I didn't felt (vf)

He called to (/) my parents

They was (vf)

One hour at (include one word) hospital

FINAL: GOOD, PLEASE CHECK THE MISTAKES.

EXCELLENT!!!

I walked down the avenue, on the corner I stumbled and fell from a high sidewalk. I rolled down the street with my purse in my hand. I felt embarrased, so I stood up fast, because there was a lot of people. The people ran to help, I didn't like that, so I pretended I was ok, but my foot ached. I left and walked quickly like I nothing hurt. This was in February

Laughed of (ww) me

FINAL: VERY GOOD

12 years ago, when I was thirteen years old, I was in the school in the grade ninth, with my classmates in the subject of physical education, It was a sunny day. I was exercising in the stairs, a classmate was telling a joke, I was paying to him attention and I fell down on the stairs, I hurt my back, legs and chest, I sprained my wrist too. I got up of the floor and I sat down to rest a little because I was sore, I hurt all my beautiful body. Everybody laughed of me :( except the girl I liked.

My father
was Alfonso Guarín López (He died years ago), when he was seventeen (17) years
old, he was working on a brickworks with his old brother “My uncle José” in Bogotá – near to Mochuelo neighborhood.

A day he was digging into a mountain to collect clay, suddenly collapsed mountain (WO) and it fell on his back and (^) broke his spine, then my uncle found him and helped him (INCLUDE A WORD) out but by then he couldn’t longer walk.

In the hospital helped him but my father didn’t make therapies, he continued walking
on crutches.

FINAL: VERY GOOD

When i (CAP) was 9 month old, I was with my babysister
because my parents had to go out at (WW) work.

One day, my grandmother called my babysister to help
her in the restaurant and she said “Hello Martha, can you help me, I need to
server (WW) a lot of dishes and the person isn’t helping me”, so she went with me
and she left me in the kitchen.

My babysister was serving a dish above another and they had hot soup. I walked right into them and I burned my face and my neck. It was awful.

FINAL: VERY GOOD, CORRECT THE MISTAKES PLEASE

I had 20 treatments with a casual doctor.

FINAL : EXCELLENT, CORRECT THE MISTAKES

 

to ptractice (sp)

I accelerate (vf)

how (^) stop

I accelerate (vf)

only I hurt my knee

Final: Good, please correct the mistakes

My cousin had (ww) ten years

That it (/) was in the living room

the picture it (/) was special

FINAL : GOOD, PLEASE CORRECT THE MISTAKES.

They were playing in the park near to house our (wo) while (/) they threw the ball away so my brother came running for the ball.

In that moment for (ww) the corner came a car (wo)

My brother didn't see the car and (^) crossed the street and (^) that moment the car run (vf) over my Brother (sp). He broke his leg, immediately they took him to the hospital.

FINAL: GOOD, PLEASE CORRECT THE MISTAKES

CORRECTION TASK UNIT9

My brother in law had a accident.

He was working on the street, was driving his motorcycle when a dog went through
then he fell and broke his leg.

He had to go to hospital, they put a cast because he broke the fibula and shinbone,
he had to make therapies and couldn’t work for a year.

Then he went home, and their daughters took care of him until he recovered.

The terrible accident was of Paola (WO) because when she had (VF) 19 years old she had an accident in a motorcycle with her friend and she broke her hip.

She had to be operated and she had many therapies, she was six months in her house, this (WW) time she received many (WW) vIsits from her friends and family while she recovered.

VERY GOOD REPORT

YOUR STORY:

Working in (ww) the street

and placed in a cast for six months (this sentence is incorrect)

He hurted (vf) (^) shinbone and fibula

make (ww) many (ww) therapies

there (punct) his daughters

took care (^ ^)

until (^) recovered

FINAL: BELOW :( please correct it and upload it again)

I was participating (/) a competition

We were meeting (vf)

arrived in (ww) my neighborhood

arrived (^) my house

FINAL: GOOD (PLEASE CORRECT THE MISTAKES AND UPLOAD IT AGAIN)

In Popayán all the years people celebrated “Carnavales de Pubenza” on 5th and 6th January. On January 5th 2014 I was in Popayán and I went out to see a parade to (WW) avenue, when I was in this (WW) place, there were many (WW) people playing with “carioca”, to threw in the body. (I DON'T UNDERSTAND THIS IDEA)

For this reason I was busy and I didn´t see a hole, so I fell down into the hole with my right leg and I had a serius injured (ww).

I was very scared and I cried, I was with my father and my sister, they called an ambulance, then we went to hospital, in this (ww) place I was (/)stayed five days.

For this accident, I was disabled for 4 months.

FINAL: VERY GOOD

FINAL: EXCELLENT

All my classmates saw me and they

(VERY GOOD REPORT)

(EXCELLENT REPORT)

wHEN I PASS (VF)

TOLK (WW) ME

WAIT THAT (WW) OUR HELP

I DONT (VF) WAIT

TO (INCLUDE A WORD) HOSPITAL

THE DOCTOR APPLY (VF)

MYSELF CURE IN A LITTLE PART (ITS NOT CLEAR)

MY MOM HAD ME WARNED (I DONT UNDERSTAND)

I remember the terrible Nathalie's accident. She was at Grandmother's restaurant with her baby-sitter and she burned herself with hot soup when she only was 9 months.

that provide (vf)

And its battery useful life for ten days (It is not clear)

FINAL: VERY GOOD

VERY GOOD!! YOU HAD TWO PROBLEMS: Arrived at (ww)my neighborhood

I arrived at (ww)my house

Johanna's Story,

Her brother was playing soccer in the park with his friends, then, he was running for the ball and he didn't see a car, the car ran over her brother, he broke his leg.

• My invent is a (PL) Ecological Batteries because it helps the world and peoples (PL), (/) help connection of the mobile and improve time online. It recharges easy because it takes solar energy.

• Using Ecological Batteries you can get a product
    very cheap, small, It's made of ecological material and it's long length

For (ww) send

for (ww) carry

anywhere that (ww) world

FINAL: GOOD

Carolina need (vf)

Andres need (vf)

Veronica need (vf)

This invention is easier

FINAL: GOOD

Needs a (/) better

FINAL: VERY GOOD

you have that (ww) load it

you (include a word) going to

FINAL: VERY GOOD

What my partners need

My partners need better signal in the cellphones.

They need more signal capacity.

They need more hardwearing energy.

They need more long (INCORRECT COMPARATIVE) battery.

They need more coverage.

My invention to meet the necessity

Create a portable modem to connect with others (PL) devices
wirelessly in anywhere.

Comparatives

Using the portable modem you can connect a lot of
devices like cellphones and laptops, at the same time wirelessly in anywhere. With
this invention you can save energy in the devices that you connect them because
it uses ecological batteries and gives energy to the connected devices.

More, less and fewer

The portable modem is easier to carry in anywhere,
using this invention you can get more signal in the cellphones and the internet
WIFI. This invention spends less energy than a normal modem, cellphones or
laptops.

Event (ww)

Consist (vf) in (ww)

celphone (sp)

charg (sp)

Allows (include two words) load

panel solar (wo)

informaation (sp)

more interesting that (ww)

whit (sp)

at ist (sp) convenience

FINAL: EXCELLENT!!!

Minimize the uses (ww)

FINAL: EXCELLENT!

This advantage recyclable resources (I don't understand)

The ecological antenna reuse (vf)

FINAL: VERY GOOD!

FINAL: EXCELLENT!

I was going to my university two years ago. I was looking for the mirror in my parent´s car and for this reason I wasn´t paying attention. My brother was talking about his work with their friends and I was looking WhatsApp on my cell phone. Suddenly, my brother crashed my parent´s car with a big bus.  Fortunately, we didn´t hurt ourselves but all the frontal part of the car was destroyed.  Then, I said “Oh my gosh, it’s so late…I need to go to the Psychology Introduction exam” and I asked “Are you ok?”, and he said me “I´m fine, come on! Go to your exam”. Finally, I left the car and I said “good luck with my father”.

Create a battery charge with sum (I don't understand)

Creat glasses easy (wo) for the people

The cell is economical (ww)

FINAL: VERY GOOD

Thank you!!! heheheeh EXCELLENT

* Lorena needs...

Carolina needs...

Andres needs...

Veronica needs...

* This invention is easier

this description is very short

final: GOOD

When I was 3 years old I had straight and light Brown hair. Also, I wore formal cloths because my mom liked dress me very elegant.  Now, I have the same face, I´m taller than I was 8 years (jaja obviously), and I have wavy hair. My complexion and my color eyes are the same until now. In this moment I wear modern clothes without formal things.

they has (vf)

my family are (vf)

in (ww) a vacation's travel (ww)

The men (pl)

I like (include a word) talk

I warm (ww) dress

bots (sp)

look like to (/) my mother

I WAS (WW) FAIR COMPLEXION

imperative (ww)

FINAL: VERY GOOD

FINAL: EXCELLENT!

AND(INCLUDE A WORD) WORE

YOU MEAN ANDREA (I DON'T UNDERSTAND)

SHE LIKE (VF)

AND (INCLUDE A WORD) LIKES DRESSES

FINAL: EXCELLENT!

In (ww) my face

I dress all the time (I don't understand)

alergic (spelling)

fecles (sp)

tuf (ww)

I use (vf) dress

in (include a word) medium (ww)

and (include a word) couldn't move

Excellent!!!

Here (include a word) was 1 year

the (/) brown eyes

FINAL: GOOD :/

eyelashes was (vf)

eyes was (vf)

she was ever (ww) (wo) with the (/) short hair

Like (vf) (include a word) played (vf)

she wear (vf)

now she had (vf)

she wear (vf)

she go (vf)