https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e en-us 2017-03-27 02:27:36 UTC 2025-10-07 09:11:13 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162690641 A difference between opinion and action

Be careful. The original meaning is not a contrast between opinion and action. Both 'opinion' and 'action' are two parts of the same thing, not a contrast. 


]]> 2017-03-27 03:38:00 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162690641 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162690642 2017-03-27 03:38:00 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162690642 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162691043
This is good, but it's incomplete. You're missing some key elements of the original. ]]> 2017-03-27 03:41:07 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162691043 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162691086 'A distinct viewpoint' is a nice try, but it's not the same thing as a 'climate of opinion'. A 'climate' includes a wide range of people, whereas 'a distinct viewpoint' may suggest just one person. 'Scope of behaviour' is a lovely paraphrase of 'range of action'. ]]> 2017-03-27 03:41:29 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162691086 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162691170 Good stuff. Just a few small things: 'view' should be plural.]]> 2017-03-27 03:42:11 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162691170 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162691273 This is a very good try. There is, however, one problem here. In the original, there is no contrast between 'the views' and 'the scope of movement' but in your paraphrase, it looks like there is a contrast. 'The climate which has many differences in views and scope of action'. 'Scope of movement' isn't really the same thing as 'scope of action'.  ]]> 2017-03-27 03:43:00 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162691273 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162691306 I don't think you have paraphrased enough here. The structure is the same as the original: the only difference is 'ethos'. How about the following: 'A vast difference in views...']]> 2017-03-27 03:43:17 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162691306 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162691387 Be careful not to change the meaning. The original has nothing to do with the weather. 'About the climate' means, 'about the typical type of weather'. 'Climate' is being used in a different way here, to mean 'the general view' or 'the common opinion'.

]]> 2017-03-27 03:44:14 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162691387 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162691556 a apparent changing opinion environment and behavior

There are some problems with the grammar here. You're missing some key prepositions. Without them, the meaning is very unclear: 'A clear change in opinions and behaviour in the environment'. ]]> 2017-03-27 03:46:13 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162691556 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162691559 3 The range and intention of their established regular

The range/breadth and strength/power of the established rulers. ]]> 2017-03-27 03:46:16 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162691559 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162691639 the range and tension of their rule
'Range' is an appropriate synonym for 'scope'. Well done. 'Tension' does not work here, though. 'Intensity' is not a synonym for 'tension' in this context. 

]]> 2017-03-27 03:47:02 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162691639 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162691739 'The rule' doesn't quite get the meaning of whose rule. 'Their rule's effective range and potency'. Pretty good.]]> 2017-03-27 03:48:16 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162691739 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162691800 3.their rule's openness and intension
Good try, but 'openness' is quite far away in meaning from 'scope'. Perhaps you could use the 'range' instead? 'Intension' has quite a different meaning from 'intensity'. I would recommend 'strength' or 'efficacy' or 'power', for example. 
4.The overworld resistance in network against imperialism
'Overworld' could just be 'global' instead. Otherwise, good job. ]]> 2017-03-27 03:48:52 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162691800 neil_gilmartin https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162691817
Sovereignty/Dominion (Empire also works here because the context is colonization, which is a form of empire-spreading).
what's an appropriate synonym for 'intensity'? St...]]> 2017-03-27 03:49:04 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162691817 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162691856 'regulation' doesn't really get the meaning of 'rule'. How about, 'their rule's range and strength'? ]]> 2017-03-27 03:49:27 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162691856 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162691957 intense power and limit of their domina

Domain or dominion. Don't forget 'the' as well. ]]> 2017-03-27 03:50:39 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162691957 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162691992 the  dormitory's range and tension
The dormitory? Doesn't that mean 'sushe'? ;-) I think you mean the 'dominion' or the 'domain'?

]]> 2017-03-27 03:51:03 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162691992 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162692130 their dominance's range and intension
Good. I think I'd re-phrase this slightly, though. 'The range and strength of their dominion/domain.' 'Intension' doesn't work as a synonym for 'intensity' in this context.  ]]> 2017-03-27 03:52:59 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162692130 https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162692211 4 a global connection net of anti-imperialistic incitement 

Good stuff. Just a few small changes: 'a globally connected net of...' or, more concise, 'a global net of...' ]]> 2017-03-27 03:54:02 UTC https://padlet.com/neil_gilmartin/4deklmbgoi4e/wish/162692211