Create a paragraph using PEEL by Petra Rowan https://padlet.com/petra_rowan/4grchn49ju1flap8 GCSE Group 1 en-us 2021-09-27 13:48:02 UTC 2021-09-27 14:34:21 UTC hello@padlet.com Create a paragraph using PEEL - Point - Evidence - Explain - Then write a linking sentence to start the next paragraph petra_rowan https://padlet.com/petra_rowan/4grchn49ju1flap8/wish/1771187739 2021-09-27 13:49:47 UTC https://padlet.com/petra_rowan/4grchn49ju1flap8/wish/1771187739 Yasemin https://padlet.com/petra_rowan/4grchn49ju1flap8/wish/1771258845 Social media is bad for the children as they spend too much time on the screens.therefore 90% of the people say that their children spend too much time on their phones on social media and don't spend enough family time as well as loosing sleep for school next morning. "can be unhealthy and has been linked to feelings of envy, inadequacy and less satisfaction with life. Studies have even suggested that it can lead to ADHD symptoms, depression, anxiety and sleep deprivation."although children could get depressed as they won't be spending too much family time for example sitting and eating with their families at home.
However it could be suggested that social media could help children with their education and their knowledge.]]> 2021-09-27 14:07:55 UTC https://padlet.com/petra_rowan/4grchn49ju1flap8/wish/1771258845 Perivan https://padlet.com/petra_rowan/4grchn49ju1flap8/wish/1771263405 It could be considered that wealth does not always bring happiness to people around the world. 
This shows from this evidences that " Too many people spend money they earned..to buy things they don't want..to impress people that they don't like" 
This means that people finds wealth their happiness and they think they own the world. People wealth can make them change their behaviours and attitudes towards other also can become selfish. Money can not give you health because your working. 
On the other hand, wealth can give you education and lifes to live and have your future also can give you food and drink. The most important part in life is that money can't buy you family and your loved ones also give you job.]]> 2021-09-27 14:09:05 UTC https://padlet.com/petra_rowan/4grchn49ju1flap8/wish/1771263405 sultan https://padlet.com/petra_rowan/4grchn49ju1flap8/wish/1771297739   
Point – it could be consider that there should be more mens working in childcare. 
Evidence – there was a recent survey which it showed that childcare staff thought that mens should work more in childcare. 
Explain  - when a male walks into a childcare setting they should be confidence and also there should be a role model next to them so that they could  feel better rather than just being surrounded next to womens. 
Link – it could be considered that it will be good idea if men work in childcare, there will be positive influence. 
]]> 2021-09-27 14:18:10 UTC https://padlet.com/petra_rowan/4grchn49ju1flap8/wish/1771297739 FATOSH https://padlet.com/petra_rowan/4grchn49ju1flap8/wish/1771298624 P – It could be considered that there should be more nurses and doctors in a A&E centre.

E – the current state of hospitals statistic shows that 70% of patients wait for at least 2 hours to see a nurse and 5 hours to see a doctor in total of 7 hour of waiting.

 A – Last week the A&E of Middlesex hospital was crowed with at last 100 patient. Government measures have been done and have come to a point where there was so many complains about the waiting system 

 L – it could be considered and make changes with the waiting time and lower it for the patients that’s been waiting for long time.

 

 

 

 

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