolute best birthday party ever, and it would be so fun!
     "I can't wait." she thought to herself.

NICK D]]> 2019-02-08 14:22:18 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329203788 Sophia woke up around 3 a.m and flew down the stairs. She squealed very happily. https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329204187 Oscar]]> 2019-02-08 14:22:55 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329204187 Sophia was jumping up and down she raced down the stairs and screamed! '' Its my birthday'' https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329204820 Jay]]> 2019-02-08 14:23:54 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329204820 kai https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329205543 Sophia screamed "Its my birthday" she screamed as she ran down the stairs]]> 2019-02-08 14:25:08 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329205543 Sophia just heard she was going to Hawaii. Justin https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329207382 2019-02-08 14:28:24 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329207382 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329208518 2019-02-08 14:30:28 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329208518 "Happy Birthday!" yelled her mother Justin https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329209389 2019-02-08 14:32:03 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/4gsntevlwii2/wish/329209389