Hewitt Anderson's Great Big Life by Jerdine Nolen by Sherry Golden https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq Writing Traits en-us 2017-08-29 21:30:41 UTC 2017-08-31 13:23:15 UTC hello@padlet.com No,I do not think that the story ideas flow because I still have alot of qustions and the doctor did not tell us what and why he is going to do with Hewitt https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922255 2017-08-31 12:50:25 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922255 No because the story did https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922260 not make cint]]> 2017-08-31 12:50:25 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922260 No because the Dr. gargantuan did not say why it would be his life's work. And when he fell into the flour and he just came out of the flour? https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922266 2017-08-31 12:50:26 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922266 I think they did not flow because I need more info about what he going to do with the kid. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922267 2017-08-31 12:50:26 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922267 Yes, because you can under stand what she is saying and she is useing great grammer. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922268 2017-08-31 12:50:26 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922268 No, because it went to him being in a cup of flower to a doctor wanting to make him famous for being small https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922273 2017-08-31 12:50:27 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922273 no,because they wanted him to have a good life but when he's famus he will have a better life https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922274 2017-08-31 12:50:27 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922274 I think the sentences didn't flow together nicely when Dr.Gargantuan was talking about fame and money then it went to how the parents didn't want there son to be famous. But WHAT WILL HE DO TO HIM!! https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922283 2017-08-31 12:50:29 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922283 No some of the thing the ather said made no since. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922293 2017-08-31 12:50:31 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922293 No, the story ideas did'n flow and connect together clearly because the doctor was wanting to have the little boy famous because he want all the fame for his self. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922294 2017-08-31 12:50:31 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922294 Yes, every thing was clear to me because when the section change some people said it did not because Ms. Golden did not read the rest of the book. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922296 2017-08-31 12:50:31 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922296 no,because it was just not going into my head. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922308 2017-08-31 12:50:32 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922308 Yes the ideas flowed together clearly because she was probley small growing up so her growing up so small that probley gave her the idea of the book. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922321 2017-08-31 12:50:34 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922321 No because I did`t really understand the story because it did not flow to me I did`t get the story. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922323 2017-08-31 12:50:34 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922323 Flowing and connecting https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922351 The story did not flow or connect clearly because it went from talking about his growth to the doctor talking about how Hewitt  would make a fortune off of how tiny he was and the doctor wanted to become famous. I still wonder what the doctor is going to do to Hewitt.

]]> 2017-08-31 12:50:39 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922351 https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922356 Yes, because it is giving all of the imformation I need and I have no questions to ask. I think it does flow clearly.

]]> 2017-08-31 12:50:39 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922356 No ,because it went from the doctor saying he could make Hewitt his life work but then automaticly his parents said no. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922367 2017-08-31 12:50:41 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922367 Yes it did flow together by the doctor wanted to make him famous and the parents said no like a normal family and that makes sense. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922377 2017-08-31 12:50:43 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922377 No because it didn't stay on the subject.It went to the flower to the docter. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922390 2017-08-31 12:50:45 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922390 Kind of because it did not stay on one subject https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922492 2017-08-31 12:51:09 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922492 No because the doctor what to work on him. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922582 2017-08-31 12:51:27 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922582 No,it did not flow together because it went to him being in a flour cup to a doctor wanting to make him famous. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922746 2017-08-31 12:52:04 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922746 No ,but it did almost flow together and dId't connect. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922928 2017-08-31 12:52:37 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183922928 no, because of the docter wanted all the fame. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183923729 2017-08-31 12:54:59 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183923729 Yes she did because when I thought of the the humongous bean stalk she used mammoth to describe the bean stalk and https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928031 2017-08-31 13:08:31 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928031 Yes, because when she said the summer salt back flip pack I could picture it in my mine. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928036 2017-08-31 13:08:32 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928036 YES because the author got the ideas form jack and the beanstalk. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928053 2017-08-31 13:08:35 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928053 Yes because she made think of jack and the bean stalk so i made a text to text conection. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928059 2017-08-31 13:08:36 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928059 She made a clear vivid because she gave me simlies and she gave me teak to teak and made me thank of jack of the bean sock, https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928080 2017-08-31 13:08:39 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928080 Yes, because when they when she said something https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928083 2017-08-31 13:08:39 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928083 yes,because I see hewitt swimming and climbing the been stalk https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928086 2017-08-31 13:08:39 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928086 She created a picture in mid https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928092 I could see him when he was climbing the beanstalk and how scared he was in my mind.]]> 2017-08-31 13:08:40 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928092 Yes,because she used a lot of detail so you can under stand it better because the picture does not tell everything. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928093 2017-08-31 13:08:41 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928093 Yes because when the author said pure golden eggs i thought of the eggs on a shelf side by side in a case. when the mother the book gave me info. I made images in my mind when the author said https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928102 2017-08-31 13:08:42 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928102 https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928107 Yes because I no that there will be a goose because a golden egg belongs to a goose]]> 2017-08-31 13:08:42 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928107 She created a picture in my mind when she said eggs I thought about Jack and a beanstalk. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928108 2017-08-31 13:08:42 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928108 Yes,she made amazing pictures in my mind like she said mammoth beenstalk she made me think of https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928112 2017-08-31 13:08:43 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928112 Yes did https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928123 2017-08-31 13:08:45 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928123 Yes, because when she made me ideas from from jack and the beenstock and picture it in my head and so good https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928159 2017-08-31 13:08:52 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928159 Yes, I can see him swimming and climing the been stoak. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928160 2017-08-31 13:08:52 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928160 https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928164 Yes she did I saw the goose lying the richest gold egg.

]]> 2017-08-31 13:08:53 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928164 https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928220 Yes, because when the narrator said "The mom slipped and messed up the dads summer salt backflip pack" I imaged the little boy laughing.

]]> 2017-08-31 13:09:00 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928220 Vivid Pictures https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928406 Jerdine Nolen did create vivid pictures in my mind because when she said that they had golden eggs I could just imagine how gold and big they were.

]]> 2017-08-31 13:09:34 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928406 Yes,i could imagine him on the Beanstollk https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928913 2017-08-31 13:10:27 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183928913 Yes becouse she gave a lot of very good details with the summer salt back flip which was very good details. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183929035 2017-08-31 13:10:42 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183929035 Yes,because went she talked about all the different eggs I could imagine it. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183929256 2017-08-31 13:11:19 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183929256 Voice because I felt sad and happy. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931767 2017-08-31 13:17:54 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931767 Voice because he help is family so they can get out of the gold egg room. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931778 2017-08-31 13:17:57 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931778 The trait that jumped out at me the most is word choice because she used good words to me. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931782 2017-08-31 13:17:57 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931782 https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931785 Ideas, because I heard interesting and important thought when Mr.Golden was reading.]]> 2017-08-31 13:17:57 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931785 ideas, Hewitt had an idea to put him in the key holl and he relisd he had A grate life https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931796 2017-08-31 13:17:58 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931796 Yes, one trait jump out on me when the DOC fell back and locked the door and then Hewitt saved his family and the roast by. DAEVON https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931802 2017-08-31 13:17:59 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931802 No ther was trates that jumped out at me. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931811 PS. Sorry]]> 2017-08-31 13:18:00 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931811 voice because I like how she uses amazing words not boring words like good she https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931818 uses amazing  and humgise

]]> 2017-08-31 13:18:01 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931818 Ideas,because the boy had a great idea to climb in a key hole and help his parents and Dr.gargantuan https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931831 2017-08-31 13:18:03 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931831 Voice is what I heard when she was talking about how everyone in the Anderson household celebrated because of Hewit Anderson. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931851                     From  Dylan
P.S. Mrs.Golden I like it ]]> 2017-08-31 13:18:06 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931851 The ideas that the narrater used to right the story and theyare all really good traits that had poped out at me in th story. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931858 2017-08-31 13:18:08 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931858 Ideas https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931861 When Hewitt got into the key whole and unlocked the door to free his parents and the doctor that was a great idea because he was small enough to fit]]> 2017-08-31 13:18:09 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931861 Voice,because you could always know how they felt by their tone of voice like when Mrs.Anderson said "My raost is in the oven".. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931880 2017-08-31 13:18:12 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931880 Voice , because the fun why Ms.golden read the book... like the word enormous from the other part of the book https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931881 2017-08-31 13:18:12 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931881 Yes because when they got stuck in the eggs room hewitt saved his parents https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931883 2017-08-31 13:18:12 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931883 The way Ms golden was reading it so good I had to pick voice. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931916 2017-08-31 13:18:18 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931916 Organization https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931918 because each paragraph was in organization ]]> 2017-08-31 13:18:18 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931918 There were some traits that I heard like ideas,voice,and organization. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931935 2017-08-31 13:18:21 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183931935 https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183932105 I]]> 2017-08-31 13:18:43 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183932105 https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183932109 I LOVED WHEN HE NEW WAS VERY LOVED BIG OR SMALL.]]> 2017-08-31 13:18:43 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183932109 I love when he came https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183932139




]]> 2017-08-31 13:18:48 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183932139 Yes, when they got stuck i the gold egg room and when like he opened the door without using the key. https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183932216 2017-08-31 13:19:03 UTC https://padlet.com/sherrygolden/4frfv3o52ybq/wish/183932216