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         <title>10922 홍서연</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>I have an unhealthy habit. I do not exercise much, and it is bad for my health, When I don't move, I feel weak and tired. From now on, I will go for a walk every day for at least thirty minutes. I will also stretch in the morning. On weekends, I will play sports like basketball and badminton with my friends. Health is important to me. I will do my best to build a healthy habit.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>10918 전한별</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p> I have an unhealthy habit. I go to bed too late. If I don't sleep enough, I feel tired and can't focus well in class. From now on, I will go to bed before 11 p.m. Also, I will stop using my phone at least 30 minutes before bedtime. Instead, I will read a book at night. It will help me relax and sleep well. I promise I will get enough sleep every night.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>10920-허소윤</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><strong><em><mark>I have an unhealthy habit. I go to bed too late. If I don't sleep enough, I feel tired and can't focus well in class. From now on, I will go to bed before 11 p.m. Also, I will stop using my phone at least 30 minutes before bedtime. Instead, I will read a book at night. It will help me relax and sleep well. I promise I will get enough sleep every night.</mark></em></strong></p>]]></description>
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         <title>10912-오선민</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>I have an unhealthy habit. I go to bed too late. If I don't sleep enough, I feel tired and can't focus well in class. From now on, I will go to bed before 12 p.m. Also, I will stop using my phone at least 30 minutes before bedtime. Instead, I will read a book at night. It will help me relax and sleep well. I promise I will get enough sleep every night.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>10909-박소율</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>I have an unhealthy habit. I go to bed too late.  I go back to home 10 p.m. and I do my homework and take a shower ,so I go to bed 1 a.m. If I don't sleep enough, I feel tired and can't focus well in class. From now on, I will go to bed before 12 p.m. Also I will stop using the I-pad at least 30 minutes before bedtime. Instead I will write a novel at night. It will help me relax. I promise I will get more 7 hours sleep every night.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>10916 이연우</title>
         <author>25kh317</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>I have an unhealthy  habit.I drink too much soda, and it is not good for me. Soda has too much sugar, and it can harm my body. From now on, I will try to change my habit. First, I will drink more water every day. Second, I will keep a water bottle with me, so I can drink water more often. Finally , I will do my best to make better choices.</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>I have an unhealthy habit. I go to bed too late. If I don't sleep enough, i feel tired and can not focus well in class. From now on, i will go to bed before 12 p.m. Also, I will stop using my phone at least 15 minutes before bedtime. Instead, i will listen to music at night. It will help me relax and sleep well. I promise i will get enough sleep every night.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>10911 심서현</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>A bad habit I have?</p><p>1.Let's think about whether it's okay or not to do rhythmic gymnastics, and if it doesn't work, I try to force myself to do it even though I know that I'm going to get hurt. Before we do this, let's think about whether it's okay to do it</p>]]></description>
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         <title>10913 유승엽</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>I have an unhealthy habit.</p><p>I go to bed too late.</p><p>If I don't sleep enough, I feel tired and can't focus well in class.</p><p>From now on, I will go to bed before 11 p.m.</p><p>Also I will stop using my phone at least 30 minutes before bedtime.</p><p>Instead, I will read a book at night.</p><p>It will help me relax and sleep well.</p><p>I promise I will get enough sleep every night.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>10905 김온유</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>I have an unhealthy habit. I go to bed too late. If I don't sleep enough, I feel tired and can't focus well in class. From now on, I will go to bed before 11 p.m. Also, I will stop using my phone at least 30 minutes before bedtime. Instead, I will read a book at night. It will help me relax and sleep well. I promise <em> will get enough sleep every night</em></p>]]></description>
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         <title>10921 허시온</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>I have an unhealthy habit. I go to bed and wake up late. I feel sleepy and tired in class. Also, I can't study well. From now on, I will go to bed early. I will sleep at least 8 hours. I will stop watching videos before sleeping, too. And, I will listen to music before bedtime. It will help me to sleep well. I promise I will sleep enough and get up early everyday.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>10914 이서준</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>I have an unhealthy habit. I go to bed too late. If I do not sleep enough, I feel tired and can't focus well in class. From now on, I will go to bed before 11 p.m. Also, I will stop using my phone at least 25 minutes before bedtime. Instead, I will read a book at night,</p><p>It will help me relax and sleep well. I promise I will get enough sleep every night</p>]]></description>
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         <title>10906 김지아</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>I have an unhealthy habit. I go to bed too late. And everyday I feel sleepy during class. From now on, I will go to bed before 11:30 p.m. Also, I will not use my phone at least 10 minutes before bedtime. And I will lie down in my bed at least 20 minutes before bedtime. I will do my best to go to bad early.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>조상욱10919</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>I have an unhealthy habit. I drink too much soda, and it is not good for me. Soda has too much sugar, and it can  harm my body. From now on, I will try to change my habit. First, I will drink more every day. Second, I will keep a water bottle  with me, so I can drink water more often. Finally, I will choose juice or tea instead of soda. These changes will help me stay healthy. I will do my best to make better choices</p>]]></description>
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         <title>10903-김가온</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>I have an unhealthy habit. I drink too much cola, and it is not good for me. So, I will tell you about when I drink too much cola.</p><p> First, cola has too much sugar, and it can harm for my body. Such as, bone and teeth. Second, If I drink too much cola and then I can get diabetes. Therefore, I will reduce drink cola and drink more water every day. It can help me stay healthy.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>10902 김가빈</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>I have an unhealthy habit. I go to bed too late. If don't sleep enough, I feel tired and can't focus well in class. From now on, I will go to bed before 11 p.m. Also, I will stop using my phone at least 30 minutes before bedtime. Instead, I will read a book at night.</p><p>It will help me relax and sleep well. I promise I will get enough sleep every night.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>10915 이소민</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>i have an unhealthy habit. i don't exercise much, and it's not good for my health. when i don't exercise, i feel tired and thirsty. sometimes i also get headaches. from now on, i will ride my bike for 20 minutes every 3 days. also, i will walk for 30 minutes every day. health is very important to me. i will do my best to build a healthy habit.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>10904 기므도영</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>I have an unhealthy habit.</p><p>I eat too much sweet food.</p><p>I usually eat jelly fourth  a week.</p><p>It is not good for my healthy.</p><p>Sometimes, I get a toothache when I eat sweet food.</p><p>From now on, I will reduce eating jelly.</p><p>I will also eat more vegetable instead of jelly.</p><p>On weekends, I will help my family cook healthy meals.</p><p>I will try hard to become healthier every day.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>10926 허동혁</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>l have an unhealthy habit. l go to bed tpp late. lf l do not sleepenough</p>]]></description>
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         <title>10925-서윤호</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>I have an unhealthy habit.I go to bed too late.If i don't sleep enough,i feel tired and can't focus well in study and P.E.From now on, i well go to before 11 p.m.Also, i will stop using my phone at least 30 minutes before bedtime.Instead, i will look back on what happened during the <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="http://day.It">day.It</a> will help me makes reflect and grow.I promise i will get enough sleep every night.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>10924 윤예린</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Almost everyone has each bad habit. and also, I have a bad habit that looking at the screen for a long time. I should use these methods to get rid of habits. This habit made my eyes bad and my parents hated it.</p><p>So now I'm trying to get rid of this habit. First, I will adjust the time my phone. and It care my sight. Second, I exercise to improve my sight. I'm going to use these methods to get rid of habits</p>]]></description>
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         <title>10917-장지원</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>I have an unhealthy habit. I don't drink enough water and exercise, I'll be very dizzy. Also, I will not be tall. From now on, I'll drink water every break time. Also, I'll bring my water bottle everyday. Instead, drinking smoothie or soda, I'll drink water. If I drink water enough water, my skin will get better. I promise that I'll try hard to drink water regulary.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>10901 - 권소연</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>I have an unhealthy habit. I go sleep too late. If I don't take enough sleep, I feel tired and I can't focus well in class. From now on, I will finish my homework before I go to bed, and I will stop using my phone before I sleep. Also I will try to go to bed before 11:30. It will help my mind clearer and reduces my fatigue a lot. I promise I will try to keep this habit.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>10908 박민하</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>I have an unhealthy habit. I eat too much fast food. </p><p>I eat fast food fourth a week. I eat Mala soup, Yeop tteok, hamburger, and chicken. Sometimes, I get a stomachache. when I eat fast food. From now on, I will eat more healthy meals. And I will also eat less fast food. Finally, I'll eat more vegetables instead of fast food. I will try hard to become healthier every day.</p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-16 02:01:49 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>10920</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><strong><em><mark>I have an unhealthy habit. I go to bed too late. If I don't sleep enough, I feel tired and can't focus well in class. From now on, I will go to bed before 11 p.m. Also, I will stop using my phone at least 30 minutes before bedtime. Instead, I will read a book at night. It will help me relax and sleep well. I promise I will get enough sleep every night.</mark></em></strong></p>]]></description>
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