Remake of 11B- IELTS Writing Task by Nilüfer U. J. Garcia https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha The charts summarise the weight measurements of people living in Charlestown in 1955 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. en-us 2017-12-25 12:02:19 UTC 2025-10-02 21:39:20 UTC hello@padlet.com Özge Toğrul https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217972587 The weight assement of Charlestown 2015 and 1955 divides people into five groups; Which are 20 to 29, 30 to 39, 40 to 49, 50 to 59 and 60 to 69. And shows the persentages of their weights.

When we take a look at 2015’s graph, there is an obesite increase from %0 to %10 at the people which are 20 to 39 ages. And as the people gets older, the ratios of the obesite has increases rapidly from %25 to %60. The number of people which has the ideal weight also decreases from %80 to %10. But the ratios of overweight people firstly growes and then falls. Number of the people who are underweight is too less.

The majority of the people in the 1955’s graph are at ideal weights. There is nearly no obese and also the numbers of overweight people are low too. But the persentages of overweight people are higher than %50 which is too much than it has to be at the youngest and the oldest ranges.

 ]]> 2017-12-25 12:08:47 UTC https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217972587 Melike Elif Gürsoy https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217972994 This two graphs show us people's weight assessments between the 1955-2015 years. Obese people hit 60% in 2015 between 60-69 ages. This rate is too high for year 1955. Because the majority of the people in 1955 have ideal weight. The ratio of obese people are quite low in 1955. Even the people who are under 40 there aren't any obese people.
In 1955, people were getting underweight after the age 49. On the other hand in 2015 people are getting obese as they grew older and the ratio of the people who are underweight is ]]> 2017-12-25 12:24:17 UTC https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217972994 Zeynep Kurtpinar https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973060 These charts show us the weigh asessment of inhabitants of Charlestown in 1955 and 2015. The fact that obesity was not common in 1955 as it is in 2015 can be observed from these graphics. Also it can be stated that, since obesity was only seen after the age of 40 in 1955, there was such an increase of the ratio in 2015. In 1955 the highest ratio of obesity was seen at the age between 50 - 59 with 10%. However, in 2015 even in between the age of 30 - 39 the ratio is higher than the highest ratio of 1955 and it even gets higher and higher as the age gets older.]]> 2017-12-25 12:27:50 UTC https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973060 Sude Birlik https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973062 When we look at the two charts, there are big differences. because in 1955, obesity is a little weaker. In 2015, the weakness is less and the obesity is quite increased. In 1955 almost everyone was at the ideal weight, but in 2015, this rate has decreased too much. In 1955 weakness was more problematic, but in 2015, obesity became a problem. In 1955, this figure increased in 2015 when no one was obese at 20 years of age. In 1955, obesity started at the age of 40, while in 2015 it started at the age of 20. In 1955, weakness was highest among those aged 60-69. but in 2015, obesity was highest in those aged 60-69 years.

]]> 2017-12-25 12:27:55 UTC https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973062 Mertcan Kahveci https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973215 In 1955 people's health is (was)  better than in 2015 because the chart showes ( weight of people in 1955 and 2015. In 1955 almost there is no obese person who is 20 between and 39 years old. However in 2015 increase number of obese people in this ages. In 1955 obesity started to appear itself  in 40 ages. Percantage of people who obese is about 5. On the other hand in 2015 this percantage appear in 30 ages, in 40 ages it is about 20 percent. Although in 2015 half of the people are obesity for plus 50 ages, in 1955 it is only 10 percent.]]> 2017-12-25 12:34:58 UTC https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973215 Mertcan Kahveci https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973232 In 1955 people's health is better than in 2015 because the chart showes weight of people in 1955 and 2015. In 1955 almost there is no obese person who is 20 between and 39 years old. However in 2015 increase number of obese people in this ages. In 1955 obesity started to appear itself  in 40 ages. Percantage of people who obese is about 5. On the other hand in 2015 this percantage appear in 30 ages, in 40 ages it is about 20 percent. Although in 2015 half of the people are obesity for plus 50 ages, in 1955 it is only 10 percent.]]> 2017-12-25 12:35:32 UTC https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973232 Bahar Ergene https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973251 There carts are showing weight averages in 1955 and 2015. According to the graphic of 1955 people were closer to their ideal weights. Average of the weight in 1955 were less than the average of 2015. As we see in these two carts obesity increased in 60 years. Even 20-29 years old people started to have obesity problem in 2015 but in 1955 almost every teenagers were in their ideal weights. High percantage of older people who were 40 and over had obesity problem in 2015. However number of the underweight people decreased in 2015 as well as obesity were in increment in that time. ]]> 2017-12-25 12:36:27 UTC https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973251 Ece Başyazıcı https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973374 Charts illustrate weight assessments of inhabitants of Charlestown 1955 and 2015. In 1955, people who had ideal kilos were predominated in every age group. However, you could see nearly %25-%35 percent of underweight people in every age range. Overweight people's ratio was significantly rose when ages became 30-39. Altough, there were no obese people who were age of 20-29 and 30-39. In 2015, lots of age ranges were on their ideal kilos except the age range of 60-69. Being underweight was not a common thing between the people who are 30 or over. Moreover, Being underweight suddenly dropped  from the age of 29 to 60. Ratio of overweight people's remained steady in age ranges of 30-39 and 40-49 Obese people's amounts were increasing as the people gets older. Ratio of obesity reached a peak in the 60-69 age range. 

]]> 2017-12-25 12:44:22 UTC https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973374 Hülya Arslan https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973393 The graphs gives information about weight assessment of inhabitants of Charlestown between 1955 to 2015. It shows how the people weight assessment has changed in last 60 years. As we can see in 1995 the majority of people was ideal. In 1995 almost nobody was obese but in 2015 it increased especially between the ages 60 to 69. In 1995 people from 20 to 29 and 30 to 39 there were no obese people. Also overweight ratio is low. In 2015 we can see the amount of people who ideal has decreased. We can say from tha chart, there is a decrease about underweight people. In conclusion, in the last 60 years the number of obese people has increased.]]> 2017-12-25 12:45:07 UTC https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973393 EMRE GÖÇENLER https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973438 Acording to the chart which is about Charlestown’s weight statistics, there is an unbalanced table on charts in 2015. Despite the data of 2015, in 1955 we can see more stabilized graphics between the columns. Eventhough 1955 seems much more stabilized up to 2015, it also has some conflict endover 40s. As we can see, while there were only three groups of people such as; underweight, ideal and overweight people; which makes totally 3 at the bellow 40s in 1955. However, in 2015 there are 4 groups of people on charts in every year range from early 20s to end of 60s.]]> 2017-12-25 12:47:11 UTC https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973438 Begüm Yaman https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973464 2017-12-25 12:48:29 UTC https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973464 Efe Büyükarslan https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973512 The graphs show that weight assessment of inhabitants of Charlestown divided by age range. From weight assessment of inhabitants of Charlestown 1955, there were some obese people between 40-70 ages and there weren't any obese people from ages 20 to 40 but if we look other graph, it shows us there were obese people from ages 20 to 70. Also in 2015, percentage of obese people increased according to graph that indicates 1955. 

On the other hand, ratios of underweight people fell down in each age group from 1955 and on, especially between 60-69 ages people. In 1955, a bit more than %30 of between 60-69 ages people were underweight people. Despite that in 2015 the percentage decreased to %10.]]> 2017-12-25 12:51:27 UTC https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973512 Berfu 1/2 berfu_erisir https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973533 2017-12-25 12:52:39 UTC https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973533 Berfu 2/2 berfu_erisir https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973554 2017-12-25 12:53:23 UTC https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973554 Levent Baran Kabas https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973567 We have two research data from 1955 and 2015. Both surveys show how the population is in a certain age range. We can see in 1955 that people have ideal body centering regardless of whether they are young, middle or advanced age, but in 2015, obesity has shown us that age is increasing with age. But we would have seen that weakness was very common in 1955 if events were to be looked at all in reverse. Weakness in 2015 is not very common, but in 2015 people are obese.]]> 2017-12-25 12:53:55 UTC https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973567 Yağmur Karabacak https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973583
The charts analyse the weight measurement of people in Charlestown in 1955 and 2015. When we look those charts we see that in 1955 nobody was obese between 20-29 and 30-39 age ranges.However ,in 2015 the rate of obesity has increased in all ages.Also the chart of 1955 show that many people were ideal weight in all ages but in 2015 this ratio was getting less and almost nobody was ideal weight between 60-69. According to the data of 1955 , many people were underweight especially who are between 60 and 69 .On the other hand ,in 2015 underweight people’s ratio has decreased prominently. 
 

]]> 2017-12-25 12:54:46 UTC https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973583 Arkın GÜVENN https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973597 These graphs are showing weight avarages beteeen ages 1955 and 2015 in Charlestown. In 2015, 20-29 ages are %70 idealweight and ıt is same as 1955 carts. About 30-39 ages, In 2015 idealweight decrease to %50 on the other hand In 1955 It was still same as before. About 40-49 ages 2015 carts shows us idealweight avarage going on same however In 1955 one It decrrased to %50. 60-69 ages idealweight false to %10 and other graphs went down to %40 so after all that we can say idealweight decrease when ages gets older. ]]> 2017-12-25 12:55:11 UTC https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973597 Fatih Çiv https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973745 2017-12-25 13:00:20 UTC https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973745 Mustafa Gümüş https://padlet.com/Nilufer_UJG/4byxc2fcfuha/wish/217973783
There is a two graphs about weights of people that live in Charlestown at 2015 and 1955. When we look to 1955’s, at 20-29 ages, there is a lot of ideal weight people. At 30-39, number of overweight people is increased. When we look 40-49 ages, obese people became more than 30-39 ages. At 50-59, thats continues same. At the end(60-69), number of underweight people is become the most. 
When we look to second graph (2015), the differance from 55’s, there is a little bit obese people at 2015 in 20-29 ages.  But 30-39 ages, number of obese and overweight people is increased. İn 40-49 ages, thats continues to grow. At 50-59 ages, obese people is almost %50. At the end(60-69), number of obese people is at the top(%60).
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