https://padlet.com/cmarks4/4819x9lg8uur There are sentences from various students' essays. Comment on at least two of them by labeling the mistake and retyping them and improving any mistakes. Mistakes may include run-ons, punctuation, wordiness, casual language, not writing objectively, etc. en-us 2018-02-25 22:00:39 UTC 2018-02-28 15:06:33 UTC hello@padlet.com cmarks4 https://padlet.com/cmarks4/4819x9lg8uur/wish/235154822 Between the stories, the Philae Lander is the best thing to use when examining something.]]> 2018-02-25 22:03:59 UTC https://padlet.com/cmarks4/4819x9lg8uur/wish/235154822 cmarks4 https://padlet.com/cmarks4/4819x9lg8uur/wish/235155168 Thesis- I believe the Philae lander was more successful.]]> 2018-02-25 22:07:23 UTC https://padlet.com/cmarks4/4819x9lg8uur/wish/235155168 cmarks4 https://padlet.com/cmarks4/4819x9lg8uur/wish/235155310 The two passages have two missions and the two missions one mission is that they were trying to give valuable information about the origins of our solar system. The second mission was that they would improve Orion's design and reduce risks to future mission crews.]]> 2018-02-25 22:08:46 UTC https://padlet.com/cmarks4/4819x9lg8uur/wish/235155310 cmarks4 https://padlet.com/cmarks4/4819x9lg8uur/wish/235155786 All in all, the Orion was better because it could sent people to Mars and it went further than any other spacecraft in decades.]]> 2018-02-25 22:12:27 UTC https://padlet.com/cmarks4/4819x9lg8uur/wish/235155786 cmarks4 https://padlet.com/cmarks4/4819x9lg8uur/wish/235156256 In passage's of Cameron keady passage "Excerpt from A Success in Space" and "Excerpt from America's New Spacecraft" is the purpose of the first passage is that it could give you research good information about the solar system.]]> 2018-02-25 22:16:48 UTC https://padlet.com/cmarks4/4819x9lg8uur/wish/235156256