Writing Workshop Week (2) by Rebecca Harris https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_2 (1st) Plan (2nd) Accomplishments (3rd) Comment on 5 classmate posts en-us 2022-10-31 13:37:48 UTC 2022-11-13 22:06:41 UTC hello@padlet.com Dr. Harris --- EXAMPLE dr_rebeccalharris https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_2/wish/2363309584 Plan:
  1. More details about the current practice that my reform  is responding to.
  2. Add more support for the purpose of schooling I think is most important.
  3. Strengthen the details of my philosophy of education by adding 2 more attributes.
Accomplishments:
  1. I strengthened my research by adding 3 more sources about my reform.
  2. I developed details on the current practice my reform responds to and my reform itself.
  3. Made sure the theme of equity is clearly explained, and is threaded across each section of my essay
]]> 2022-10-31 13:37:48 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_2/wish/2363309584 Jenna Washburn https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_2/wish/2368729106 Plan:
1. Add more support to my introduction and fix any grammatical or informal writing errors.

2.  More research and add 1 or 2 more sources to help strengthen my writing in Purpose of US Edu. 

3. Add more support to how my reform will positively effect teacher practice (pedagogy) and student success. ]]> 2022-11-03 16:02:03 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_2/wish/2368729106 Workshop Week- Emily Mayhew https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_2/wish/2368733466 Plan:
- I will go through each paper and edit them so that they will eventually all fit together
- I will go through each paper and fix them by looking at Dr. Harris' comments on the rubrics 
- Fix my Purpose of Education paper and include more about historical foundations and how it relates to my reform (mental health awareness in schools)
- In my philosophy paper I will clarify how progressivism aligns with my reform and add more details to describe that

Accomplishments:
- I fixed each paper by looking at the comments on the rubric and papers. I add more information and sources where it was needed.
- For my Purpose of Education paper I included more about the historical foundation. I added a lot more information on the topic and related it to my reform.
- My Philosophy of Education paper, I explained how progressivism aligns with my reform, rather than focusing on the classroom aspect. 
- I edited all my papers so that they all flow together 


]]> 2022-11-03 16:04:36 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_2/wish/2368733466 Riley Shaw https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_2/wish/2368737553 Plan: 
1. Strengthen my work with more research. I need to add citations to some of the statements I made. 

2. Go through and revise all of my essays. Correct any errors and make them more structured.

3. Focus on Purpose of U.S Education Essay, needs a lot more research and more structure.

Accomplishments:
1. I've collected a lot more research connecting mental health awareness to school and the importance of it.

2. I went back and cleaned up certain parts of my essays that needed more structure and specificity.

3. I have a better layout for my Purpose of U.S Education essay, it flows better and I've connected the purpose of education and how it relates to my reform.]]> 2022-11-03 16:07:02 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_2/wish/2368737553 Erin Davis https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_2/wish/2368742105 - find more clarifying research for papers 2 and 3
- revise and make sure all aspects are included in paper
- Fix awkward wording and informal speech throughout the paper 
Accomplishments:
1. Finding more research gave me better ways to explain my topic
2. I looked up synonyms to words so they either were not being repeated or sounding non-collegiate
3. I was able to go back in my paper and add information. ]]> 2022-11-03 16:09:36 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_2/wish/2368742105 Sydney Greggs https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_2/wish/2368744935 Plan : 
1. I want to add more research in to back up my personal experiences. 

2. I plan to go through each section carefully and edit and correct things to strengthen my essay. 

3. I also plan to strengthen my essay by spending extra time on my Purpose of Education section and making that better.]]> 2022-11-03 16:11:19 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_2/wish/2368744935 Cody Collier https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_2/wish/2368938430 Plan:
1. Go through each section and fix sentences that are awkward to bring more clarity to each section. 

2. Go through each section and make changes to details that don't completely align with my reform.

3. Find more sources and details that support my reform from the historical foundations of education. 

Accomplishments: 
1. I went through and fixed sentences that sounded awkward to help strengthen my writing.

2. I fixed some in text citations and fixed references on the reference page to make sure they aligned with APA guidelines.

3. I added more detail to my introduction to help readers get a better understanding about my reform. ]]> 2022-11-03 18:09:38 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_2/wish/2368938430 Paul Rogerson https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_2/wish/2369223394 Plan:
1. I feel like my paper is a little repetitive with some points. I think rephrasing certain sentences, moving some topics around, and adding extra info will make the paper feel more broad.
2. I need to go back and ensure that the papers flow into each other naturally. Now they all feel like completely separate essays; if I'm going to combine them I need to make some changes to the beginning and endings of them.
3. At the beginning my reform wasn't as specific as it is now, and that can be seen in my first paper. I will essentially have to rewrite the majority of it, but I feel like the barebones of it can still be used.

Accomplishments:
1. My intro feels a lot more relevant to the rest of the paper now. I was able to keep a lot of what was already there and just rephrased certain parts to be more focused on home economics.
2. My paper flows much better now. Even aside from having to put 4 papers together, some points felt a bit stiff. I feel it reads much more naturally now.
3. I still feel like I occasionally repeat points here and there, but not to an unreasonable extent. My reform is fairly straightforward so some parts of my argument can be applied in multiple places. That being said, I have still fleshed out my argument quite a bit more.]]> 2022-11-03 23:13:55 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_2/wish/2369223394 Hunter Hale https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_2/wish/2369325350 Plan:
1. Fix grammatical and spelling errors.
2. Focus more on the current practices being implemented for my reform
3. Discuss how the reform will positively affect teacher practices and student achievement 

Accomplishments:
1. Fixed all grammatical errors
2. Did more research on current practices for my reform.
3. Added arguments for how my reform positively affected student success.]]> 2022-11-04 00:54:37 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_2/wish/2369325350 Kyle Bingham - Plan https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_2/wish/2369384943 1.) Restructure my introductions in order to maintain a logical flow between each section of my paper. 

2.) Add research that supports my reform in the purpose portion in order to better strengthen my support for the social role of schools

3.) I need to ensure my citations are properly formatted and listed properly within the references page, footnotes, and in-text citations. 


Accomplishments:

1.) I added more research for my purpose section

2.) I was able to reformat my proposal to serve as an introduction to my essay

3.) I made sure that all my citations and footnotes were correctly formatted]]> 2022-11-04 01:44:35 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_2/wish/2369384943 Jayla Green https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_2/wish/2375142225 1. Review comments made on initial drafts and rubrics. Make corrections and fix grammar mistakes.

2.Get clearer research to support my argument in papers 1 and 3 to strengthen my writing. 

3. Rewrite purpose of education paper to better fit with my reform.

4. Finish connecting all of my papers into one cohesive  essay with a proper conclusion. 

Accomplishments:

1. Made a list of the comments I need to keep in mind while rewriting and used the highlight guide to make changes.

2. Completed research for papers 1 and 3 to strengthen my reform and develop a more cohesive argument for my paper.

3. Rewrote and reread all my papers after stringing them together with clear and cohesive connecting paragraphs.

4. Corrected all grammatical errors.

]]> 2022-11-08 14:55:33 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_2/wish/2375142225 Jenna Washburn jennawashburn2021 https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_2/wish/2375817183 Accomplishments:
1.  I found more research and citations to support my claims in the purpose of US education essay.  
2.  I added more details about how my reform will positively effect teacher practice and student success. 
3.  Reviewed and made sure my format is correct for the structure of my paper. 
4. Fixed any grammatical and spelling errors throughout the paper. ]]> 2022-11-08 23:24:10 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_2/wish/2375817183 Cole Thornton https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_2/wish/2375872732 Accomplishments:
1. I went back and edited all of the previous papers to make them flow well better in the overall essay.

2. I fixed all of the citations that I wrote incorrectly. 

3. In my Philosophy of US Education paper, I rewrote a portion of it to put more emphasize on how my reform falls under the progressive philosophy.]]> 2022-11-09 00:23:55 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_2/wish/2375872732 Cole Bushee https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_2/wish/2376154554 Plan:
- Strengthen my previous papers with more connective details towards my reform
- Touch up grammatical errors and add more clarity towards my writing to make it easier to understand
- Make sure to clearly answer the essay prompts in certain areas

Accomplishments:
- I went over my previous papers and added in details to make it more clear how my research connects to my reform
- Figured it be best if I dialed back my reform from covering such a broad issue and make more informative points throughout my papers
- Overall corrected grammar and clarity throughout my other papers]]> 2022-11-09 04:04:50 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_2/wish/2376154554 Sydney Greggs - Accomplishments https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_2/wish/2376786667 1. I added more research and detail into my personal experiences .
2. I carefully edits the sections before and strengthened them.
3. I spent a lot of time editing my purpose.

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