My major is Psychology and minor in Sociology . I would like to work in high school as a psychologist. Because I always want to be that person that I was needed when I was younger . I want to accept the students the way they are , support them , always listening to them and make them more aware of what happening. To deal with their daily struggles, I always believe that if I can help them earlier that will save them from anything especially themselves. Helping people mentally and emotionally is the reason that pushing me through this journey ! I believe that I can do my job the way I dreamed about and I’m sure that I will be that cool psychologist. 

The second reason is population size , the smaller population the easier to manage and follow the rules and that’s one of the most common reasons for safety. Also good salary depends on the population size. The smaller the higher. So good salary make people always grateful . grateful means being okay about what they don’t have yet . And always be happy and hard working. 

The third reason is trade relations such as gas . Qatar sell gas to other countries especially Japan and Europe recently and that growing the economy faster and relationships with other countries as well .

Second, My Major is media I chose this major because I love media, and I would like to work in the media in the future. 

  Original Sentence #2:   
 I never make mistakes!

- 50 % of the students that had the driving exam passed.

  Original Sentence #2:   
 I never make mistakes!

- Mistakes are never made by me!

Among the pupils, just fifty percent passed the driving exam.

very good paraphrase!


 Original Sentence #2:   
 I never make mistakes!

  I never make errors.    
(only one word changed???)

  Original Sentence #2:   
 I never make mistakes!
Inaccuracy is never made by me .

2 - I never caused blunders .

      In his article, _____________   discusses the advantages and disadvantages of

________                      . He starts with some benefits of living in the city. First, ______________  _____________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________On the other hand/However,  the writer argues that there are some drawbacks to living in the city.  For example, _________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ 

In Muller’s article, he discusses the advantages of the exam . First, he believes that the exam pushes the students to have more knowledge and an important facts , and prepare them for the life. Second, he thinks that the exam make the students realize what they need to improve their knowledge and grades. Lastly, the exam is level up the students confidence when they pass the exam.

On the other hand, Pattinson argues the disadvantages of the exam. First, the students will always compare themselves to others and make them feel bad because of the grades. Also, she thinks that is unfair to testing the students skills and abilities in two hours. Finally, grades can affected by stress and anxiety. 

After reading both articles , I believe that the exam is good only if the questions are direct and clear so the answers will be comprehensive to ensure that the students understand everything that was said in the course.

Disadvantage:

2- Having arts, music , is useful aesthetically important as well.

3- Studying art and music develops abilities and unloading energy.

Disadvantages:
1- great stress from math and science . 
2- some parents refuse musical jobs 
3- some prefer music and arts because they are not able to understand science and mathematics .

Added to that, junk food don't have vitamins and nutrients. It leads to memory problems

 

In Muller's article, he discusses the advantages. First, he said exams should be competitive because that’s how life is. Second, exams tell students how much they know and what they still need to work on. Lastly, exams increase students confidence.

 

On the other hand, Pattinson argues about disadvantages for exams. First, she said bad results can lead to a feeling of failure. Second, exams are an unfair system of evaluation.
Finally, she said results can be affected by anxiety.

After reading both articles, I think that exams may or may not be beneficial for students. This forces students to commit to something important and create a friendly competition among them. In contrast, it is not useful if the students did not pass the exam or receive a weak grade. This may affect their mental and physical health conditions

Pros:
1- Academic Opportunity: more advanced classes, specializes in STEM field 
2- Langauge: students have the opportunity to learn new language and work on improving their English 
3- Teacher Qualification:  they have better experience and certified

Cons: 
1-  cost : some people could not afford the money to be in private schools/ too expensive
2-  Campus commitment: students may have to stay a little bit longer 
3- Admissions: private schools tend to have higher admission standards so it is more difficult to get accepted

Step 1: Write Topic Sentence = introduce solution 1 + restate problem: 

Step 2: Explain - wrte a sentence(s) that explains  how solution works - Supporting detail (s)

Step 3: Give an example (fact/logic)

Step 4: Closing sentence – what is the outcome/effect of solution

•       Re-state Thesis: rewrite problem and 3 solutions in a slightly different way (paraphrase thesis from introduction)

•       Summary of body paragraphs 1, 2, & 3

Final Thought / Comment