Esperanza Rising by Philip Ellis https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773 "I can analyze my writing as well as my peers." en-us 2022-03-04 03:54:40 UTC 2022-04-11 21:44:42 UTC hello@padlet.com Lukas https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078635675 218 - “Not being able to swim” (Thorn)   Quote -” The Mexicans can only swim on friday afternoons before they clean the pool on saturday mornings”
 159 - “Crocheting the blanket” (Thorn)  Quote - “ Abuleta’s blanket”  asked mama.
205 - The workers are striking. (Thorn)  Quote - ”The picket signs lay on the ground discarded and like a mess of marbles”
103 - (Thorn) : having to live in a smaller house and having to share rooms with others. Mama has a coughing spasm. Quote - “Mama we are living like horses.

Esperanza Rising is a young adult historical fiction novel written by Mexican-American author Pam Muñoz Ryan and released by Scholastic Publishing on 27 March 2000.[1] The novel focuses on Esperanza, the only daughter of wealthy Mexican parents, and the events that occur after her father’s murder and her subsequent move to California due to the actions of Esperanza's uncles, Tio Luis and Tio Marco. Esperanza, her mother, and their former household servants flee to California with no money during the Great Depression, where they find agricultural work which pays very little. The book received generally positive reviews from critics, who praised Muñoz Ryan’s writing and concluded that it was suitable for classroom discussion.



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]]> 2022-03-04 21:04:55 UTC https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078635675 Milom https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078635676 My last thorn is when papa dies this is a thorn because it says on page 22 “Miguel hung his head Alfonso didn’t say a word but the tears running down his round cheeks confirmed the worst”.  This is a thorn because since papa died Esperaza will not live the rich life anymore.

]]> 2022-03-04 21:04:56 UTC https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078635676 Kenzie My thorn for Esperanza is leaving Aguascalientes Mexico to go to California. I chose leaving Mexico as a thorn because she had to leave one of her best friends Marisol. They had to leave Mexico because Tio Luis threttend Mamma and then burned down mamma and esperanza's house. " Esperanza crouched down the stairs were Alfonso was waiting to lead them out through the kitchen page 41 https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078635689 2022-03-04 21:04:57 UTC https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078635689 Aiden https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078635690 The Pinata she gave to the poor girl was destroyed.”It had been beaten with a stick its insides ripped out Page 213.She was thinking of giving it to mama but she gave it to  the poor girl  instead.That is a thorn for esperanza.

]]> 2022-03-04 21:04:57 UTC https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078635690 Quinn https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078635712 The tears running down his round cheeks confirmed the worst. Everybody was sad because papa died and mama fainted. ]]> 2022-03-04 21:04:58 UTC https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078635712 Nalinee https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078635727 “ This disease, valley fever, makes the body tired and susceptible. We are treating her with medications. She is weak. I know this is hard for you, but we’d like to ask that she have no visitors for at least a month, maybe longer.” (bottom 182-top 183) This is a thorn for Esperanza because she already lost her papa and she can’t lose her mama too. She feels sad inside and she can’t go without mama for one month or more. ]]> 2022-03-04 21:04:58 UTC https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078635727 MASON https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078635749  “I will consider your proposal,'' said Mama. ( page 45) is a thorn for Esperanza because she doesn't want mama to marry Tio Luis. Just like a thorn causes a throbbing pain Esperanza hates Tio Luis.]]> 2022-03-04 21:05:00 UTC https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078635749 Bella https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078635755 A thorn  is when mama gets valley fever. "Mama’s arm was burning, her cheeks were flushed red, and she wasn’t waking”. (page 154) I think that this is torn because Esperanza when mama goes to the hospital Esperanza is not going to have parents so she will have to work.]]> 2022-03-04 21:05:00 UTC https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078635755 REGAN https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078635759 “The doctor came back a few weeks later with more medication.  she is not getting worse. He said, shaking his head but she isn't getting better either.”(page158) I think it is a thorn because mama has always been by her side and Esperanza would be very sad if mama dies. 

]]> 2022-03-04 21:05:01 UTC https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078635759 victoria https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078635828 " She is not getting worse…but she is not getting better.΅(Page#158)This is a thorn because this really upsets Esperanza. Also they don't have enough money for the hospital so Esperanza has to work. It's good that she's working because they don't have enough money and if she doesn't work they won't be able to afford  the hospital and it would be bad if she didnt work considering the condition they are in.

]]> 2022-03-04 21:05:07 UTC https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078635828 Jane https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078635831 “A fire destroyed everything”(page 97)is a thorn for Esperanza because all of her money, her house, and all of her belongings were burnt to the ground including twelve of the porcelain dolls.



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]]> 2022-03-04 21:05:07 UTC https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078635831 Beck https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078635884 “ i'm really sorry to tell you but your mother has pneumonia” (page 182) i think this is a thorn because mama is getting sicker and sicker and it's not good for Esperanza because there's no grandparents there are no grown ups there there's no adults watching them no babysitters no nothing to watch them.]]> 2022-03-04 21:05:11 UTC https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078635884 EDREESE https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078636824 Another thorn is when El Rancho de las rosas burns down well the house burns down. Quote: Esperanza wake up wake up pg(40)]]> 2022-03-04 21:06:05 UTC https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078636824 IRIS https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078637708 “When several of them heard rattling beneath a pile of stalks… dumped it and found an angry rattlesnake inside”(P.G.202) is a thorn for Esperanza because what if Esperanza got bit. Esperanza would be in the hospital and then Miguel, Hortensia, and Alfonso would have to pay extra for hospital fees]]> 2022-03-04 21:06:59 UTC https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078637708 piper https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078637925 Hear is the last thorn - esperanza wake up the house is on fire
(page 40)
My thinking - 
Having your house on fire is something BIG because a home is something you lived in your whole life and when it burns you feel sad,heartbroken,and faded. I really wish that Esperanza can find a good place to stay in the meantime 
]]> 2022-03-04 21:07:13 UTC https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078637925 Andi https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078638295 When the doctor finally came out he looked grim. He walked over where all the women sat. Esperanza followed him.  The doctor signals for the men and waits until everyone is inside. “She has valley fever”. This is a thorn  because  mama could die from valley fever.   (Page 155) ]]> 2022-03-04 21:07:37 UTC https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078638295 Hailey https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078638323 One half of the front room was the kitchen with a stove, sink, and counter, and a table and chairs. A pile of wood waited near the stove. Across the room was a mattress on the floor. The back room had another mattress big enough for two people and a tiny cot. In between sat a wooden fruit crate, to be used as a night table, its side touching each bed. Above was another small window. (Page 102) It is a thorn to me because it is kind of small for all of them.

]]> 2022-03-04 21:07:39 UTC https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078638323 Esequiel https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078638349 “Mama fainted, Hortensia ran to her side.Esperanza felt her heart drop. A noise came out her mouth and slowly her first breath of grief into a tormented cry. she fell to knees and sank into a dark hole of despair and disbelief``. (page 22)I think this is a thorn because  I don't know how it feels to lose your dad but it must hurt Esperanza's heart and mama and abuelita fainted.

]]> 2022-03-04 21:07:41 UTC https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078638349 Benji Ayala https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078638420 A thorn for Esperanza is their house catching on fire and having to go to California. It’s a thorn for her because she lost her house and her grapevine- yard. Esperanza waking up to mama yelling at Esperanza wake up the
House is on fire!page 40)

]]> 2022-03-04 21:07:45 UTC https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078638420 Avery https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078638472 Some thorns for Esperanza are sadly her papa was murdered by some on. ( page 24 ) Everyone thinks it was either the bandits or Tio Luis and Tio Marco. What I think is that it was Tio Luis and Tio Marco because Tio Luis has alway wanted the house so that means he could have paid the bandits to kill papa. ( Tio Luis and Tio Marco are actually papa's step brothers )]]> 2022-03-04 21:07:50 UTC https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078638472 Reese Coleman https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078639288 There are lots and lots of thorns in Esperanza Rising. One of them is that mama is burning hot and unresponsive.pg#155 “She has valley fever.” This is a thorn because if mama died Esperanza would have no parents.

]]> 2022-03-04 21:08:41 UTC https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078639288 kaily tergo https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078639364 (pg 163) “Esperanza felt like she had failed mama in some way and wanted to make it up to her” i think that's a thorn because i think Esperanza felt sad because she felt sad and quality and sad because she felt like she lost mama.]]> 2022-03-04 21:08:47 UTC https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078639364 Jacob https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078642511  "Esperanza felt dizzy. nothing seemed real."
The house was one fire she was dizzy what was happening ]]> 2022-03-04 21:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078642511 Sean https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078644605 A thorn could be when Papa dies .  I think this because when Esperanza finds it out she starts crying a clue that she felt deprised on the inside (page 22 Wheres Papa )]]> 2022-03-04 21:15:25 UTC https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078644605 QUINN https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078646062 he doctor signaled for the men and waited until everyone was inside ‘’She has valley fever’’.

]]> 2022-03-04 21:17:09 UTC https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078646062 Bellini https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078646830 ̈When Esperanza saw their menacing faces, she wanted to run back to the safety of the camp, do laundry, clean diapers, anything but this. She wanted to tell them that her mother was sick. That she had to pay the bills. She wanted to explain to them about abuelita and how she had to find a way to get money to her so she can travel. Then maybe they'd understand why she needed her job.̈  (page 200) this a thorn because she didn't want the strike to happen because she needs her job so she can get the money to pay the bills and give some money for abuelita because if she did work they might not have enough money and have to go back to  aguascalientes. She would also have to 
go to boarding school.


]]> 2022-03-04 21:18:06 UTC https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078646830 Yvonne https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078648163 Esperanza’s papá died, mamá fainted, Esperanza felt her heart drop, her first breath of grief grew into a tormented cry. She fell to her knees and sank into a dark hole of despair and disbelief. (thorn) (p.g 22)]]> 2022-03-04 21:19:38 UTC https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078648163 Quinn https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078657609 She opened her eyes’’ Esperanza! Wake up’’ screamed mama. ‘’The house is on fire’’ the roof over their head was now gone.]]> 2022-03-04 21:32:00 UTC https://padlet.com/pellisstudentteacher/4dnf0il9l9gmg773/wish/2078657609