https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt Made with swagger en-us 2018-09-05 13:13:04 UTC 2026-02-21 22:54:39 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960705 there was a few similes
semi colons 
she uesed some of the 5 senses like touch,abd taste


]]> 2019-09-18 14:13:59 UTC https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960705 https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960812 they wrote the story it in 1st person]]> 2019-09-18 14:14:07 UTC https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960812 https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960818 She did a few similes. " Autumn is like eating a hot fudge sundae", and " the inside of your mouth looks like the belly of a dead fish. 
She used many semicolons.
She used many good and descriptive words including sickening, sizzling, traipsed, daze, envision, cottony, wavering, enthusiasm, abrupt, and halt. 
Good sentence starter - in a daze
 First person
Used senses- smell, taste, etc.
Many sensory descriptors.


]]> 2019-09-18 14:14:07 UTC https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960818 https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960822 It was very descriptive, She used a lot of sensory descriptors, Dialog 
was used, And semicolons.]]> 2019-09-18 14:14:08 UTC https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960822 https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960827 The author used a lot of sensory descriptors and wrote memoir in first person.]]> 2019-09-18 14:14:08 UTC https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960827 https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960829 2019-09-18 14:14:08 UTC https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960829 https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960832 2019-09-18 14:14:09 UTC https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960832 https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960836 She used some of the 5 senses like taste, touch,  and smell
used a lot of similes and semi collins

]]> 2019-09-18 14:14:09 UTC https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960836 https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960842 Easy to read and understand, she used a simile, used a semicolon, the experience ruined s'mores for her, uses a lot of dashes, her friends weren't very helpful]]> 2019-09-18 14:14:09 UTC https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960842 https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960877 -traumatizing
-sad/ terrible
 -kind of informal 
- semicolons
-couple of similes 
-good descriptors 
-her friends were jerks
-first person]]> 2019-09-18 14:14:11 UTC https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960877 https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960884 she uses sensory descriptors such as slimy gooey fork. your mouth looks like the belly of a dead fish which is a simile. she use semicolons; her story was 6 paragraphs long. fiery inferno is a metaphor. ]]> 2019-09-18 14:14:11 UTC https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960884 https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960896 -Good description
-I don't think she cared what other people think of her, 
-she used a lot of semicolons.
-Used similes
-Written in 1st person
-Used senses, touch,taste,sight]]> 2019-09-18 14:14:12 UTC https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960896 https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960908 PAINFUL 
sensory details 
semicolons alot

]]> 2019-09-18 14:14:13 UTC https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960908 25hogej https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960933 It was very descriptive, and longer than the rest. Also, she was okay with making fun of herself. She used a lot of descriptive words and she also used some dialogue, she used semicolons as well.]]> 2019-09-18 14:14:14 UTC https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960933 https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960941 Used a lot of sensory descriptors and lot of simi collins used a lot of commas ]]> 2019-09-18 14:14:15 UTC https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960941 https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960955 she used a bunch of sensory descriptors like smells, good looks good, and tastes even better ]]> 2019-09-18 14:14:15 UTC https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960955 https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960977 SImile Mouth looks like the belly of a dead fish.
Her friend doesn't want to burn the forest
Painfully descriptive about the sound inside of her mouth and the skin in the mouth.]]> 2019-09-18 14:14:17 UTC https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960977 https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960992 2019-09-18 14:14:18 UTC https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960992 https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960999 They had a lot of sight, sound, smell, touch, taste. ]]> 2019-09-18 14:14:18 UTC https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385960999 https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385961022 2019-09-18 14:14:19 UTC https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385961022 https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385961028 she used some sensory descriptors 
kind of traumatizing
formal
little bit of similes 
semicolon


]]> 2019-09-18 14:14:20 UTC https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385961028 https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385961033 She used a lot of smimles. Also she was really sarcastic. She used a lot of simi colons. she also used sensory discriptors. Also she told a really tramatizing story.

]]> 2019-09-18 14:14:20 UTC https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385961033 https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385961061 Painfully descriptive about the hot fork and the skin
similes
semicolon sentences
describes everything possible
1st person
lots of sensory descriptors
a bit dramatic
hyphen sentences
transitions
a long, dramatic, build up backstory to the part about her mouth getting burnt
not necessarily formal
 


]]> 2019-09-18 14:14:22 UTC https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385961061 tammi_stolte https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385961086 Started off with a simile:  Autumn is like eating a hot fudge sundae.  

]]> 2019-09-18 14:14:25 UTC https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385961086 https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385961119 i noticed that she used a few sensory discrictors]]> 2019-09-18 14:14:27 UTC https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385961119 https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385961141 -Used lots of sensory descriptors
-Used semicolons
-Uses similes]]> 2019-09-18 14:14:29 UTC https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385961141 https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385961180 She described stuff very well and in depth. Also she added a lot of details. She used a lot of semicolons and had a lot of similes. She also was in first person. She also used a few metaphors.]]> 2019-09-18 14:14:33 UTC https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385961180 26dekenv https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385961363 -She uses lots of similes.
-Uses sensory descriptors
-Uses lots of dashes
-Not really formal]]> 2019-09-18 14:14:46 UTC https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385961363 https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385961967 I noticed that she had sensory descriptors, she had some sentence length problems because they were too long. I noticed that she does love S'mores because she kept mentioning it. She also used a lot of similes and semicolons.]]> 2019-09-18 14:15:29 UTC https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385961967 https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385962981 she used a lot of similes, semicolons, sensory descriptors. ]]> 2019-09-18 14:16:40 UTC https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/385962981 https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/386089119 she never eat smores again, 
she burnt her mouth when she eat the smore ]]> 2019-09-18 16:51:53 UTC https://padlet.com/tammi_stolte/4cay2glcyvbt/wish/386089119