https://padlet.com/24jyoung/4cbqzywi8dbs Thank you for giving m e feedback make sure you keep it appropriate. en-us 2018-12-07 15:03:49 UTC 2018-12-07 15:18:25 UTC hello@padlet.com 24abaylock https://padlet.com/24jyoung/4cbqzywi8dbs/wish/312259331 I thought your Vignette was very good.  Two stars that I liked a lot in your story is the amount of dialogue you have. You have a good amount of dialogue . Another star is that you describe the story really well. For example when describe who is sitting where. One wish I have for your story is to make sure you go back and read your story for any mistakes. For example there were some typos. Besides that your story was really good. ]]> 2018-12-07 15:10:10 UTC https://padlet.com/24jyoung/4cbqzywi8dbs/wish/312259331