https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren Made with fortitude en-us 2017-10-02 14:22:21 UTC 2017-10-04 11:11:48 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193780986 The opening paragraph shows he is grateful for his present from his school teacher and looks forward to keeping them as pets. It talks about his past when the teacher gave them to him]]> 2017-10-04 10:34:42 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193780986 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193781002 It shows his intensity for cockroaches. It introduces what the text is going to be about]]> 2017-10-04 10:34:44 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193781002 nieldw https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193781036 it shows that he was thinking about the past and his passion for cockroaches when he said "it was a wonderful present"]]> 2017-10-04 10:34:54 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193781036 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193781109 His passions for the creatures also there is positive views in the text like "a wonderful present and make lovely pets"]]> 2017-10-04 10:35:12 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193781109 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193781308 It shows his love for cockroaches. The text starts with the setting of the primary school and it introduces one character and what the text is going to be about. It also gives the positives and negatives about their impressions of the cockroaches ]]> 2017-10-04 10:35:59 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193781308 nieldw https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193781865 The Shed 
Primary school
Garden
Madagascar


]]> 2017-10-04 10:37:51 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193781865 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193781880 The opening paragraph presents the past as Darren was presented with four hissing cockroaches as a strange present to been given to by his teacher]]> 2017-10-04 10:37:55 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193781880 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193781921 The shed 
Earth 
School]]> 2017-10-04 10:38:02 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193781921 nieldw https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193781996 Primary school
Garden shed
Madagascar ]]> 2017-10-04 10:38:19 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193781996 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193782125 he talks about his passion for cockroaches

]]> 2017-10-04 10:38:40 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193782125 moorek https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193782205 They're clean]]> 2017-10-04 10:38:54 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193782205 moorek https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193782333 Health hazard☠️]]> 2017-10-04 10:39:19 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193782333 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193782336 The garden 🔌]]> 2017-10-04 10:39:20 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193782336 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193782365 2017-10-04 10:39:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193782365 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193782397 The opening paragraph engages the reader to read by the unusual present he got and from whom he got it. Which makes the reader interested in what is the rest of the text.The first paragraph introduces him and his start of passions towards cockroaches. ]]> 2017-10-04 10:39:36 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193782397 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193782504 2017-10-04 10:40:00 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193782504 nieldw https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193782539 Health hazard 
They clean themselves]]> 2017-10-04 10:40:09 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193782539 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193782554 His shed
School]]> 2017-10-04 10:40:13 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193782554 moorek https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193782832 Buildings (health inspector said that they had to be closed down)]]> 2017-10-04 10:41:15 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193782832 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193782918 Spends an hour cleaning themslevs]]> 2017-10-04 10:41:41 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193782918 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193783107 Primary school 
The shed

]]> 2017-10-04 10:42:30 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193783107 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193783186 Health hazard and spread diseases ]]> 2017-10-04 10:42:53 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193783186 moorek https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193783352 Darren (obviously)]]> 2017-10-04 10:43:35 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193783352 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193783365 "It was a wonderful present" , " Associated with poor hygiene and the spread of desiease " , " He likes nothing better than to put his hand into a squirming tankful and let them tickle his fingers." ]]> 2017-10-04 10:43:40 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193783365 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193783418 The ending paragraph is effective as it shows the future where Darren will travel nationwide or overseas to Madagascar ]]> 2017-10-04 10:43:56 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193783418 nieldw https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193783453 Darren 
George makin
Girl friend 
Parents ]]> 2017-10-04 10:44:05 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193783453 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193783902 Darren and George Makin the Heath inspector and Darren's mum and girlfriend]]> 2017-10-04 10:45:28 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193783902 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193783914 Primary school
The shed 
Garden
Skirting boards]]> 2017-10-04 10:45:31 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193783914 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193783981 Health hazard 
Clean themselves ]]> 2017-10-04 10:45:52 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193783981 moorek https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193783994 By talking about cockroaches]]> 2017-10-04 10:45:55 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193783994 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193784114 Gf 
Mum
Dad
Darren 
George ]]> 2017-10-04 10:46:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193784114 nieldw https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193784146 In the opening paragraph it shows he is grateful for getting a present of his teacher and is interested about keeping them as a pet. The text broadens because he starts of talking about when he was in school and then he talks about going to Madagascar.]]> 2017-10-04 10:46:33 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193784146 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193784186 Darren 

]]> 2017-10-04 10:46:42 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193784186 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193784223 The shed 
Primary school 
Garden]]> 2017-10-04 10:46:52 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193784223 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193784224 It shows he loves cockroaches and wants to learn more about them and they are broadening where the bugs are from and what species there are. ]]> 2017-10-04 10:46:53 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193784224 nieldw https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193784229 It shows that his passionate enough that he is going to a different country with other people that enjoy cockroaches as much as he does so that he can see more of them.]]> 2017-10-04 10:46:53 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193784229 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193784245  A carrier of diseases]]> 2017-10-04 10:46:56 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193784245 moorek https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193784295 Heath inspector]]> 2017-10-04 10:47:07 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193784295 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193784460 Darren
Parents ]]> 2017-10-04 10:47:49 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193784460 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193784482 The school.    
Garden
The shed
Food premises
Madagascar ]]> 2017-10-04 10:47:58 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193784482 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193784512 Health Inspector, Darren, Darren gf, Darren dad and Darren mum

]]> 2017-10-04 10:48:08 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193784512 moorek https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193784616 Making making fun of cockroaches making people itch ]]> 2017-10-04 10:48:34 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193784616 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193784691 The school 
The shed
His garden
Madagascar]]> 2017-10-04 10:48:55 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193784691 nieldw https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193784745 Health inspector 
Darren 
Parents ]]> 2017-10-04 10:49:07 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193784745 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193784913 Is shows how passionate Darren is about cockroaches and it is going worldwide with his passion. ]]> 2017-10-04 10:49:54 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193784913 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193785065 Nice pun XD makes it less serious and makes it more light hearted 
And where he is going with it all which is Madagascar 🥐🥐🥐]]> 2017-10-04 10:50:35 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193785065 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193785083 Health hazard, carrier of disease, ]]> 2017-10-04 10:50:40 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193785083 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193785096 Darren, girlfriend, parents,environmental health officer]]> 2017-10-04 10:50:44 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193785096 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193785329 The ]]> 2017-10-04 10:51:43 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193785329 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193786838 They clean themselves

]]> 2017-10-04 10:57:53 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193786838 moorek https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193786881  Let's go to Madagascar 🇲🇬 And he's not alone as other people are joining him]]> 2017-10-04 10:58:07 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193786881 moorek https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193787062 Saying that cockroaches are a wonderful present 🎁 despite them being pests to normal people]]> 2017-10-04 10:59:00 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193787062 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193787199 The setting changes to the future and what he intends to do, he wants to learn more about the cockroaches ]]> 2017-10-04 10:59:43 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193787199 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193787277 He ends the paragraph with a pun which leaves a light-hearted mood]]> 2017-10-04 11:00:03 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193787277 https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193788007 The only problem is that it is a well known and seems like a great 👍 ]]> 2017-10-04 11:03:24 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/darren/wish/193788007