DALN (G1) by Scott DeLoach https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p en-us 2025-09-10 12:36:26 UTC 2025-09-10 13:49:24 UTC hello@padlet.com Name scottddeloach https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578176923 Answer

]]> 2025-09-10 13:20:52 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578176923 Devon https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578182054 2025-09-10 13:23:50 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578182054 Jared https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578183606 2025-09-10 13:24:41 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578183606 Jared https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578184367 2025-09-10 13:25:07 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578184367 Harry https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578186986 2025-09-10 13:26:24 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578186986 Kj https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578187029 2025-09-10 13:26:25 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578187029 Joshua https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578187623 Comp. 1 literacy narrative (revised).docx


]]> 2025-09-10 13:26:47 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578187623 https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578187798 2025-09-10 13:26:54 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578187798 Literacy Narrative Draft.docx https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578188242 2025-09-10 13:27:10 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578188242 Jared https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578190714 They both start with a problem/issue and end with a lesson being learned.

]]> 2025-09-10 13:28:37 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578190714 Kj https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578191305 One thing that was important is when the writer was younger, they hated reading and over time they found a love for it.

]]> 2025-09-10 13:28:51 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578191305 Jerry https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578192618 Everyone's perspective is bound to be different, and everyone is going to describe their story differently than everyone else.

]]> 2025-09-10 13:29:29 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578192618 Kj https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578193262 The writer gave me a backstory/lore on his upbring in the reading/writting world.


]]> 2025-09-10 13:29:52 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578193262 Joshua https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578193960 In the beginning he tried a new sport not sure of he'd like it.In the end he fell in love with football.

]]> 2025-09-10 13:30:17 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578193960 Julyan https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578194056 2025-09-10 13:30:20 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578194056 anjeanette https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578194294 2025-09-10 13:30:29 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578194294 Julyan https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578194482 2025-09-10 13:30:36 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578194482 Jared https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578194811 The writers keep switching between the past and present and how they differ from each other.

]]> 2025-09-10 13:30:48 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578194811 Joshua https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578194948 They gave their personal and statistical insights

]]> 2025-09-10 13:30:53 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578194948 Jaiden https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578195485 https://www.thedaln.org/#/detail/175b868c-54db-490b-9130-0f6e56228e50

]]> 2025-09-10 13:31:12 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578195485 Jenny https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578195924 1) Digital Archive of Literacy Narratives

2) Sports Journalism-My Amateur Experience.docx


]]> 2025-09-10 13:31:26 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578195924 devon https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578196787 I think thew most important part of these has to be the issue, it really puts emotion into the story and makes you actually want to read

]]> 2025-09-10 13:31:52 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578196787 https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578196914 Started with loving video games to being grateful for when he was able to play it, And all that it taught him

]]> 2025-09-10 13:31:56 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578196914 Jared https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578197236 Bad grammar, citing sources (then its not your writing), writing from another persons perspective

]]> 2025-09-10 13:32:06 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578197236 This character had no music literacy or taste when it came to just getting into that world it didn't mean anything to him until he heard about J. Cole https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578197586 2025-09-10 13:32:18 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578197586 Harry https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578197616 The writer in the beginning talks about how he found the love of football to realizing that now the game of football has changed

]]> 2025-09-10 13:32:20 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578197616 Avien https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578197737 2025-09-10 13:32:24 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578197737 anj https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578197861 The trust in the beginning and the perserverance at the end

]]> 2025-09-10 13:32:29 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578197861 Julyan https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578198103 When the author was a child, they used to pretend to be a teacher in a class full of eager students, and in the end, it was about the importance of education.

]]> 2025-09-10 13:32:38 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578198103 Devon https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578198245 They put problems into their narrative and they give you steps and tell you how they overcame it.

]]> 2025-09-10 13:32:45 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578198245 Kj https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578198247 An inappropriate addition to literature would be a graph chart/ satistic sheet.

]]> 2025-09-10 13:32:45 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578198247 anj https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578198951 The writer retold a classic story with a twist & new ending

]]> 2025-09-10 13:33:08 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578198951 Jeriel https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578199169 2025-09-10 13:33:16 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578199169 https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578199278 2025-09-10 13:33:20 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578199278 Julyan https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578199317 Reading can be amazing and horrible, depending on the circumstances of your situation.

]]> 2025-09-10 13:33:21 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578199317 https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578199362 The way he was explaining how much fun he was having playing the game at such a young age. Reminds me of myself

]]> 2025-09-10 13:33:24 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578199362 Joshua https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578199604 Stat graphs

]]> 2025-09-10 13:33:34 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578199604 Kj https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578199974 2025-09-10 13:33:44 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578199974 Harry https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578200079 the writer was talking about different coverages

]]> 2025-09-10 13:33:47 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578200079 Jerry https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578200130 they have that aspect of, theres's always that one thing you want to know .

]]> 2025-09-10 13:33:48 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578200130 Julyan https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578200162 Talk about a relatable topic or modern themes.

]]> 2025-09-10 13:33:50 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578200162 Julyan https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578200949 Political topics

]]> 2025-09-10 13:34:13 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578200949 Antonio https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578201330 2025-09-10 13:34:23 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578201330 Devon https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578201470 I'd have to agree with Jared and say citing sources because if you cited sources then everyone is going to know it's not yours and that's the whole point of it.

]]> 2025-09-10 13:34:28 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578201470 Anj https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578201568 anything off topic from what was initially established that adds nothing to the general message

]]> 2025-09-10 13:34:31 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578201568 Harry https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578201771 lockeroom experiences

]]> 2025-09-10 13:34:38 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578201771 Kj https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578202847 The writer feeds/gives out alot of infromation.

]]> 2025-09-10 13:35:13 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578202847 Jerry https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578202921 Going off topic and not focusing on the narrative they're trying to write.

]]> 2025-09-10 13:35:16 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578202921 Jaiden https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578203224 I feel like in both of the writings that I read I feel like in the beginning there is a problem and throughout the story and until the end it is them figuring out how to solve that problem.

]]> 2025-09-10 13:35:27 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578203224 Kj https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578203621 The mixture of facts and a backstory.

]]> 2025-09-10 13:35:39 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578203621 Joseph https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578203811 2025-09-10 13:35:46 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578203811 anj https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578204650 2025-09-10 13:36:12 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578204650 Jaiden https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578204674 there is always the question of what will they do next when reading these storys.

]]> 2025-09-10 13:36:13 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578204674 Kj https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578205744 Something inappropriate for this text would be facts and info on birds

]]> 2025-09-10 13:36:45 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578205744 Jaiden https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578205980 no lesson learned, boring story

]]> 2025-09-10 13:36:54 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578205980 https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578206462 Crazy over games.

]]> 2025-09-10 13:37:12 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578206462 Alora https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578206700 2025-09-10 13:37:18 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578206700 anj https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578208379 at the start the writer was basically perfect in school and by the end they experienced failure and learned it's natural to make mistakes

]]> 2025-09-10 13:38:07 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578208379 Avien https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578209499 They both start with a desire to learn something, and they end accepting why things the way they are.

]]> 2025-09-10 13:38:42 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578209499 anj https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578210145 they shared their thoughts and feelings throughout the story

]]> 2025-09-10 13:38:54 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578210145 anj https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578212066 A random image of nothing relevant to the narrative.

]]> 2025-09-10 13:39:57 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578212066 Avien https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578212581 A story with no correlation, all over the place, with no lesson.

]]> 2025-09-10 13:40:05 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578212581 Joseph https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578212682 they end up going answering/ summing up there claim/ reason

]]> 2025-09-10 13:40:08 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578212682 Avien https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578215121 Have climaxes and high points, and a background to their stories

]]> 2025-09-10 13:41:28 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578215121 Antonio https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578215792 the beginning talks about the contacts about basketball.

the art and passion to play basketball it looks right when you play it

at the end it talks about people helping him through basketball

]]> 2025-09-10 13:41:50 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578215792 Joseph https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578216811 the writer talks about the what football looks like in a spectator view compared to on field its very different

]]> 2025-09-10 13:42:14 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578216811 Antonio https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578218390 "4.2" GPA in my mind he is smart

]]> 2025-09-10 13:43:00 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578218390 Joseph https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578218736 bias towards something.

]]> 2025-09-10 13:43:11 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578218736 Jenny https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578219298 1) The kept talking about their sad past and their achievements.

2) He talked about his love for sports and how it shaped his relationship with his dad.

]]> 2025-09-10 13:43:30 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578219298 "Love Yours" is a song by J. Cole, and it's my favorite track by him. The message behind the song can have a significant impact on many people. It encourages listeners to let go of wealth and materialistic values. To me, the essence of the song is that true happiness comes from appreciating and loving what you have in your life right now. https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578219766 2025-09-10 13:43:46 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578219766 Jenny https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578220521 Spelling errors, punctuation errors, and graphs/stats

]]> 2025-09-10 13:44:14 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578220521 Alora https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578222906 They both started off on how they began soccer and the ending were the lessons and teamwork skills the sport taught them.

]]> 2025-09-10 13:45:32 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578222906 Jenny https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578224442 In the beginning they start with an issue or something they struggled with, and how they overcame it.

]]> 2025-09-10 13:46:16 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578224442 Alora https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578225564 They gave personal scenarios when playing their sport and how soccer impacted them throughout their life.

]]> 2025-09-10 13:46:53 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578225564 Antonio https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578229996 bias

]]> 2025-09-10 13:49:23 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578229996 Alora https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578230290 Punctuation mistakes

]]> 2025-09-10 13:49:34 UTC https://padlet.com/scottddeloach/48l81yf78p0lvt1p/wish/3578230290